Approved Starship Ritoru class - Light Frigate

[The Red of Sinner]

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Affiliation: Open Market
Manufacturer: Darkthone Arialyard
Model: RLF - 0oda
Modularity: No
Production: Minor
Material: Reinforced Durasteel, Durglass
Classification: Light Frigate


Length: 250 meters

Width: 140 meters

Height: 90 meters



Armament:
Capital Cannons (12 count)

5 - Twin Turbolaser Cannons
4 - Heavy Turbolaser Cannons
3 - Deck Cannon Emplacements

Warhead Launchers (5 count)

5 - RitoruRitoruAssault Concussion Missile Launchers





Defensive Cannons (30 count)

5 - Point Defence Cannons
5 - Quad Laser Cannons
20 - Flak Cannons


Hangar:
12 Fighters (1 Squadron)


Special Features:
Communications Array
Encryption Network
Detention Cells
Escape Pods
Standard Shield Generator Systems
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Targeting Systems
Standard Sensory Array

Maneuverability Rating: 8
Speed Rating: 8
Hyperdrive Class: 1


Strengths: The ship is designed to be defensive for a fleet
Weaknesses: Its offence is weak

Description:
Cargo Capacity - 10 tons
Passengers - 100
Consumables - 6 months
Crew - 50


Development Thread: N/A
Intent: To create an affordable light frigate
Who Can Use This: Anyone
Primary Source: N/A

 

[Ellie Mors]

Under Review.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="The Shadow King"]
As I mentioned in your previous submission, when beefing up the guns or squadron count, or anything really, there should be a proportionate drop in one or more other areas of the ship to even out its strengths with weaknesses. I would hardly say a 250m ship with 50 capital guns has a weak offense, for example, when you look at the Republic Deliverance which has less than that and is more than triple the size with almost half the capital guns.

Here's a good example to go off of: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/43856-deluge-class-assault-frigate/

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Darth Vitium"]


Hows that??

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="The Shadow King"]
A good example to go off of would be, in this case, to look at your other submission and try to think of what would be a proportionately smaller amount of guns (all types) for this size (Less than 1/3rd the size) of ship in comparison to the other. I'd like to see the armaments lowered, still, although your missiles are just fine where they are. Perhaps reducing the capital guns to between 5 and 10 and the defensive guns to between 20-30?

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Darth Vitium"]

Its all been dropped

 

[Ellie Mors]

Seems good to go now. Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.