Revenge of the Criticism

[Mother Askani]

Hey guys, while I've been on LOA and slowly working my way off and reviewing threads, I've wanted to start another one of these.

So i've been writing here for awhile and i've become acquainted with a lot of you. I would love some more constructive criticism.

Touch on anything, my writing in general or any characters I've written, and threads etc I would love to know. Help!

 

[Darth Carnifex]

Come back to life so I can get a chance at killing you.

:3

[member="Sochi Ru"]

 

[Coci Heavenshield]

[member="Sochi Ru"]

I am too bias to form any constructive criticism ...

I love your writing from day one! back in the repubs to SJO. I do miss Miss Ru. :flower:

 

[Mother Askani]

Oh you [member="Darth Vornskr"]

Lol thank you. I've bern considering revamping her...[member="Coci Heavenshield"]

 

[Matsu Ike]

I miss her and she was one of my favorite jedi.

 

[Mother Askani]

Thanks [member="Matsu Ike"]