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Approved NPC Sith Medical Corps

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To update an old sub
  • Image Credit: Repo
  • Role: Healer
  • Permissions: My Subs
  • Links: N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Group Name: Sith Medical Corps
  • Affiliation: Al-Khālī: The Academy of the Dead
  • Classification: Medics, Healers, Doctors, Researchers
  • Description: Various species brought together under the banner of the sith who specialized as doctors and healers. Force users and non force users alike but with questionable ethics in ways. Seras assembled them and clad them in thick coats and masks. Twisting and perverting much of their research into better means to kill and harm. THey have spent years in the academy of the dead improving their skills aand sending out teams to extract experiment subjects from across the galaxy.
UNIT INFORMATION:
Strengths:
  • High Specialized: Dedicated to years if not decades of training in research, healing and medical services.
Weaknesses:
  • Corp Size: While trained and taught they are refined over decades... the academies isolation means the ones who survive are the best of the worst at the terrible things they do but there is not a lot of them roughly a hundred.
  • Non-Combative: While they are given armored equipment they are not highly trained fighters. Aside from defensive moves.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Built for the One Sith to mirror and give the illusion of caring. The Siths Medical Corp is headed by one of their more questionable doctors. A remnant from the old Sith Empire who survived being encased in a preservation suit. Seras has taught them to not really care about their original oaths through treatment. The doctors are strapped to one of the racks within the camps and treated by Seras until they are angry enough to come off the rack. Inflicting the same pain and torment applied to them upon others.

The few and far between healers within the corps are not masters. Their healing is weak compared to jedi healers, it is more akin to applying a band aid instead of real healing. The levels of darkside mastery and control far beyond what they are able to do.

Their morals on the battlefield are more in question, with the Roanoke ships the brutality of the corp is on display. Prison and forced labor camps, experimentation on prisoners instead of sealing them away in cells to wait and consume resources. They're used as laborers by their betters until their bodies fall into the dust and serve further experiments. The morals that have been abandoned by the corp is treated with a mentality from the original dark jedi who formed the basis for the new order of the Sith.

They took what they learned, they took what had been taught to them and twisted it into something darker. A corrupted mirror that perverted the teachings and schooling given. That is the appeal for those who join, if they are so inclined they can now use their skills to handle those dangerous patients. The one who killed a bunch of people and is fine, or one murders... Now he can be removed from the galaxy. Seras working with them to make sure they are every bit as sick as herself, twisted men and women in iron mask.

THe years since the fall of the ONe Sith have seen the medical corp retreat deeper into isolation.. their lab and academy being largely ignored helped as well. No one came to a dead planet... most charts wouldn't even show it. THey have continued to develop biological weapons as well as experimentation on older ones like the orchid and imperial blackwing... the reawakening of species like the drengir that can corrupt and assimilate beings into their root mind.

Seras has worked with them to improve even more as their containment of experiments has doubled... the academy being given fresh defenses from selling to the highest bidders who want to handle population problems with weapons that won't come back to them. Their actions on worlds attacked by other sith, mandalorians which allows experiments to be tested or subjects taken is better. Their numbers not exploding and becoming massive when compared to other groups in the galaxy but they were always better at reducing numbers more and more.
 
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I'll be honest - this entire sub confuses me to no end.

They're infantry, then they're healers. They heal things, then they inflict damage? I'm not following, and there doesn't seem to be any cohesion within this write up.

Also, you need to consider the fact that Jedi Healers use Lightside Healing techniques that are not available to Sith or Darkside users. So this line:

They are everything jedi healers and doctors are with skills to match them...
does not compute if we are talking about darkside Force users.


And this?
but they have more morals.
more morals than who? Than Jedi? But they're inflicting damage through subtle means and experimenting on things? That doesn't work.


This sentence:
They use the flag of medics to inflict with special tools to find what they could.
It needs some attention as it makes no sense whatsoever.


Overall, this entire sub needs to be looked over and re-written to clarify what the idea of this group is. I suggest working with your fellow rpers from your listed threads and having them help you better define what this group is, what it does, how it operates, and why.

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and the healing skills of a jedi can be used with the darkside it is just not as strong or as lasting. One needs to be submerged in the dakrisde to use the techniques darksiders developed to heal on a larger scale. Either way though darkside healers are very rare and there is one for every one hundred doctors.
 
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Built for the One Sith to mirror and give the illusion of caring. The Siths Medical Corp is headed by one of their more questionable doctors. A remnant from the old Sith Empire who survived being encased in a preservation suit. Seras has taught them to not really care about their original oaths through treatment. The doctors are strapped to one of the
This sentence is unfinished.

These are doctors not fallen jedi healers, they might have a dark healer among them but the nature of darkside healing is.... dangerous among other things. Darkside healers must be some of the strongest sorcerers.

It is very advanced and power, the few who can do it are not apprentices or knights but dedicated masters who have pushed the darkness throughout every fiber of their being and must use the more arcane magics to bludgeon the reality around them. These men and women cannot do that sort of magic, standard healing with the darkside by their force users is temporary, is weaker and leaves more scars on the surface. The emotions to heal with the darkside possible but rare which is why the unit is more non force users who use surgical equipment to find unique specimens.
These sentences add a confusing connotation to this sub in the way they are placed and the way they are worded. I believe you are trying to explain that true Masters of darkside healing are very powerful, but the way they are added to this sub could be misconstrued to mean that your Healers are that powerful. I would simply omit these lines completely and state that your FU Healers are not Masters of the craft, and that their powers are temporary and weaker (as stated above in yellow). This will help get rid of any ambiguity in the wording here.


Their used as laborers by their betters until their bodies fall into the dust and serve further experiments.
They're



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The few and far between healers within the corps are not masters. Their healing is weak compared to jedi healers, it is more akin to applying a band aid instead of real healing. The levels of darkside mastery and control far beyond what they are able to do. The rare healer among the doctors is not a master, they do not have the connection to the darkside nor the ability.
This sentence just seems to be a rephrasing of the three sentences preceding it? Unless the "few and far between healers" and "the rare healer" are two different things.
 
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