Me as a Writer

[The Red of Sinner]

I understand a lot of you do not believe I should be here, and you're probably right, but here I am regardless due to the mercy and kindness the Staff Team as shown me. What I want to know, though from you guys, is this:

• What Do You Like About Me, and My Writing?
• What Do You Dislike About Me, and My Writing?
• What Do You Want Me To Approve On As A Writer?
• What I Need To Keep.
• Any Other Comments You May Have.

Yes, I am opening for direct, and harsh punishment. I wont get better with a slap on the wrist. So abuse me, roast me, applaud me, show me what I can do better, and where I am just fine. I have done some pretty fucked up things, and I want to atone for that, get a clean slate.


Be Honest. Be Hard.

 

[La'kuus Quelin]

*Gulps and slowly points to sugar tea.*

Your writing has minor flaws... I can't point them out but they're somewhere there.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

@La'kuus Quelin

Yes my fingers seem to be faster than my brain. I make many small errors in my writing.

Thank you for pointing it out...dont think someone has said that to me in a long time.

 

[La'kuus Quelin]

[member="Romeo Sin"]

I'm helpful. Yes.

 

[Aithne Charr]

You are you. That is really all there is to say. You are unique in how... insane you are up in the head and really do not have a filter. That bleeds into your characters and i can always tell what will happen in situations. Predictability is not a bad thing though, it helps get a feel for both you as a writer and your characters. So take solace in that predictability.