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Approved Tech ORC Unrepentant Force Grid

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Jorus Merrill

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  • [SIZE=11pt]Thaissen crystal emits constant minuscule glow. Stops glowing when affected by ysalamiri or void stone. [/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=11pt]Central processor tracks distributed modules’ lightmeter readings and extrapolates position of centre of Force-null field.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=11pt]Detects a large Force-null field and approximates its point(s) of origin.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=11pt]Only incidentally and rarely capable of detecting individual ysalamiri or small void stones. Only really works against larger effects.[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=11pt]Vulnerable to slicing or jamming if set up hastily (wirelessly).[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]An Unrepentant is a central command unit connected, wirelessly or by landline, to dozens of fist-sized capsules across a city. Each capsule holds a small and insignificant Force-attuned object which causes a small thaissen crystal to glow almost imperceptibly. The glow is not visible outside the capsule, but a sensitive lightmeter sends a constant signal to the central command unit. When a Force-null field overlaps with one of the capsules, the object can no longer cause the crystal to glow. The central command unit tracks the lost signal as a suspected ysalamir contact. Since conglomerate ysalamir fields tend to be round, the Unrepentant can quickly estimate the approximate location of the sphere's centre. If that proves empty, perhaps multiple points of emanation are involved. The Unrepentant then provides its operator with possibilities and probabilities based on the fairly simple geometry of Force-null fields. Better yet, since ysalamiri bubbles have an abrupt border and void stone often has a more gradual effect, the Unrepentant can usually tell them apart.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]The Outer Rim Coalition developed the Unrepentant after the Mandalorian Empire used Bral vehicles to attack Pau City. Every major city and base in Coalition territory has a secret landline Unrepentant installed. [/SIZE]

Alric Kuhn

Handsome K'lor'slug
This seems absolutely fine to me and honestly is a long time coming. The technology that this counters has been used on Chaos for years now, and the way this submission works makes sense to me.
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