Approved Planet Lu'um u K'i'ik'el

[Khali Strahd]

[member="Scherezade deWinter"]

I put the image for the shield into Tineye and all it brought me to was some clothing store and I couldn't find the image. I will try again, but it's not looking hopeful.

I actually was putting the coordinates outside of the galaxy sphere for a reason, to show just how isolated and independent the civilization is, and I didn't see anything wrong with expanding the known/unknown universe as space IS limitless. Unless it's OOC impossible to put a planet outside of the galaxy sphere with the map mechanics or whatever, I don't see anything wrong with this.

For the Sobreviente. It didn't really occur to me to put a focus on them, so I didn't think to make a racial post for them as well. I'll get to working on that soon.

I'll link the K'i'ik'el'i.

With the affiliations. I had previously done an edit where I did link them, so I thought that was done, but evidently it didn't save correctly. I'll get that fixed.

I can definitely add more locations. Originally the main city was a major location, but they made a separate section for that. and also with the destroyed cave where the Sith performed the ritual was another one, but turned out there was a separate section for that too. I'll fill out the major locations better.

I gave the Weenel Falls a strength rating. as another focal point for the planetary nexus, it has a weak influence on the population.

For military and technology. Do you mean an actual sub, or just a picture? I can get a picture easily, but I don't have any technology threads prepared for the ships of the K'i'ik'el.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

[member="Khali Strahd"]

Required edits

(1) I found the image on instagram Just add this link and it'll be good.


(2)

I actually was putting the coordinates outside of the galaxy sphere for a reason, to show just how isolated and independent the civilization is, and I didn't see anything wrong with expanding the known/unknown universe as space IS limitless. Unless it's OOC impossible to put a planet outside of the galaxy sphere with the map mechanics or whatever, I don't see anything wrong with this.

It is impossible to have a planet placed outside of the galaxy. You can choose any empty hex on the map that's within the galaxy to move it to.

This concludes the edits that are needed - these and it'll be stampable.

Let's move on to the ones suggested:

I gave the Weenel Falls a strength rating. as another focal point for the planetary nexus, it has a weak influence on the population.

Cool

For military and technology. Do you mean an actual sub, or just a picture? I can get a picture easily, but I don't have any technology threads prepared for the ships of the K'i'ik'el.

I meant a link to a sub on the site or a page on the wookie Pictures don't really portray relevant data beyond the cosmetic. But you don't have to.

Please tag me when you've made the edits.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

[member="Khali Strahd"] Checking in 'cuz it's been four days. What's the status of this submission?

 

[Khali Strahd]

[member="Scherezade deWinter"]

Sorry! I've been kinda distracted lately. I think I fixed the ones that had to be fixed, like the coordinates and the link, but I haven't made a Sub for their technology or ships yet.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

[member="Khali Strahd"]

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  Coordinates: 9, N.

The new coordinates you have chosen are still outside of the galaxy borders [screenshot].

Your planet's coordinates need to be in the galaxy's borders.

Additionally, you still write that:

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  Region: The Unknown beyond the boarders of the galaxy.
  

I have explained that this is impossible.

Please make this edit and make sure your planet's within the borders of the Galaxy.


Tech/ships subs are not mandatory.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

[member="Khali Strahd"] Checking in as it's been four days. What's the status of this submission?

 

[Khali Strahd]

[member="Scherezade deWinter"]

I'm looking at the Old map since the new interactive one doesn't show any coordinates. how does 29,AN sound?

When I put in 9,N I could have sworn it was inside the galaxy boundaries. Do they keep changing the map or something? because I'm almost certain that it was when I put those coordinates in.

Here's a pic of the spot on the new map

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

[member="Khali Strahd"] The old man isn't getting changed, but we all make mistakes Confirmed, the location you've marked is AN-29.

Add that in and make the other edit I've asked for and we can pass this submission along Please remember to tag me once it's done.

 

[Khali Strahd]

[member="Scherezade deWinter"]

Done. I said it's in Wild space close to the Tingel Arm. Does that work?

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

[member="Khali Strahd"] Yup! Pending secondary approval!

 

[Kuzo]

Approved.