Approved Tech Noah's Custom Tenloss RAB

[Noah Corek]

Image Credit: http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110223001520/fallout/images/thumb/6/6c/Automatic_rifle.png/640px-Automatic_rifle.png
Intent: To create a customized version of a weapon I really like
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Tenloss Corporation (Original Maker) Noah Corek (Modifier)
Model: Noah's Custom Tenloss Repeating Accelerated Beam Weapon
Affiliation: Noah Corek
Modularity: Yes, it can be upgraded with various modifications common to ranged weapons.
Production: Unique
Materials: Trimantium-Titanium Alloy (Inner Workings and Shell), Wroshyr-Wood (Handguard and Carrying Handle), Light-Weight Polymer (Pistol Grip and Stock) and a Quadanium Steel Barrel
Classification: Particle Accelerator weapon
Size: Handheld
Length: 120.3 Centimeters
Weight: 8.8 Kilograms
Ammunition Type: Power cell
Ammunition Capacity: 60 Shots
Effective Range: 1,000 Meters
Rate of Fire: Semi-Auto and Fully Auto
Special Features:

• Particle accelerator
• Low recoil due to weight of weapon
• Even more robust and durable design
• Quick Change Barrels
• Carrying Handle
• Recoil Dampener in the stock
• Bipod

Description: When the Tenloss Corporation RAB came out, Noah was the perfect weapon that could reforge and make his own. The first thing did was complete gut the weapon, examining the weapon and its parts, once Noah got a feel for these parts, he created all knew parts from scratch, milling new parts from a custom made Trimantium-Titanium alloy that allowed it to be more durable than the original Alusteel design but be only be a fourth of a kilo heavier. Noah found even though the weapon was pretty accurate due to its weight weighing it down when fired, it still had a problem with accuracy on full auto. To solve this Noah replaced the barrel with one made of Quandanium Steel and added a more advanced recoil dampener in the stock, which was made of light-weight polymer. To make it more accurate and easier to handle as well, the rifle grip it had was replaced with a pistol grip, made of the same materials as the stock. Also to add more stability when firing stationary, Noah added a bipod, for ease of carrying as well Noah added a carrying handle. When testing the RAB, Noah found that if fired for long enough, it had a tendency to overheat the barrel, Noah remedied this problem by making the barrel easy to swap out in case of overheating. Finally one more thing was added, a more finely tuned energy capacitor, this allowed a extra ten shots to be squeezed out of the standard fifty shot power cell of the RAB.
Strengths:

• High Stopping Power
• High Fire Rate

Weaknesses:

• Cumbersome
• Low Capacity

​Original Submission

 

[Ellie Mors]

I'm not sure if you realize or not, but your effective range is listed as 1,100 m, while the original is 1000 m. There was no mention in the description for this change, I would like to see it either explained or the range lowered back to 1000 m.

Source: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/43094-tenloss-rab-weapon/

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[Noah Corek]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Sorry, that was a typo. Fixed.

 

[Ellie Mors]

I need the link to the original placed somewhere in your submission for reference purposes, as there are various things about the weapon that are not mentioned at all in this submission and to clarify the differences between the original and the new.
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[Noah Corek]

[member="Silara Vantai"]
Done.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.