The Devil's Reach (BloodyBills pirate ship)

["Bloody" Bill Renfroe]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: To sub a BloodyBill’s pirate ship

Image Source: x x1

Canon Link: N/A

Primary Source: x


PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Manndorf Technocracy/ CIS, BloodBill and his pirate crew

Affiliation: BloodyBill Renfroe, Blacksun

Market Status: Closed

Model: Modified Type-9 Hellfire Frigate

Production: Unique

Material: Specialized non-conductive Durasteel Alloy.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Pirate light frigate

Length: 500 metres

Width: 120 metres

Height: 80 metres

Armament: Very High

Defenses: Average

Hangar Space: Small (boarding shuttles x 3)

Maneuverability Rating: Moderate

Speed Rating: High


Hyperdrive: Class 1,5

STANDARD FEATURES

--Computers/Non Combat Systems:---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Short Range Sensor Package:

Radar
Thermal Sensors
Subspace Disturbance Sensors
Digital Telescopes
Mass Detectors
Hyperspace Breach Sensors
Gravity Well Detector
Standard Issue Navigational Computer

--Life support:----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Artificial Gravity Generator

Standard Issue Oxygen Delivery System

Military Grade Medbay

Advanced Gamma Radiation Shields

Bulkhead System

Advanced Fire Control

--Defences:--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Standard EWAR System Protection Unit

Standard Issue Military Grade Shield Generators

Standard Issue Barrier Point Defence Systems

Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Damage and Hazard Control Systems.

--Offensive Weaponry:-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

12x ThreadRipper Autocannons (Broadside mounts)

10x Dual Heavy Turbolaser Cannon Turrets [Fire-Linked, and Fast Track Mountings.] retrofitted by bill and his crew

2x KC-404 'Thanatos' Torpedo Systems (Frontal mounts)

Central Computer Core (Integrated Droid Brains, with Decentralized Artificial Intelligence Capabilities.) retrofitted by bill and his crew

Shockwave Warheads
NET Torpedoes (Null Engine Thrust Torpedoes, aka. EMP Torpedoes)

Anti-Emission Tracer Module (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking.) retrofitted by bill and his crew

Anti-Tractor Beam Shroud. retrofitted by bill and his crew


Mobility:

--Advanced Heavy Thruster Package:--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

4x Vortex Heavy Ion Drives

18x Advanced Maneuvering Thrusters

12x Precision Maneuvering Thrusters

--Void Class Micro-Warpdrive:-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Cynosural Field Generator

Microwarp Calculation Computer

Warp Bubble Collapsing Unit (For rapid hyperspace exit required to perform a microwarp)

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Weaponry:

--Expanded Ammunition Holds----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Reinforced Ammunition Containment

--Computer Systems:---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Advanced Targeting Computers

Torpedo Course Correction Computer (TCCC)

Trajectory Calculators

Target Tracking Systems

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Materials/Hull: --Frame------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Non-Conductive Hull Frame

Lightened Hull Frame (Allows atmospheric operation)

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ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Anti-Emission Tracer Module (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking.)

Anti-Tractor Beam Shroud.

Central Computer Core (Integrated Droid Brains, with Decentralized Artificial Intelligence Capabilities.)

10x Dual Heavy Turbolaser Cannon Turrets [Fire-Linked, and Fast Track Mountings.]




STRENGTHS

[+] Blitz: This ship is capable of achieving very high speeds, which allows it to strike deep within enemy territory very quickly

[+] Braving the Storm: This ship is made using a non-conductive alloy, which makes it compatible with Project Storm weaponry

[+] Shredder: This ship has an amazing weapons suite, allowing it to fill many a ship with large holes

[+] Dragon's Spit: The ThreadRipper autocannons used on this ship leave acidic residue on it's victims. Even if the ship gets away, a lot of extra effort will be required to repair areas which are filled with acid.

WEAKNESSES

[-] Scaleless Dragon: Though this ship has an outstanding arsenal, it's survivability is lackluster.

[-] Lone Wolf: This warship has a tiny hangar space, which is dedicated to shuttles. It is unable to wield a wing of fighters to support itself.

[-] Low Torpedo Capacity: Each torpedo tube is only armed with two shockwave and two NET torpedoes. Without logistical support, this ship won't last long.

[-] compatibility issues, with retrofitted tech

[-] Skelton crew: ship at 1/3rd pr less of recommended compliment due the size of the pirate crew

DESCRIPTION

A Type-9 Hellfire Frigate to “Bloody”Bill and his original band stole from a repair and resupply station after finally being fed up with the Enternal navy, they stole the ship and set for lief of freedom and privacy, with “Bloody” Bill as the captain. A monitor he earned 10 x over, some the things he did in battle and dealt with prisoners would sith inquisitors cringe, they set out 5 years, and through various, nefarious means upgraded the ship’s hyperdrive, added a Central Computer Core (Integrated Droid Brains, with Decentralized Artificial Intelligence Capabilities.) and link most ship systems allowing the ship to run effectively with a fraction of it’s standard compliant, the also beefed up the firepower acquiring and retrofitting 10x Dual Heavy Turbolaser Cannon Turrets [Fire-Linked, and Fast Track Mountings.] and gave a little defense by stealing and installing an Anti-Tractor Beam Shroud, Standard [Frigate-Class, Military-Grade] Damage and Hazard Control Systems. Stole off a captured GaltaicAllience ship and a stolen Anti-Emission Tracer Module (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking.) cause ya can’t catch what can’t find. They also made some cosmetic changes to ships’ outer appearance it looks terrifying and menacing, in hopes that ships will surrender with little of any resistance.

 

[AMCO]

"Bloody" Bill Renfroe

Why hello there, I'll be your judge today. This'll require some rather hefty edits, so if you're too busy to get it done within a week or so I can send it back to Pre-Factory. Otherwise, it may end up archived for inactivity. Anyway, without further ado...​

• Your Image Credit links to what I assume is art for this ship, but it isn't actually in the submission itself - is it meant to be?​
• You are missing the Permissions field in the Template; the fields therein are not optional and must be included even when not relevant.
  • In your case, however, you also need Permission from the original submitter to base your submission so heavily on the Type-9 Hellfire Frigate; this is a straight copy in many cases, without permission it would be considered plagiarism.​
• Speaking of, the Type-9 Hellfire Frigate cannot be used as the Model as it is currently archived and thus not a Factory-approved source.​
• Please link Factions in your Affiliation/Manufacturer and link to your character's bio under his name in this section.​
• You are missing the Hangar Allocation field, as per the Template linked above. Please include it.
  • Speaking of Hangar Allocation, please list it as Squadrons, not the number of shuttles, as per the Template.​
• If you so desire, you may include the Single Craft Hangar field, as per the Template linked above; this is required for the Frigate template but not for the Cruiser template, which you can also use as your vessel is exactly 500 metres. It is therefore optional.​
• The Moderate rating is no longer in use, please replace it with a valid rating.
  • As an aside, this submission is two points underbalanced (assuming you make the Manoeuvrability Average); should you so desire, you may raise one rating by two points or two ratings by one point. Should you wish to have only a handful shuttles, a Very Low (1 Squadron) Hangar Rating may be appropriate - this would give you another point to play with.​
• Please link to anything that is recognisable to the average reader, including everything submitted to Codex or the Factory. This includes, but is not necessarily limited to, the "Threadriper" and "Thanatos" weapons systems and "Project Storm", whatever that is. I would suggest less recognisable forms of Canon technology such as Shrouds as well.
  • As a general rule, if you don't link something people will assume the most generic explanation possible. If you want a piece of tech to be more than fluff, you should link it unless it's particularly recognisable - no one expects you to link durasteel or turbolasers.​
• Out of curiosity, why is your turbolasers in Advanced Systems in addition to Standard Features?​
• Skeleton Crew is a property of the crew, not the ship, and is therefore not a Weakness in the Factory; please remove it.​

 

["Bloody" Bill Renfroe]

if could move to pre factory while we worker it pls

 

[John Locke]

"Bloody" Bill Renfroe

What is the status of this submission? As per the rules of the pre-factory, which can be found here, submissions may only remain in the pre-factory for one month before being archived. Unfortunately, your submission has been in the pre-factory for longer than a month, if you could please update us on if you still intend to complete it, or if you would rather the submission be moved to the archives till you're ready to work on it.

 

[John Locke]

"Bloody" Bill Renfroe

Archiving for inactivity. If you wish to have the submission pulled from the archives please put up a post in the submission modification thread.