Approved Tech Narma's Talon

[Kaleleon]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create a larger side arm to be used in longer range combat scenarios
• Image Source: Artstation - Aetherpunk Pistols, Sergey Okhotnikov
• Canon Link:
  
  • E-851 Pistol
  • Maser
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Kaleleon, Narma - Tuk'ata Nobillis Good Girl
• Affiliation: Kaleleon
• Market Status: Closed-Market, Personal Use
• Model: Narma's Talon
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material:
  
  • Frame/Chamber Construction
    
    • Condensed-Matter Composite
    • Reinforced Stygian-Triprismatic Polymer
    • Dallorian Alloy
  • Barrel/Rail Construction
    
    • Hadrium
    • Dallorian Alloy
    • Stygian-Tripprismatic polymer
  • Grip Construction
    
    • Condensed-Matter Composite
    • Zal Alloy
    • Tuk'ata Nobillis Bone

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Long-arm, Maser Pistol
• Size: Large
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Power Cell
• Ammunition Capacity: Very Low - 6 Shots
• Effective Range: Long Range
• Rate of Fire: Average
• Damage Output: Extreme
• Recoil: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Auto-Steady Gymbal
• Magnetic Holster Lock
• Cautionary Pulser
• Upgraded Galven Pattern
• Beam Splitter
• Amplifying Chamber
• Red-Eye
• Hair Trigger
• Isotope-5 Charger

STRENGTHS

• Long Range for a Pistol
• High Damage Output for a pistol. Rivals Carbine/Rifle Rounds
• Very Low Recoil

WEAKNESSES

• Low Shot count of 6.
• Low rate of fire as a momentary charge up time to fire the weapon.
• Large, and heavy "pistol" that should have probably been used more like a Carbine

DESCRIPTION
Kaleleon has been dealing with the guilt of Narma's death ever since Csilla. Able to recover a Tuk'ata bone, he set to work on making a weapon that would commemorate, and celebrate her life with him. She may have only been a "Good girl" as a pet, but it was one of the few true friends Kale had as an apprentice, and becoming a Jedi Knight. With the construction of the weapon to be a larger than life pistol, shaped fairly closely to a talon, as well as using bone for the grip, the weapon's name sake is being personified. Using heat resistant materials to better withstand the Maser construction, Auto-Steady Gymbal, and Condensed-Matter Composite to help reduce recoil, as well as a reinforced polymer of Duraplast in the form of Stygian-Triprismatic Polymers, allow for a sturdy, and hardy construction to not injure the wielder when in use.

 

[Ravenfire]

Kaleleon

Hi there, I will be your judge for this submission.

This is a pretty neat gun but in terms of balance it is under ratings by about 4
Unique - -4
Large - -1
Heavy - -1
Ammo - Very small (not very low) - -2
Long range - +1
Low - -1
Very High - +2
Recoil - Very Low - +2

Balances out to -4. So you can improve some ratings and/or you could also bump production up to semi-unique which still allows for the stygian polymers.

 

[Kaleleon]

Ravenfire

Edited some of the ratings. Let me know if that is good.

 

[Ravenfire]

Kaleleon

Looks good, if you can just change the naming of the rating of your ammo to very low and the recoil to None, so that they match the ratings listed in the template, I can push this through.

 

[Kaleleon]

Flipped around the Ammo rating so it has the rating first before the count of the shots, and changed the rating to none.

Ravenfire

 

[Ravenfire]

Kaleleon

Cheers thank you.

Approved.