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Approved NPC "Precious" Naasla

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To flesh out a cute pet.
  • Image Credit: Here.
  • Role: A pet in possession of Lunafreya Solidor.
  • Permissions: Not Applicable.
  • Links: Not Applicable.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 63.
  • Force Sensitivity: Force User.
  • Species: Bull Rancor.
  • Appearance: Measuring almost five meters tall, Naasla is a female example of the Rancor species and a proud specimen of the Bull Rancors. Walking on two relatively stubby legs, with longer forelimbs with sharp long claws utilized for catching prey and dismembering prey, Naasla walks on all fours at most times and has a short tail. With a rancor's flat face dominated by a large mouth full of razor-sharp teeth which are hardly used for much since it can swallow smaller prey (such as humanoids) whole. With a brownish pale tone for skin as most members of the rancor species, being tough enough to deflect blaster bolts, making it an efficient killing machine in possession of a murderer.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Naasla.
  • Alias: Precious, Luna's Rancor, Lunafreya's Big Monster.
  • Loyalties: Lunafreya Solidor.
  • Notable Possessions: Her mace.
  • Personality: A highly aggressive and cunning creature. Naasla is very intelligent for a member of her species. Understanding much of what is said to her in Lunafreya's native language and the key words spoken in Galactic Basic, yet the rancor shows its uniqueness by being more than capable of pondering on strategies before hunting her prey, thinking of simple strategies before proceeding and ensuring the prey is within its reach. Naasla hardly does nothing in her day, she is always hunting, sniffing around, eating, dismembering and has showed a lot of taste for killing, doing it so almost with pleasure.
  • Training: Trained by Lunafreya herself ever since she was young to becoming her sow, to serve as her mount for all sorts of occasions such as traveling through land and into battle, for Naasla knows no fear and was taught how to defend itself better than most animals, understanding complex oral sentences said in High Elzaar by Lunafreya Solidor, which made Naasla immune even to mind-altering Force powers, except in the improbable case of a High Elzaar-fluent Force user. Naasla learned the hardships of hunting, battling and fighting both bare-handed and armed with primitive weaponry. The rancor due to her training learned to use the Force to find its prey, knowing how to track down and sense the presence of living being around her, and has demonstrated a certain amount of skill by using force speed while chasing her prey and force jump.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Combat Function: Armed with her heavy mace, the creature can be a deadly and dangerous thing to face. Either by crushing them with her primitive weapon, or by using her bare fists, Naasla can use her claws to cut through metal and flesh, can crush walkers with her brute strength, stump on soldiers to break their bodies and use her teeth to sink big pieces of whichever poor thing she bites.
  • Force Skills: Due to its training and physiological limitations, Naasla had displayed limitations when it came to its wielding of the Force. Most of that is considered due to its semi-sentience that despite being way above average rancors found in the galaxy it still shows the animal traits in which this creature is famous for.
    • Force Speed
    • Force Sense
    • Force Body
    • Force Sight
    • Force Scream
    • Force Rage
Strengths:
  • Strong as a Rancor: With massive strength in her body as suited for the members of her species, Naasla has more than enough power to crush walkers her size. To bend metal with her bare hands, rip male wookies apart and swallow humans whole.
  • Symbiotic Bonded: Sharing a bond with Lunafreya Solidor caused this rancor to have sharper vision-sight, to understand her commands spoken both with words and mentally. As Lunafreya has fully mastered the power of animal friendship, control over the rancor comes very easily to her.
Weaknesses:
  • Vulnerable: Their eyes and mouth are two major weak points. Where someone can easily use them against them.
  • Hide: Although with great pain resistance, their hide is not immune to most weaponry in the galaxy as a lightsaber can easily pierce through their hide.
  • Force Negation: As with most sith weaponry or force imbued weapon, any contact with any kind of Voidstone, Voidsteel, or nullification bubble such as the ysalamir can dampen, or temporarily remove the abilities of this creature. Causing it to turn back to a simple minded Rancor, some believe that contact with this sort of force negation cause even cause the creature to enter a feral state of mind where it cannot be controlled and will become hostile to everything around her, since it hasn't ever stayed without its connection with the Force in its life.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
From her days on her home planet, Kaikielius the Jewel of the Core, Lunafreya was famous for being a creature devoted to rampant and unnecessary shopping. On one of her trips to the obscure parts of the capital, the princess found herself at an auction, one of the famous events held at the flea market in the capital of Enfer in Kaikielius. When the sale was announced, she bid for the creature alone nearly sixty three years ago and raised it as her own, bringing havoc to the people on her homeplanet that were said to shiver by the mere sight of her rancor.

Nicknaming the creature as 'her precious', Lunafreya showed a lot of love to raising that nasty beast. She taught her everything she could, and infused the creature with her knowledge and imposed her will over the rancor. Due to her mastery surrounding the ancient power of animal friendship, the rancor became a friendly creature to every desire her mistress had, becoming her mount on long voyages or situations where a fabulous entry was required, being made her hunting 'hound' for whenever she felt like doing it so, her warrior, her defender and her watcher.
 
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Lunafreya Solidor Lunafreya Solidor

My name is Judah Lesan and I here to review your submission! I am a trainee so this will need a secondary review.

Might I say a Rancor that can use the force is a pretty neat idea. Taking a look at this submission, all the links seem to check out and everything here seems to be in order! I cannot wait to see what you do with the this!!

[APPROVED PENDING SECONDARY]

Srina Talon Srina Talon
 
Lunafreya Solidor Lunafreya Solidor | Judah Lesan Judah Lesan

As the previous Judge stated - I like the FU Rancor angle. Pretty sweet! Just a couple of notes...

1.) Suggestion for Weaknesses: As the creature is Force Sensitive, precious, and first of her name, another viable weakness to consider may be Void Stones or Ysalamir. They could cause quite an impact.

2.) Combat Function: As PVP is a natural part of Chaos we always have to consider I would suggest you list the main Force Abilities the creature uses in this section. Things like Force Speed would be important for any combatant to know at a glance.

When you're ready for me to look again just give me a tag. Thanks!
 
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