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Approved NPC The Bryn'adûl | Centurion Vandals

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The Bryn'adûl | Centurion Vandals
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a military for the Vaydralen within the Bryn'adûl.
  • Image Credit: X - Edited by myself.
  • Role: Soldier
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: [Embedded]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Centurion Vandal
  • Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl
  • Classification: Infantry
  • Description: The Centurions are a Vaydralen military corps within the Bryn'adûl. The Vandals are the lowest ranking soldiers within the Centurions. Adorned in a light red suit of armour, the Vandals are younger and less experienced Centurions lead by an officer or commander. The Centurions were specifically designed to operate in cohesion with Juggernauts.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
Strengths:
  • Tactical Guile: Even the youngest of the Vaydralen are familiar with tactics and strategy. Their logical minds disallow emotion or irrational thought to cloud their judgements. They are excellent for flanking and outpacing their opponents.
  • Technology: Equipped with technologies new to the hybridisation of cultures within the Bryn, the Vandal is equipped with a variety of equipment that allows him to decide on the pace of the battle. Their limited rechargeable shielding and ranged weaponry allowing them better control of a personal fights momentum.
  • Excellent Acrobat: The Vaydralen have extremely powerful physical bodies, outpacing any human in a sprint and able to leap and traverse most types of terrain with ease.
Weaknesses:
  • Exposure: Vandals, like a majority of the Centurions are usually physically isolated but not alone. They work in tandem with dozens of other groups but usually move separately.
  • Biology: Due to the nature of their anatomy, the Vandals armour still possesses a variety of exposed body parts.
  • Outnumbered: The Vandals don't deal well with direct confrontation from a large number of foes.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Centurion Vandals, independent Vaydralen who used to be simple foragers and hunters. Now, sharpened into soldiers for the Bryn'adûl. The Centurions are a sub-sect of the Zealots, trained and lead by their operators. They typically utilise the great agility of the Vaydralen to flank enemies, going part in parcel with the tactical minds of the Vaydralen, compliment the purpose of this group. The vandals, unlike a majority of variations among the Zealots do not typically deploy behind enemy lines or onto the battlefield via Gunboat or transport. Usually these warriors depart from a landing craft, and move out from a secure landing zone to infiltrate enemy forces and weaken them for the larger and more direct military elements of the Bryn'adûl.
 
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Hey there Tathra Khaeus Tathra Khaeus , I'll be judging your submission!

First thing to note is a minor task for Image Credit. It's linked perfectly fine, but if ya don't mind make a note that you edited the image (if done by another person on the board then credit them for the change). Also, please link the Vaydralen in their first mention for Intent, so folks can easily research your other subs!

Next is the Weaknesses section. Having 2 weaknesses is the recommended amount, and since this sub has 3 strengths it could really use that additional weakness to balance it.

Last on the list is this submission's Historical Information. While these guys are pretty darn cool, some more background information and unit details would develop this submission nicely. Here's a blurb from the template that might help give some ideas!

  • [ Include a description of the unit’s history here. How they were formed and by whom, past noteworthy battles, moral affecting defeats, where they are stationed if applicable, etc. ]
If you'd like help with ideas or have any questions just let me know!
 
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