Work In Progress Okkeus’s Personal X-Wing "Thunderstruck"

[Okkeus Dainlei]

MANIAC below

Time to finally finish this thing out.

Below is a list of all the changes made to this sub.

List of changes made:

Changed:

• Strengths and Weaknesses: To add more description onto them, and get into more detail
• Maneuverability: High to Very High
• Speed: Very High to Extreme
• Link in items for the Temporary Accelerator Pod

Added:

• Subs/Items:
• A whole mess of Canon items

• Description
• Expanded more on the description of the ship
• Added more of what the ship is being used for now

Removed:

• List of battles and services from description

I changed out the link for the Temporary Accelerator Pod, now that Wookieepedia has created a page for it.

I’ve also added the strengths/weakness for the hyperdrive.

 

[MANIAC]

Okkeus Dainlei

Thank you! Now one problem left, you still need Caden Evesa's permission to use his as a Manufacturer. If you can't get his permission, please remove his name from the template.

 

[Okkeus Dainlei]

MANIAC got the permission from him and added it to the sub

 

[MANIAC]

Okkeus Dainlei

Thank you, but please include the question as well, because from this the next judge will not know why and to what he gave you the permission.

 

[Okkeus Dainlei]

Caden Evesa’s Permission on listing him as manufacturer

MANIAC does this work?

 

[MANIAC]

Okkeus Dainlei

You posted the same picture again.

 

[Okkeus Dainlei]

MANIAC whoops, that it got changed out. Should be fixed now

 

[MANIAC]

Okkeus Dainlei

Now perfect! Thank you for your cooperation and understanding!

Re-approved.

 

[AMCO]

PRE-FACTORY TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Okkeus’s Personal X-wing “Thunderstuck”
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Pre-Factory Request: Updating and Expanding, as always

Moved per request.

Please include a list of changes and change the tag to "Ready for Judge" once the submission is ready for judgement.