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Approved Starship "Spirit" class Light Freighter

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Personal Transport
  • Length: 75 Meters
  • Width: 35 Meters
  • Height: 20 Meters
  • Armament: Low
  • Defenses: Low
  • Hangar Space: Base: 0
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 0 squadrons
    • Support Craft: 0 squadrons
  • Single Craft Hangar: Yes (Docking port)
  • Maneuverability Rating: High
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyperdrive: 1.0
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Personal Safe (1)
  • Escape pod (3)
  • Metis Sensor Array
  • Electronic Security Systems
  • Encryption Network
  • Standard Navigational Systems
  • Vitae-class Life Support System
  • Can enter the atmosphere and land on planets, operate on the water above and below.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • FAST AND MANEUVERABLE: Built in the frame of mind of certain infamous Corellian designs, the Spirit can outrun and outmaneuver even some of the fastest fighters in the galaxy.
WEAKNESSES
  • A FREIGHTER, NOT A FIGHTER: If stuck in a dogfight, the best weapon this ship has is speed.
DESCRIPTION
The Spirit is meant to be a well-controlled, fast freighter. Of course, when most people see this, they think "smuggler" but that honestly was not the original intent. The systems, the circuitry, and the hull were meant for just the opposite, to get away from fighters, and blockades, and capital ships... yeah... that sounds like a Smuggler's ship alright.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Liram Angellus Liram Angellus

Oh, I really like the art! Same problems like with the other sub, and here I found one more problem:
  • The problem, you can't use the Ossis Starship Frame here, because it has only minor production-scale. So you have to delete it, or change this sub's production scale to minor.
  • My concern is the Phrik. Even the wiki article said it is a rare metallic compound, hard to believe they'll use it in a mass-production ship. Too expensive.
  • And the other problem, the submission is overpowered (+4), please fix it.
That's all, please let me know if you edited these.
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Liram Angellus Liram Angellus

Almost, it still overpowered (+1).
  • See:
    Mass production : 0 point
    Armament: Average: 0 point
    Defenses: Low: -1 point
    Hangar Space: Base: 0 point
    Maneuverability Rating: High: +1 point
    Speed Rating: High: +1 point
Summary: +1 point.
 
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