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Approved Tech Mt. Muspelheim Shoto

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  • Intent: Create a standard unique lightsaber.
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Lightsaber
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Light
SPECIAL FEATURES

Flat Lightsaber blade, enabling better use against armor joints and greater aerodynamics when swung or thrown.

Lava Crystal from Mt Muspelheim on Atrisia, enabling greater cutting power against saber resistant metals due to magical enchantments

Enchanted to reduce Owner's presence in The Force.

Enchanted to cause great pain and damage on dark beings

Grants extreme resistance to flames and heat damage.

Enchanted to teleport to Starlin whenever he has need of it.

If Owner knows Pyrokinesis, the blade is enchanted to help him direct the flames easier.

Slowly regenerates Owner's health if injured

Lava is sometimes generated from the blade when active, allowing for a minor ranged attack involving lava droplets.

STRENGTHS

Power of Muspelheim: The lava crystal was harvested from the holy volcano of Mt. Muspelheim on Atrisia, famously the site of the Atrisian Jedi Cidd Cindurr's execution. Cidd was possessed of such intense magical power that every lava crystal that formed from the magma residue of the Volcano was forever twisted by the magical energy she released on her agonizing death. The lava crystal is thus enchanted to make the wielder nearly immune to flames and heat damage as its primary benefits. In addition, as a Lava Crystal powers the blade, the blade can flick lava generated off its surface at enemies for a ranged attack.

Healing: The Power of the enchanted crystal causes the owner to regenerate their health if injured at the speed of a regular bio restorative underlay.

Cutting: The power of the crystal allows it to cut through saber resistant metals slightly faster than normal due to magical enchantments

Anti-Dark Side: The magic of the blade allows it to cause great pain and harm to dark aligned beings

Teleport: Encounters with Laertia Io have allowed Syd to experiment in using Force Teleport more in her enchantings. Whenever Starlin needs it, as long as it is within a hundred meter radius, it will teleport back to him when he mentally reaches out for it

WEAKNESSES

Force Voids: Will not function in Force Voids

Water: Water shuts it down for three minutes

Reach: Its a shoto, not a full length blade

Weight: As the blade generates intense power it is more compact, thus it has slightly more strength required to swing it properly

DESCRIPTION

Cidd Cindurr was an ancient Jedi cast from the Order not for any crime except a natural affinity for Dathomir type magic. As magic was considered heretical to The Jedi in the time period she was born in, she was censured and then eventually banished from the Order when she tried to instruct a number of select padawans on magic. The exiled Cidd settled on Atrisia, where she sought redemption trying to free the planet from a cruel tyrant, starting her own heretical order of magic using priestesses to oppose him, even stealing strange Flame Magic from a Sith Spirit to aid in her efforts to overthrow the despot. Her rebellion was unsuccessful, The Emperor appealing to The Republic to help him stop her, which they did, by sending the Jedi to route her forces. Cidd was captured and delivered to the imperial authorities of Atrisia, where The Emperor of Atrisia himself personally executed her, violently dismembering her with her own lightsabers and casting her remains into the fires of Mt. Muspelheim, a powerful, active volcano that had a reputation for being a place to find Lava Crystals and also holding great spiritual significance to Atrisians.

Cidd's magic infused blood and flesh was so powerful even dead that the Volcano was forever twisted, any lava crystal found afterward at the site containing traces of Cidd's power and essence. Muspelheim Lava Crystals from before Cidd's execution are incredibly rare.

The Jedi would eventually reexamine the role they had played in Cinndurr's death, and eventually came to conclude that the entire affair, from her exile to her death, was one of the darkest, most shameful chapters in The Jedi Order's history. Due to still prevaling and vehement resistance to doctrinal re-examination at the time, The Jedi did not alter their stance on the use of magic, they did however, pay quiet remembrance to her by establishing an optional meditative and reflective exercise for Jedi who were being considered for acknowledging as a Master. Those who took it would travel to Atrisia, and seek out a lava crystal expelled by Muspelheim, constructing a flat bladed, ceremonial lightsaber shoto around it as an expression of humility towards the exiled Jedi and an eternal reminder that the Jedi Order sometimes gets it disasterously wrong when it comes to deciding who is on the path to the Dark Side. Indeed, so shamed was the Council that exiled her, that they voluntarily demoted themselves to Knight upon witnessing her execution, and spent the rest of their days not speaking a word. Syd obtained this example during an archeological dig. A high quality artifact, albeit the tradition has long since been lost to history IC, and thus Syd does not understand the full significance of the weapon she found, nor her connection to it, but could not help passing the weapon to Starlin due to its useful qualities.
 
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Hey there, Syd Celsius Syd Celsius !

Thanks for taking the time to use the Factory! I'm going to be going through the review and approval process with you for this submission. If you feel you need more clarification on anything I have said throughout the process at any point, please do not hesitate to ask.

SPECIAL FEATURES
Lava Crystal from Mt Muspelheim on Atrisia, enabling greater cutting power against saber resistant metals
Can you please clarify how the Lava Crystal enables greater cutting power against saber resistant metals? The Wookieepedia article doesn't state this, unless this is part of the enchantment used on the Lava Crystal itself in this case. Or maybe that is a special property of Lava Crystals harvested on Atrisia that differs from Lava Crystals found elsewhere in the galaxy? If this is the case, though, I'll need a link to the Codex sub if there is one.

SPECIAL FEATURES
Grants total immunity to flames and heat damage.
Please try to avoid absolute terminology here such as "Total Immunity". I'd suggest something more along the lines of "extreme resistance"

STRENGTHS

Power of Muspelheim: The lava crystal was harvested from the holy volcano of Mt. Muspelheim on Atrisia, famously the site of the Atrisian Jedi Cidd Cindurr's execution. Cidd was possessed of such intense magical power that every lava crystal that formed from the magma residue of the Volcano was forever twisted by the magical energy she released on her agonizing death. The lava crystal is thus enchanted to make the wielder immune to flames and heat damage as its primary benefits. In addition, as a Lava Crystal powers the blade, the blade can flick lava generated off its surface at enemies for a ranged attack.


Healing: The Power of the enchanted crystal causes the owner to regenerate their health if injured at the speed of a regular bio restorative underlay.

Cutting: The power of the crystal allows it to cut through saber resistant metals slightly faster than normal.

Anti-Dark Side: The magic of the blade allows it to cause great pain and harm to dark aligned beings

Teleport: Encounters with Laertia Io have allowed Syd to experiment in using Force Teleport more in her enchantings. Whenever Starlin needs it, as long as it is within a hundred meter radius, it will teleport back to him when he mentally reaches out for it
I'm only highlighting this as it is reflected in my earlier suggestion. This is just about the wording and use of absolute terminology such as "immune"

Please remember to tag me with any edits or changes made to this submission.
 
Jorik Valnora Jorik Valnora

The cutting power aspect of the Lava crystal itself is due to the enchantment that has been applied to it. It is not that it is from Atrisia, just this particular volcanic area that was magically infused due to the death of the Jedi that occured on it. I have altered some of the language to reflect this.
 
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