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NPC Review Reztezi Irus

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: Create a Second-in-Command for the forces of Vora Kaar
  • Image Credit: Artstation
  • Role: Second-in-Command, Sith Agent
  • Permissions: -
  • Links: -
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: Late Twenties
  • Force Sensitivity: Sith Knight/Blade
  • Species: Cathar - Juhani Subspecies
  • Appearance: Like any Cathar, Irus has a human like figure with feline attributes. However, to a much lesser degree than that of the typical Cathar. Having a lack of hair over the majority of her body, Pointed(Knife) Ears, Sharp Feline like teeth, Clawed fingers/toes, "Birth Marks" that look akin to striping like other felines, Aggressive and pointed facial and body features, with slit eyes. Due to many of these features, it can provide her with abilities comparably better than that of other Near-Human species. Such has having an unrivaled ability to have stable footing, increased perception visually, as well as auditory, increased physical conditioning, and even a larger stature and build compared to even other females of her species.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name:
    • Birth Name - Julvyhr Kue "Jewel"
    • Taken Name - Reztezi Irus
  • Loyalties:
  • Wealth: Second-In-Command,
  • Notable Possessions:
    • Single Blade Lightsaber
    • Lightly armored Robes
  • Skills:
  • Personality: Irus is rather doubtful of her position. Unsure of her stance being an apprentice, as well as second-in-command to the forces at Vora's disposal. This is due to her history as a former Jedi of the fallen Galactic Alliance, and becoming an exile. Once being brought under the wing of the Lord of None, Irus has had doubts of not just her position, but also her stance in the force. Training for years as a Jedi, following the Jedi code, and then suddenly change to the Sith code. Having problems with its interpretation. This lends heavily into her second guessing her actions, and being unsure of her thoughts. Making it difficult to command others in some cases.

    However, the few things she is 100% confident in, is her ability with the force, and her blade-work. They are the few things that she can rely upon and knows she is capable. Almost mastery over the force, and lightsaber combat. Even unarmed hand to hand combat is easy for her due to her species, physical strength and conditioning. In battle of the field, with her at the helm, she knows how to fight. Her problem, is leading the military itself.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice:
  • Combat Function:
    • Saber Combat: As a saber combatant, Irus is well versed in usage of combat against another force wielder. Namely using combat forms that are best used against single opponents, with multiple overwhelming strikes from varying angles, as well as movements that can be used within the air, or in a heightened advantage. Paring very well with her Species Feline like attributes and capabilities.
    • Force Combat: Irus is a rather powerful Force Adept. Typically utilizing mental manipulation to aid allies, Hinder enemies, or in conjunction with Lightsaber combat to perform feats at a heightened success rate. Even being able to dominate, and severely affect the minds of those around her for utilization of combat, as well as providing aid to troops or allies around her.
Strengths
  • Lightsaber Duelist
  • Battle meditation/Support
  • Mental Manipulation
  • Combative Savant
Weaknesses
  • Ranged Weapons, Defending from due to Lightsaber tactics, or using per lack of any training.
  • Difficulty Flying Vessels, or driving vehicles.
  • Doubtful of Military Actions
  • Right arm Dominate due to injured Left arm.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Living the life as a child, taken in and adopted by a Jedi Master, Jewel had a rough start. Father was not in the picture, with her mother attempting to do anything and everything possible to raise her child. However, it was difficult. Jewel still does not know if the reason she was handed over to her Jedi Mentor was because she could no longer care for her, or didn't want to take care of a child. While the idea for many years had haunt her dreams, it has now been a trivial matter where she has accepted her past.

Training under her mentor Arlon Derr'moth, Jewel did all she could to prove her worth to her mentor, and make sure that he didn't regret picking her up, and taking her under his wing. Training started at an early age. Starting at nine years, she was almost forced to believe all that the Jedi had implanted into her. Teaching the force, its ideologies and code that one should be a servant of the people, provide self-sacrifice to those who did or didn't deserve as such. While she always questioned these teachings privately, she never did so openly, or directly to her mentor. As like with any Cathar, she found it difficult to make friendships, or lasting relationships for anything more than acquaintances. However, it was a fateful encounter where upon her mentor Arlon was facing Vora in battle.

It was a personal matter. As the Sith Lord seemed to be hunting down the Jedi and finally found him. Brandishing a saber, Jewel attempted to prevent the Lord from fighting her mentor and likely her only friend, when the Jedi Master stepped forward to Vora's challenge.

This act of self-sacrifice was presented to the Cathar. Telling her to run, and to learn all that he could not teach her. So she did. Doing as she was commanded. While questioning if she should have stayed to help. The Masters of the force clashed in battle, which she did not see to its end, but only saw the start. The Sith Lord seemed to surround them with a power unlike she had ever seen before. The initial clash sent the Jedi Master on his back foot. She chose then to run. Obeying the last words of her only possible ally.

Running for what felt like kilometers, she finally stopped to catch her breath. Holding her saber tightly within the grasp, she turned around to face where she had come from. The drawing suspicion overcame her. She wanted to obey her commands, but couldn't. She defied the order like she had wanted to do so long. Coming closer, she could no longer sense the force of the Sith Lord. Drawing closer, she saw the destruction. Areas of the ground ripped up. Trees and flora ripped from the ground, or destroyed in the battle. She saw a Lightsaber on the ground. The one that belonged to her master. Slowly walking out into the clearing of carnage, she came upon the saber.

Reaching down, she felt its presence. Unsure of how it survived yet her master and the Sith were no where near it. However a voice broke over the silence.

"He fought with a strength I rarely see o'child mine."

Turning around, she saw the figure of the Sith. Damaged robes, and helmet scratched up and having a gash along the faceplate. Saber in hand, but off, and the body not to be found.

"What did you-"
"His mortal shell is no longer of this plane of existence."
"Why did you-"
"I have been tracking him for almost a year now. He killed some people who I had been working with. It was a personal matter."

Jewel could feel no deceit from the person who stood before her. Even as the Sith stood up and closed the distance with a saunter, she remained still. Not activating her saber. Questioning why this Sith was so much more powerful than her Master.

"You may continue to live as a Jedi, and go about your way. However, if you choose to follow the footsteps of your mentor, know that I am far from an easy fight in my current state."

She nodded her head. Picking up her mentors saber and tossing away her own. Igniting the blade and holding it ready for combat. About to fight him, she twirled the blade around before presenting it to the Sith.

"I want to learn. I want to understand."

Tears welled within her eyes, and dripped down her face. Going against everything. Suddenly turning to the aid and lessons of a Sith was wrong, but so many questions she had, she couldn't return knowing she had given up on her mentor. She couldn't return to the Jedi.

It has been years since then. Trained formerly as a Jedi and now under the lessons of the Sith Lord Vora Kaar, She took a new name becoming a Sith Blade. Reztezi Irus. Keeper of the Sith Code.
 
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Zak Dymo

i'm in ur codex, judgin ur subz
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I'll be conducting this review for you. I have just a few minor notes and then I believe this will be ready to be stamped.

1. Permissions/Links
Permissions: -
Links
: -
If these are N/A, please so state.

2. Weaknesses
Right arm Dominate due to injured Left arm.
Dominate is a verb meaning have a commanding influence on; exercise control over. I believe the word that you intend here is dominant.

Please tag me when you have completed any edits.
 
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