Codex Denied The Bryn'adûl | Distortor

[Tathra Khaeus]

The Bryn'adûl | Distortor

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a EMP creature.
• Image Credit: X
• Role: Electromagnetic Pulse Distortor
• Permissions: N/A
• Links: [Links Embedded]

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Unit Name: Distortor
• Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl
• Classification: Anti-Technology
• Description: The creature known as a Distortor is a cross-breed between a Rhivak and a Debaucher, the Distortor is a slow moving creature that generates an incredible dense molecular shield around itself, charging an electromagnetic pulse to discharge upon the release of its shield.

COMBAT INFORMATION:

• Unit Size: Small
• Unit Availability: Unique
• Unit Experience: Trained
• Equipment: N/A
• Combat Function: Slow moving living bunker, the creature generates an incredible dense shield that can also shield a total of twenty infantry. One ordered to do so, the creature's back plates will open up, bright energy releasing into an electromagnetic disruptive explosion, designed to disable shield generators.

Strengths:

• Tough as hell
• Generates powerful electromagnetic pulse that will kill Shield Generators, other technology is only affected temporarily.
• Generates shield capable of protecting from orbital bombardment.
• The Shield generated is a one-way shield, those inside can't leave until the shield is disabled, but those that enter cannot leave.

Weaknesses:

• The Shield generated is a one-way shield, those inside can't leave until the shield is disabled, but those that enter cannot leave.
• Slow
• Shield is eliminated when the electromagnetic waves are unleashed.
• Must be stationary to deploy electromagnetic waves.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION:
Designed after the battle of Kesh in response to the use of city-wide shields and planetary shields, Distortors were designed to be delivered to the battlefield and ferried within the Shield to eliminate electronic defences, allowing for proper combat to begin.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Tathra Khaeus Hey there! It seems you're using the Combat Unit template to try to submit a species/sub-species, stated even in your intent ("To create a EMP creature") The way you've filled the fields out also match with the creation of a species and not the creation of a Combat Unit. The Combat Unit template can't be used as a way to work around the need to sub a species, even if this has happened unintentionally.

I'm very sorry, but I'm going to have to deny this submission. You can of course Second Chance it if you feel that I am incorrect.