Pick your poison

[Delsin Shaw]

Alright. Grill me with what you have for my character. Tell me what is good about him, what is bad about him, Anything. Let me know.

Link for my bio is under my tags and whatnot.

 

[Gherron Dragovalor]

I like him when I'm roleplaying with him. *hint hint* Zephyr, like all of your characters, has his own interesting flare that you bring to the table as a writer. From the little bit I've seen of him in our thread, he definitely has the relation to his father Xander, but at the same time is his own person entirely. Maybe that's because he wants nothing to do with his dad xD But either way, awesome character.

[member="Zephyr Carrick"]

 

[NightSister]

[member="Zephyr Carrick"] I like your character (your bio is awesome by the way) - he has a complex history and an interesting tale - and I think that the first-person narration is effective and unique. You have a few grammar issues and it seems a little odd that with 874 posts you're still at Apprentice rank, but other than that, thumbs up all around

 

[Delsin Shaw]

[member="Rylan Thatcher"], Thank you for your words as always man.

[member="Aria Vale"], Thank you. Worked hard on the bio. It's appreciated of pointing out the grammar mistakes. I always try to do my best to read them through, and even use Word Doc or Google Docs when I can.

it seems a little odd that with 874 posts you're still at Apprentice rank, but other than that, thumbs up all around

I have that many posts because First, this used to be a previous character I didn't play. So I replaced them with Zeph. Second, Factory means I post a lot. Third, I didn't want to be a Knight just yet due to story complications. I would rather take my time and get everything done, then skip ahead really fast.

 

[Boggo Flib]

Needs to be more rebellious

 

[Alkor Centaris]

[member="Saverok"]

This guy.