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Approved Species The Creation - Subject A-3R15 (Aeris)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a unique and interesting character for roleplay purposes.
  • Image Credit: Alexandra Zhukova - Restraint
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: The Creation - Subject A-3R15 (Aeris)
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Homeworld: Nar Shaddaa
  • Language: Galactic Basic, Frequency respondent. (Fair warning link may hurt sensitive ears. Keep volume very low before clicking.)
  • Average Lifespan: 250 Years
  • Estimated Population: Unique
  • Description: Many describe the creation as a dark spirit. While she holds a human like form, there are commonly wisps of darkness around her shadow like body. Standing at a rather short height with an apparent featureless and shapeless body, the creation is rather intimidating without meaning.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: N/A
  • Average height of adults: 1.55m
  • Average length of adults: N/A
  • Skin color: Black/Non-Reflective of light
  • Hair color: N/A
  • Distinctions: The main things that distinguish the creation from a normal human is her true black form, true black is often described as the complete absence of color, with no light reflecting off of it, most things are seen as completely flat from one perspective. Along with this major difference comes the occasional wisps of darkness shifting off her form, this often accompanying an extensive use of any force ability, or her innate shape changing ability.
  • Races: N/A
STRENGTHS

Shape Changing - Because of specialized biotech, The creation is capable of elaborate shape shifting at will. While it allows her to hold a range of forms, all must be around medium size to avoid risk of failure, trying to shift to something far larger or smaller will often result in failure and fatigue, though on rare occasion is possible with high amounts of energy.
Darkness Preference - For whatever purpose, the creation was constructed/altered for nighttime practice, because of her dark form she is near invisible in full dark situations and almost energized by it.

WEAKNESSES

Light Sensitivity - While able to stand in gentle light, it does cause her slight physical pain, bright light such as mid day overhead sunlight, bright spotlights, things that make normal beings turn away and block their eyes, disallows her to use any force powers/shifting abilities, and actually damages her and causes a sort of deterioration with extensive exposure. The damage taken from this is a sort of deterioration/skin cracking sort of effect that slowly falls apart the longer she remains in bright light, being able to regenerate from this over long periods of time so long as she isn't entirely destroyed.
Flashback Breakdowns - While she doesn’t exactly remember any of her history, any attempt at trapping, chaining, restraining or containing of the creation results in her flying into an frenzied fury.
Obedient Subject - Created to be a weapon of some sorts, the subject was trained or rather programmed to be an obedient soldier. Certain frequencies - above 12,000 hz, seem to cause her to blank out and become very susceptible to suggestion specifically from the person generating the frequencies.

CULTURE

  • Diet: N/A
  • Communication: Verbal and Sound Generation
  • Technology level: N/A
  • Religion/Beliefs: N/A
  • General behavior: General behavior is rather unknown at such an early stage of the creations development, however it has commonly expressed isolationist actions and tends to favor complete darkness, it can perform many actions and seems to be intended to live a life of service under another, though most of its behavior is a mystery.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Created for the original purpose of a secretive weapon, subject A-3R15’s development was halted by the mysterious destruction of a hidden lab below Nar Shaddaa, days after the event the bright light holding Subject A-3R15 in stasis were cut, and she was set free from her prison. Finding the ruins of the lab before her, self claimed Aeris escaped the ruins only to wander lost without purpose in the above world.
A previous halt had come in her creation because of the strong weakness to light as researchers rushed to find a way to alter her form to create a resistance. Many found it was best suited to keep the creation chained in a cell, though this only ever resulted in large amounts of destruction being done in the cell, and generally the death of one or two researchers in an attempt to calm the subject.
 
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[member="Deerlinqs"]

So a couple of things that will need addressed:


  • Deerlinqs said:
    Frequency reactive.
    What exactly is this?


  • Deerlinqs said:
    Average Lifespan: ‘Immortal’ - Until terminated.
    You're going to need to give this an actual lifespan. We don't accept anything that is immortal.


  • Deerlinqs said:
    Breathes: Oxygenated Air (Standard)
    This can just be Type 1


  • Deerlinqs said:
    Skin color: Vantablack
    This can just be black/dark/insert other adjective here


  • Deerlinqs said:
    Shape Changing = The creation is capable of shifting her physical form atwill
    How is she able to do this?
  • So explain to me, in the submission, this procedure that turned them from human to their current form. As of right now, I'm not understanding how the subject would have survived having their entire body, plus organs, replaced with this substance as reading what the substance is would either 1) cause complete organ failure/catastrophic shock or 2) overheat the subject once her skin was covered and her sweat/body heat couldn't escape.
 
[member="Taeli Raaf"]

Alright so, I described frequency reactive and offered a link for meaning. (Fair warning keep your volume low).

Changed lifespan, what she breathes and, skin color. Though I'm not exactly sure how to go about changing shape adjustment?

I adjusted her to no longer have a human background to now having her be a complete mostly inorganic creation, though I'm trying to avoid robot and have a more lifelike spirit feel to her? I don't want it to sound weird or overpowered though that's the only way I can think to describe it. I want her made of some material though I can't really think of how to describe/write it. Do you have any suggestions?
 
Deerlinqs said:
actually damages her and causes a sort of deterioration with extensive exposure. This is able to be recovered from however as long as she is not entirely destroyed by it.
How serious is the damage she takes from intense light and what sort of light sources are we talking about that can do this?
 
For some reason its not letting me edit that mess of code that is my post. So Ill answer that here.

What I imagine the damage would be like is a sort of deterioration/skin cracking sort of effect that slowly falls apart the longer she remains in bright light, being able to regenerate from this over /LONG/ periods of time so long as she isnt entirely destroyed.

The light I meant as bright was more along the lines of mid day overhead sunlight, bright spotlights, things that make normal beings turn away and block their eyes.

[member="Taeli Raaf"]
 
Submission moved to pre-codex as per writer request.

Please remember to include a list of changes when you tag a member of codex staff to move the submission back to live judgement.
 
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