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Approved Tech The Annihilator MK 1

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Taji Nelson

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  • Intent: To sub one of the replacements for the Archer Uniform that he once had.
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: Here
  • Primary Source: Heavy Armor

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Powered Armor
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: High
    • Kinetic: High
    • Lightsabers: None
    • Other: Slugthrowers and Melee Blades: High
    • Intense Heat / Cold: High
    • Acid: None
    • Ion / EMP: None
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Heads Up Display
  • Comm-Pack
  • Build In Life Support
  • Built in Jetboots
  • Built in Repulsor Pack
  • Built in Jetpack
  • Weapons Systems:
BAW-57 Heavy Blaster Pistol | x | An upgraded version of the BAW-55, the BAW-57 features increased ammunition capacity as well as durability and overall quality of life upgrades, as well as a change from the larger double-barreled design to a more manageable and discreet single-barreled design. A recommended base pistol for those wishing to order a custom model.

BAW-88 Blaster Carbine | x | A lighter and more compact blaster rifle that trades range capabilities for reduced range, intended for security personnel, mercenaries, military units, and any other buyer. With a scope that can toggle between x2.0 and x4.0, lightweight and reduced recoil as well as a high rate of fire, its an overall effective light alternate to heavier blaster rifles.

BAW-77 Tactical Blaster Rifle | x | Tactical blaster intended for high-level security personnel, mercenaries, and military units. Features semi-auto and automatic rates of fire, and an advanced RWA-M1 Integrated Weapons Scope. The blaster rifle also is protected from overheating and features reduced recoil, as well as a reinforced chassis of duranium to protect it from wear-and-tear.
Flares: Flares installed inside the armor that can be used as a weapon by Taji should he need to do so. They can also be used as a means of foiling heat seeker missiles.
Wrist-Blades: Wrist-Vibro Blades that have been added to the armor. These are made out of a mix of Beskar, Cortosis, Phrik, and Songsteel. The Wrist-blades can be used for a variety of melee attacks.
Sub Machine Gun: A sub machine gun mounted on the left shoulder of the armor.
Wrist Lasers: Wrist Lasers were also integrated into the armor to make it pose more of a threat than it normally would.
Twin Beskads: Taking a page from the various Mandalorians, two Beskads made out of Titanium and Durasteel have been attached in hidden compartments. These have been modified with Vibro Sword technology and will launch out when a fight calls for melee.

STRENGTHS
  • Blaster Resistant
  • Vacuum Proof
  • Easy to Operate
WEAKNESSES

  • Vulnerable to Intense Amounts of Heat and Cold in weaponized Forms.
  • Deathtrap: The armor when the power supply is mostly a death trap if the power supply and emergency exit in the armor is sealed shut.
  • Ion Weaponry: The Armor is vulnerable to Ion Weaponry, and EMPs. This would short out the armor and render it a brick permanently essentially.
  • Hard to Repair: Repairing the Annihilator is hard.
  • Lightsabers: Lightsabers are effective against the armor as well because it is not made out of any resistant materials.
  • Can't do anything without a wearer.
  • Anyone can put the suit on and wear it.
  • Takes a very long time to recharge: The suit takes massive amounts of time to recharge when it has exceeded it's 5 post per thread use, about 10 posts of constant recharging.
  • Waterproofing: The suit has not been waterproofed yet.
  • The suit has not been made to resist the Force in any fashion.
DESCRIPTION

With the humiliating reveal of his old identity on the world of Denon, Taji realized that the lightweight Archer Armor simply wasn't good enough anymore. It did not provide the level of protection one would need to survive encounters with Corpos or others who employed lethal force. Research into medium armors led him to believe most simply wouldn't provide the protection he needed in order to ready him for the future. The concept of powered armor was explored by him, armor that would use servo motors and similar technology to upgrade his physical abilities so he could be a threat. In addition to that, he explored the idea of adding more protection than what a regular armor would normally have to his body.

Weapon Systems in the armor include a system where the armor can discharge electricity in emulation of Force Lightning. It has micro repulsors inside it allowing it to perform "Force Push" and Tractor Beams that allow it to perform Force Pull.

In the feet of the armor are powerful jet boots that allow the suit to fly.

Other defense systems include flares the armor can release to blind an opponent. Concealed around the helmet of the suit are mini canisters of Horror set in such a way that they will go off if someone tries to remove the helmet of the suit without the wielder doing this. In addition, should the user when influenced by Jedi Mindtricks or the like remove the helmet, the misters would go off and cause anyone unfortunate enough to be around to experience their worst fear.

A shoulder mounted weapon has been added to the armor.


In addition, the suit itself utilizes the same "Pocket Dimensional Storage" utilized by Taji in his bag. It can hold up to 250 Items. Wrist Lasers were also added to the armor as well by him.

The armor is 3.048 Meters tall.

The suit has an emergency ejector on the back, capable of being activated should the need arise. On the right shoulder, the rifle is equipped.
The wrists of the suit have blasters that have been attached to them.
 
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Krass Wyms

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Taji Nelson

Intent: This is submission is a commission from Taji Nelson as he is having trouble creating his Power Armor.

You commissioned yourself to make your armor?

Tunqstoid

How much tunqstoid is being used in this? Given its weight and requiring mag-levs to move a blast door. Doesn't seem one of the best for armor material.

From out of the calfs, Achlys Grenades can be released.

Do you have permission from John Locke John Locke for this submissions use?

Hacking & Slicing: Like most electronics, the armor can be corrupted by an experienced enough hacker/slicer.

Explain a little more please, what will happen if a slicer gets into the armors systems? Will it shut down, are they able to control it? Can they eject the wearer?
 

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Krass Wyms Krass Wyms

A mistake I made when copying the coding. It's been fixed. I'll remove the Tungstoid.
Yes, I do.

Hopefully it looks good now.
 

Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
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Taji Nelson

Hacking & Slicing: Like most electronics, the armor can be corrupted by an experienced enough hacker/slicer. They could either shut down the armor or they could take control of the suit entirely, trapping the user inside and controlling it like a puppet. They could also remove the Life Support Function, and vent the oxygen, causing the user to suffocate.

As with your previous armor which can be controlled without the wearer by hackers. This has become a mobile suit now.

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You can second chance this if you like but I would recommend heavy edits
 
Submission Name: The Annihilator Armor
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/the-annihilator.143851/#post-1965598
Reason for Second Chance: Mechas generally are larger than 10-12 Feet tall which was the intended height of the Annihilator Armor. In addition to that, I am willing to make heavy edits in order to make the armor feasible for the RP.

Please move it to the Pre-Factory.

Second Chance granted. Please tag me when you are ready for this submission to be judged.
 
Taji Nelson

This is a pretty solid rewrite. There are just a few points I would like to go through with you to clear up before we can more this submission on.

Weapons

You mention a lot of weapons as part of this submission, but don't say how they are used in the armour. I'm referring to the following:​
  • BAW-57 Heavy Blaster Pistol
  • BAW-88 Blaster Carbine
  • BAW-77 Tactical Blaster Rifle
Are they installed as part of the suit? Or are they just the weapons to have to hand?​

Weaknesses

  • Deathtrap: The armor when the power supply is mostly a death trap if the power supply and emergency exit in the armor is sealed shut.

What emergency exit? How could it be sealed shut?​

  • Ion Weaponry: The Armor is vulnerable to Ion Weaponry, and EMPs. This would short out the armor and render it a brick permanently essentially.

Although you say that the armour is vulnerable to "Ion Weaponry and EMPs" this isn't reflected in the resistances. Please adjust this submission so that this is shown there for easy reference.​

  • Anyone can put the suit on and wear it.

This isn't really a weakness, since it's true for almost any suit of armour and isn't a weakness of this suit in particular.​

Description

The armor is 10 Feet Tall.

According to the factory rules, "All measurements in all submissions must be in metric." Please rewrite using meters.​
 

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  • BAW-57 Heavy Blaster Pistol
  • BAW-88 Blaster Carbine
  • BAW-77 Tactical Blaster Rifle

The rifle is shoulder mounted. The blasters are attached onto the "wrists" of the suit. I am working to convert it into Meters.

There is an emergency exit in the back of the armor. Clogging it up with glue or similar, welding it shut or similar could be done which would trap the person inside the suit unless they somehow can free themselves. I am working on the other edits as we speak.
Edit: Edits completed.

John Locke John Locke
 
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