Approved Starship The Flying Dutchman [Resubmission]

[Scourge Harz]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a Star Destroyer for Scourge Harz
• Image Source: (x)
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: (x) and (x)
• Primary Source:
  • The Flying Dutchman
  • Praefect-class Star Destroyer

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: New Imperial Order
• Affiliation: Scourge Harz , New Imperial Order
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: N/A
• Production: Unique
• Material: Durasteel hull

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Command Ship
• Length: 1,600m
• Width: 887m
• Height: 509m
• Armament: Very High
  • x50 Heavy Turbolaser Turret
  • x30 Mass Driver Cannon
  • x80 Point Defense Ion Cannon
• Defenses: Very High
  • Deflector Shields
  • Electronic Countermeasures
• Hangar Space: High
• Hangar Allocations: 10 Squadrons
  • Starfighters: 7 Squadrons
  • Support Craft: 3 Squadrons
• Maneuverability Rating: Low
• Speed Rating: Average
  • IE-10 “Event Horizon” Class Ion Engine
• Hyperdrive Class: 1.5

STANDARD FEATURES

• Standard Communications Array
• Standard Deflector Shield Generator
• Standard Hyperdrive
• Standard Ion Engines
• Standard Life Support Systems
• Standard Navigational Systems
• Standard Repulsorlift Engines
• Standard Sensor Array

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• Advanced turbolaser batteries
• Double hull plating
• Technologically advanced command bridge

STRENGTHS

• Increased weaponry allow the ship to hand out quite a beating during battle
• The destroyer is built for all-around action, making it the perfect command ship

WEAKNESSES

• Due to its large size, the ship is unable to make quick turns or movements. This can be disastrous in battles
• The large and obnoxiously command bridge is very exposed, with almost no weapons to defend it. This makes it vulnerable to attack

DESCRIPTION
The Flying Dutchman.

After Des’s patrol fleet found the Star Destroyer abandoned within the Unknown Regions, he decided the most logical decision would to bring the ship back for scrap metal. But after an investigation team went through the ship’s logs, he found out the long service history this machine had.

Changing his mind, which doesn’t happen often, Des found a new purpose for the ship. Now operating as the command vessel for his fleet, the beautiful ship is a dangerous piece of history, renovated for the new age.

 

[Scourge Harz]

John Locke Noah Corek Krass Wyms could this please be moved out of Pre-Factory and into Starship Creation? Thanks!

 

[Listib Hibin]

We have several issues. Sorry on the wait on this.

First, your permissions are in spoilers, just link them instead as we cannot have images hidden in spoilers.

• Manufacturer: New Imperial Order
• Affiliation: New Imperial Order

These links are broken, please fix.

• Length: 1,600m
  
  
  1500m [Base: 2 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 6 | Average: 8 | High: 10 | Very High: 12 | Extreme: 15]
  
  
• Hangar Space: Average
• Hangar Allocations: 10 Squadrons
  • Starfighters: 7 Squadrons
  • Support Craft: 3 Squadrons

This is completely wrong, please fix. I have given the guide to help you do it.

You are also under three ratings, if you like, I suggest boosting a few of your stats up that you find..."Lacking"


Let me know when you do this.
Scourge Harz

 

[Scourge Harz]

Listib Hibin

Alright, the permissions are now linked to the Images' URL instead of the photos in the spoiler.

The New Imperial Order links should now be fixed.

The hangar space is now bumped up to high to match the numbers.

Those extra three ratings were put into Hangar Space, Speed, and Manuverabitliy .

 

[Listib Hibin]

Sorry for the wait.

APPROVED!
Scourge Harz