Stryka Remex
I will be doing this review for you. I think you have a good start to your squadron, but there are a few things that will need to be addressed before this can be stamped and moved.
1. Permissions.
The
Alliegience class star destroyer is a Closed Market factory submission created by another writer. As per the
Codex rules, you will have to show permission in order to use this submission. This could be done by linking to a Market Place purchase, a screen shot of a PM, or some other documentation from you.
2. Affiliation.
Affiliation: Stryka Remex, and Zweihander Union
Please link to
Zweihander Union here.
3. Fleet Size.
Referring to our
Codex Rules, "
Only a Major Faction has the resources necessary to role-play having a large fleet." 5 star destroyers is a significant investment of resources for a minor faction, which lacks many economic resources (e.g. control of planetary economies). Additionally, 5
Alliegience class star destroyer gives this squadron a total meterage of 9,250km. As such, this is not a small fleet for a minor faction.
For comparison,
here is another Zweihander Fleet submission that is listed as
huge with 10km. Given how close in size that yours is, I would similarly classify this as huge for the faction. Remember,
size is relative. So this field should reflect Zweihander as a minor faction that lacks the substantive (read: endless) resources of the major factions.
Those are my thoughts and I look forward to yours in reply. Please tag me when you have completed your edits, or let me know if you have any questions in light of my review.
