Performance Review - Undin Jaii Kryze

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

Ahhh , [member="Jakkor Kess"] so beatiful for Undin to see him , he would be crushed. The boy ignored the droid , he couldn't scare him. As Titan went for an attack with sword , Undin Force Pushed the sword away from Titan's hands and leaped at him yet again , with one saber ready to pair a hit and the other one pointed towards [member="Titan Kryze"]'s neck. "I don't want to hurt you Titan , but you give me no choice".

[member="Harley"]

 

[Hailey Sosis]

[member="Titan Kryze"] [member="Undin Jaii Kryze"] [member="Jakkor Kess"]

Some ien tapped her on the shoulder, while she in force rage, her reply was swift and possibly brutal. She span around with her lightsaber at speed, in an attempted to cut his head off. She could not feel hear anything this was rage, at the injustice of trying to kill fourteen year old with a sword. She had only one emotion and that was hate, and she was good at this too. As she tried to hit the guy behind her, the blades would sweep into the guy with sword as well.

 

[Titan]

Titan's sword was ripped out of its sheath as he leaped at Undin with his hands in fists, the woman's slice glancing off the top off his helmet, Titan's Crushgaunts ready to pound the armor into pieces. While Undin jumped at Titan, Titan's fist would most likely make contact, retroactively, Undin's blade cut Titan's neck. Though it hurt, Titan wouldn't bleed do to the heat of the blade. He had one last card up his sleeve, for [member="Undin Jaii Kryze"] had attracted too much attention, Titan called [member="The Banshee"]. "You're up, let's get the kid." Titan yelled, "Iniate Force Nullification measures", causing two Yslmari nutrient frames to be deployed onto the roof as well as the mecharami pack on Titan's armour to be activated. Titan would then leap again at Undin his armour's inbuilt crushgaunts would be effective, quite effective. At that same moment the droid would leap as well.

[member="Jakkor Kess"]

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

Undin cut [member="Titan Kryze"]'s neck , but got a punch on the side by his crushgaunt. Happily , it didn't hurt as much as he'd expected. The armour absorved most of the hit. Undin leaned back and tapped his holocomms sending a distress signal to Thar Kmel who had the V-Wing nearby.
Thought as he did that some things came down front the roof and the boy felt the Force abandoning him.
As he looked again , he saw two enemies leaping at him, Titan and the droid. He dodged Titan's hit , but the droid punched him in the shoulder.
Again the damage didn't hurt much , because of his armour.
The boy backed off into a corner , put off his sabers and stored them. He then took a small vaccine out of one of his armour's pockets and injected himself. What was in that was Boost .

[member="Harley"]
[member="Jakkor Kess"]

 

[Akhilleus]

Gear: Seen Here

So many force users that just having the force gave them the right to do what they wanted. That they could Lord over other people, that they could use their abilities to kidnap, steal, kill, and torture all in the name of their sick and twisted pleasure. They thought themselves powerful and capable of taking on any threat. Just like the little brat that had come to Akhilleus' attention. Being a member of the Silver Sanctum he knew just who Undin was, the information of everything the boy had done did nothing but irk the few nerves Akhilleus had. He had even taken a break from his own hunting to stop and intervene. The boy would either stop everything he was doing or he would be left broken and bleeding. You were an adult on Hora at the age of thirteen and with Undin being 14 he would be judged like a grown man and suffer the consequences like one.

Where do these pompous, ignorant slimeball of kids learn such things? Akhilleus thought as he heard his cue to step in. The Hellyni would be sure to alert Undin's master to his actions and if anyone tried to stop him they'd be left bleeding. Akhilleus had fought masters before this would be a cake walk. Dressed in his Doom Bringer armour he walked up to the wall and tapped his fist against it. With a thought he released a blast of telekinetic energy that blew apart the wall revealing the scene of pure chaos to the Dark jedi. “Undin! In the name of the Silver Sanctum you will turn yourself in. If you resist... Well, do it. I dare you. I'm sure your master won't approve of what you've been doing. Though it may take you a few months to heal from what I'll do to you if you don't drop that saber.”

Rolling his eyes beneath his helmet Akhilleus heaved a sigh seeing some Sith fighting against another jedi. This entire thing looked like a fight ripped completely out of a holodrama everyone fighting for their own reasons thinking they were the best. Akhilleus had come fully decked out showing he meant what he was saying. The beskar throwing spikes were tucked safely away on his armor, along with the ballbearings, and even the Xendor's fury rifle. That wasn't even considering the amount of weapons built into the armor itself. HE wished the child tried to make an escape,, he'd be sure to let his master get his remains from the wreckage.

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]
[member="Titan Kryze"]
[member="Harley"]

 

[Jakkor Kess]

[member="Harley"]
He sensed the anger within his opponet and grinned beneth his mask. He parrys the blow,and activates his second blade he pulls from his belt,and attempts to push her forward using a mixture of both Djem So,and Jar'Kai into his own style. He knew that she must be sith,and this made his job even sweeter,but all he wanted right now was the boy,and his true enemy would have to wait till later.


He attempts to launch a series of powerfulvswings both left and right on her torso using his own anger to fuel his power,but under a certain point that he could use it,and not too close to the dark side,but just enough to work to his advantage and keep her preoccupied from the meeting.

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]
[member="Titan Kryze"]

 

[The Banshee]

[member="Jakkor Kess"] @Akhilleus @Undin Jaii Kryze [member="Titan Kryze"] [member="Harley"]​

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Out of nowhere the office window would suddenly explode in a shower of glass. A figure would shoot through the gap at high velocity, at first sight seeming to be more a nuclear warhead than an actual man. The figure's target seemed to be Harley, the Sith knight currently engaging his employer. He would lead the attack with a heavy kick aimed to plant right into her chest. The blow would feel like being hit by a train, as micronized Bes'kar wasn't something to take lightly.​

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Now that he wasn't flying like a missile, every person in the room could see the juggernaut that had just burst through the window. He was a hulking figure in a set of Bes'kar power armor that looked as if though it had cost several million credits (which it had). He held a menacing-looking sword that was obviously custom-made and quite pricey as well. A shotgun and an assault rifle were holstered at his waist, along with a plethora of grenades and other menacing devices. Adding insult to injury, a massive Bes'kar storm shield was strapped to his back. Simply put, he was a machine of war.​

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Spoiler

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He would follow up on the attack against Harley, his sword making swift and powerful cuts at her. By the way he moved it was obvious he had been trained to fight and kill users of the force. Hopefully she had something up her sleeve, or she would be dead within a few seconds. Especially considering the force dampeners had been erected..​

 

[Xiarr Sair]

Titan Industries headquarters was in chaos,a massive fight was breaking out and the employees were fleeing the building. [member="Titan Kryze"] had employed Xiarr to hunt down the brat [member="Undin Jaii Kryze"],a dream come true.

Xiarr expected guards,and found them,but with holes in their heads and chests,not a very pleasant way to die. He made his way to the top floor and stopped himself to examine the situation,there was a massive hole that leads to the office and he could barely make out [member="Titan Kryze"] and [member="The Banshee"]. He looked to his right to see [member="Jakkor Kess"] fighting [member="Harley"],Xiarr activated his blade and slammed his yellow blade against the sith's crimson one,Xiarr slightly held back,waiting for Jakkor to make his move.
[member="Akhilleus"]
(Sorry if I'm a bit sloppy with my writing,just came back from a huge LOA)

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

By now the effects of the Boost had kicked in. Everything seemed slower to Undin and he couldn't understand any words that [member="Akhilleus"] had said.
But he saw the V-Wing outside the window. As he started running at 30km/h , thanks to his Hermes Feather Boots , as he reached where the smashed window was, the boy jumped into the open ramp of the V-Wing and entered it , starting to slow down.
As he entered he started vomiting all over the ground, but some words could be heard "Tha----r eva...sve mane...uv--- 3-2-4" , which meant to enter Hyperspace , while in the atmosphere of said planet. It was a risky move, but it was the only the only option at this point. Thar screamed "Deactivating safety protocols and making the jump to hyperspace in 3...2...1...", the pilot pressed the hyperspace button. And there they were, it didn't seem that the ship suffered any damage , but there was a huge shake while entering it.
Undin started throwing up some more , as the drug started loosing it's effects , but other than that , it didn't seem to have done
any other effects.

(End of scene for Undin)


[member="Titan Kryze"] [member="Harley"] [member="Xiarr Sair"] [member="The Banshee"] [member="Jakkor Kess"] [member="Akhilleus"]

 

[Akhilleus]

My job can never be easy can it? Akhilleus thought yawning at the young boy that thought he was oh so powerful and about to make it out of the situation. Akhilleus had heard him threaten Titan Kryze, as well as watched the young jedi engage in combat. It seemed like he had arrived for nothing, the ones already gathered could've taken care of this. But he would be sure to deliver the news to the Sanctum about Undiin's turning and betrayal. The Hellyni had been generous enough to offer the kid a way out without getting killed or more injured than he already was. Of course Undiin would make a run for the window, those type of people always thought things would go their way. What idiot took him as a padawan again? I have to be sure to give whoever it is a good thrashing.

Undin thought he was moving faster than others could perceive but Akhilleus flew faster than the boy was running. Hell just about anybody there could've shot the boy in the back but how would that look on the holonet. Akhilleus could see the headlines now. Ignorant boy killed by room of bounty hunters. It would be quite the skeptical, not like he cared though. With the 360 degree vision offered by his helmet and the tracking sensors Akhilleus was already well aware of the V-wing before it even arrived at the window. Hand rising he tighted it into a fist. A simple exertion of force would cause the canopy of the v-wing to blow out glass turning into lethal shrapnel and killing whoever be unfortunate enough to be in the cockpit. The second hand moved doing the same motion and an invisible fist latched onto the V-wings wing. With a wave of his left arm the wing would be ripped away letting the dead ship tumble to the ground. IF the child was inside he'd be falling to his death or he could jump back into the building. Either way it didn't phase Akhilleus, sometimes the galaxy was an ill fated mistress. Undin had to learn that the hard way.

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

(since you cut my post, this is pre-jumping out of window)

As Undin saw the V-Wing's glass being shattered , he turned, thank god for the faster perception the drug had given him. As he turned, he was still going at 30km/h , he run all the way accross the small office room and punched [member="Akhilleus"] , or atleast tried to punch him. Even with armor , a punch of something going as fast as Undin was , would of have hurt. As he continued running trought the room to try and gain more speed , he saw Thar jumping out of the V-Wing and landing in a nearby building's roof. Atleast he got without too much damage, as Undin saw him he had some glass on right arm. Undin looked back to see a blue-like tracer following him. He was young and he thought that's what happens when you go as fast as he was going.
[member="Akhilleus"]
[member="Jakkor Kess"] [member="Titan Kryze"] [member="Xiarr Sair"]r [member="The Banshee"] [member="Harley"]

 

[Titan]

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"] @Akhilleus @Xiarr Sair [member="The Banshee"] [member="Jakkor Kess"] [member="Harley"]

Spoiler: nevermind

Above the planet:

As That pushed the button, the ship jumped forward and entered hyperspace, but would be violently ripped back out. "Attention unnammed V-wing. This is the Duchess of Mandalore. You are under arrest. If you resist you will be fired upon." Titan's contingency plan had worked. The officer in charge of the Captivator class cruiser would turn to contact Titan, "Sir, we have him."


Ships in orbitAll fighter's are Starbird class heavy Interceptors)(Total squadrons: 6)(Total fighters: 72)

• Duchess of Mandlor; Captivator class cruiser
• The Kalevala; Finisher class cruiser
• The Corrillea; FInisher class cruiser
• The Mandalore Risen; Finisher class cruiser
• The Carrick's Legacy; Finisher Class Cruiser
• The Behemoth; Behemoth Class Assault Cruiser

Titan knew that the combination of the Yslmari and the Mecharami pack would nullify most force use. And as such, he leapt for Undin again, trying to pummel with him repeated punches.

 

[Hailey Sosis]

[member="Titan Kryze"] [member="Undin Jaii Kryze"] [member="Akhilleus"] [member="Xiarr Sair"] [member="Jakkor Kess"]
As her lightsaber skimmed the helmet of the one trying hurt the boy, and was blocked by another. She then felt her power in the force drain away, as two nutrient tubes where lowered. She quickly threw her lightsaber in the air, cutting both lizards down and killing them. As she did @banshee kicked her in the chest, the blow sent her flying out of the window. She was forced to run, for it bloody bullies trying to kill a fourteen year old.

 

[Akhilleus]

At least he was smart enough to not jump onto the ship. Outside the building there would be an explosion from the ship falling down and colliding with the ground down below. Undin's escape was now gone and there wasn't a hint of regret from Akhilleus. He honestly just wished that the boy would turn himself in. The chances of him facing death were few if he gave in instead of trying to fight. It was even more foolish that Undin tried to attack the beskar clad Hellyni. He must've been watching too many holodrama's. Problem with running that fast and hitting a solid object was that while it did hit harder it would also destroy the bones in Undin's arm. That would've been just hitting a human body, hitting beskar he'd probably need a prosthetic. The Sanctum has to review their applicants more often.How did the jedi there not sense the traitorous and quite frankly disgusting aura of the young boy? Did they know and thought they could change him? No the only way to change stubborn boys was a stern discipline.

When the punch came Akhilleus simply took a step backwards on his right foot and leaned back dodging the blow. Blasterbolts moved far faster than Undin on the drugs and shoes. He wasn't even going as fast as a speeder. Beneath his visor Akhilleus' eyes squinted as the targeting hud did the work of tracking Undin and then he'd begin to create a barrier around Undin, layer after layer of telekinetic energy would build up around Undin trapping him in a bubble constructed of pure energy. If he didn't stop running before it closed around him he'd hit the wall and simply die from the force of impact. Running at speeds like he was now and hitting something would easily kill the child. Though with the Vong armor chances were he'd be able to at least survive with some organ damage. Even if he came to a complete stop the body couldn't handle it and the boy would possibly began vomiting everywhere. Not on my boots!

With the rest of his vision granted by the helmets HUD, Akhilleus saw the sith still engaging all the other force users. She had come in here, did she truly think she could beat and escape all of them. She was even distracted right now with the glow of her eyes. Akhilleus felt the surge of energy and reached out with his left hand forming it into a claw. An invisible tendril would reach out to wrap around the woman's throat in a force choke. An attack commonly used by the Sith but was also apart of Akhilleus repitiore.

[member="Harley"] [member="Titan Kryze"] [member="Undin Jaii Kryze"] [member="Xiarr Sair"] [member="The Banshee"] [member="Jakkor Kess"]

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

The effect of the drug were passing and Undin started slowing down as a barrier started forming around him. He stopped and said "I give up. There's no point fighting you.". He went near [member="Akhilleus"] and all of the sudden started vomiting on him, for a good 30 seconds. After he stopped , he cleaned his mouth and said "Sorry".

 

[Xiarr Sair]

Xiarr stared into [member="Harley"]'s eyes and felt massive amounts of pain,he could barely hold his saber up,struggling to stay alive. Suddenly a claw appeared on the sith's,throat choking her,and the pain stopped. Xiarr fell to his knees and tried and regain his energy. After a couple of minutes,Xiarr regained his strength,when he got back up he actviated his lightsaber and went into a Soresu stance for good measure. He then looked over to [member="Akhilleus"] and thanked him. "Thank you,I could only imagine would what happen if you didn't arrive."
[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]
[member="Titan Kryze"]
[member="The Banshee"]
[member="Jakkor Kess"]

 

[Titan]

"Thank you Undin. Now if you don't mid I'm going to freeze you in carbonite for a little while until I get some meds and contact those who want you." Was all that Titan said as he sprayed him with the Ranger's Sprayer. Now he turned his attention [member="Harley"], unleashing a burst of Force lighning, he attempted to electrocute her, his attack combined with [member="Akhilleus"]'s tentacles, and [member="Xiarr Sair"]'s punch and kick would leave no room for error.


[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]

 

[The Banshee]

As Harley flew out the window, the Banshee quickly turned around to see the bounty being frozen in carbonite. He relaxed his shoulders, his contract was complete. The Paladin Consortium would bill Titan for his services, though they frankly didn't turn out to be much. Either way, another day another dollar.​