Approved Tech Standard Trooper Armour|Order of the Force

[Varloc]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: to create a standard trooper armour for our military.
• Image Source: Mohzart
• Canon Link: none
• Permissions: none
• Primary Source: none

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Order of the Force Production Company
• Affiliation: The Order of the Force army corp and Varloc
• Model: Alpha-1 series Armour
• Modularity: Yes, extra armour can be added for additional protection.
• Production: Mass
• Material: Durasteel and transprasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Anti-Blaster
• Weight: Average
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Very High
  • Kinetic: Average
  • Lightsabers: Very low
  • Other: Average, explosion

SPECIAL FEATURES

• None

STRENGTHS

• Very good protection from blaster fire, most blasts from standard blasters cannot pierce the armour.

WEAKNESSES

• Venerable to lightsabers, lightsabers will slice through the armour easily.

DESCRIPTION
This armour is the standard armour for the Order of the Force's army. This armour was made to be very protective from blaster fire. This armour is held by multiple ranks, the ranks can be identified by seeing the colored markings, yellow for sargent, green for lieutenant, blue for captain, and orange for commander.

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Under review

 

[Jorik Valnora]

Hey there, Varloc

Thanks for taking the time to use the factory. I'll be running through the review and approval process with you for this sub.

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Anti-Blaster
• Weight: Average
• Resistances:
  • Energy: Very High
  • Kinetic: Average
  • Lightsabers: Very low
  • Other: Average

What "other" resistances are you talking about here? Per the Factory template, I need you to "disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating."

STRENGTHS

• Very good protection from blaster fire

WEAKNESSES

• Venerable to lightsabers

Is there any way for to elaborate on your strengths and weaknesses here? Per the template i link earlier in this reply, "Any resistance ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration." You have the "Very High" resistance here listed as a strength, but it is not really saying much in the way of elaboration. What makes this strength what it is? Is it the materials involved? Etc.

Please remember to tag me with any edits or changes made to this submission.

 

[Varloc]

I fixed a few things. Is Explosions ok as "other"?