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Approved Tech LO-56A MKII

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High Commander of the Lilaste Order
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To sub a standard Armor set for the Lilaste Order soldiers
  • Image Source: Commissioned by me from andrios1#6386
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Standard Lilaste Armor
  • Weight: Average
  • Resistances:
    • Energy Weapons: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
    • Kinetic Weapons: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
    • Lightsabers: Very High [Plating = Very low]
    • EMP/Ion: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
    • Vacuum/Pressure: High
    • Environmental: Average [Plating = Very High]
    • Radiation: Average [Plating = Average]
    • Disruptor: Low [Plating = Very low]
    • Electricity: Low [Plating = none]
    • Corrosive/Acid: Very Low [Plating = none]
    • Sonic: Very Low [Plating = none]
    • Force: Very low [Plating = none]
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Heads Up Display [ shows armor integrity, weapon aim Position/ Predicted position. If integrated with A.A.S.H shows ammo count in current magazine and weapon condition. IFF tags are used to help identify friend or foe in hard-to-see environments. Includes night vision and thermal view
  • Comm-Pack
  • Build In Life Support
  • A.A.S.H attachment port at the left or right shoulder blade section
  • Total armor seal.
  • Attachment ports on both shoulders
  • Helmet lights
STRENGTHS
  • all strengths from Fyrirdögun
  • All strengths from A.A.S.H
  • All strengths from Seigurium
  • Anywhere, any day - the armor's ability to seal airtight allows for combat in virtually any environment, from underwater to the vacuum of space
  • Modification - with three attachment ports on the armor, the soldier can carry with them upwards of three weapons, one side arm/ melee weapon, and two Primary weapons along with an A.A.S.H system attached to either Shoulder
  • protective layer- with a thin layer of seigurium covering the armor, it significantly boosts its overall effectiveness.
WEAKNESSES
  • all weaknesses from Fyrirdögun
  • all weaknesses from A.A.S.H
  • All weaknesses from Seigurium
  • in the distance - while the average weight to carry the armor itself is far from quiet on metal surfaces. producing an audible sound when walking on any surface other than dirt or grass
  • metal - it is made of a metal material, meaning magnetics and other corrosive liquids and environments will deteriorate and interfere with the armor's systems
  • nice shiny coat - the Seigurium layer is just that, a thin layer of the metal added over the armor underneath to boost its effectiveness. one that doesn't last long under concentrated fire. and once the coating is broken, the section that's damaged loses the bonus of the Seigurium
DESCRIPTION
The LO-56A was a great success amongst Lilaste soldiers. As with every great Prototype that inevitably becomes standard use, how to Improve the armor was always discussed with those who had in-field experience with the armor. The first thing they went about changing was the location of the A.A.S.H system from the middle of the spine. Users now have a designated slot for the Harness to lock under the dominant shoulder on the left or right side. The A.A.S.H system now effectively stores against the lower back of the soldier when not in use. The second thing the R&D department went to work on was adding a layer of Seigurium to boost the armor's defense against Energy, kinetic, and Ion resistance. Though it is just a tiny coating, any damage done to the outer layer - such as intense blaster/ bolter fire/ Lightsaber damage - leaves the Fyrirdögun exposed
 
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Laphisto Laphisto

Hello there. I'll be reviewing this today.

All your links appear complete, and your strengths & weaknesses are balanced. I do have one issue, however, that I'll need some clarification on:
Resistances:
  • Energy Weapons: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
  • Kinetic Weapons: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
  • Lightsabers: Very High [Plating = Very low]
  • EMP/Ion: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
  • Vacuum/Pressure: High
  • Environmental: Average [Plating = Very High]
  • Radiation: Average [Plating = Average]
  • Disruptor: Low [Plating = Very low]
  • Electricity: Low [Plating = none]
  • Corrosive/Acid: Very Low [Plating = none]
  • Sonic: Very Low [Plating = none]
  • Force: Very low [Plating = none]

Are you differentiating between the plating & the body-glove the armor is mounted to? Your balances check out, but if this is the case, I'd like an explanation of that in both the Special Features section & Resistances, to avoid confusion.

Also,
Image Source: Commissioned by me

Does this mean you, yourself, designed the artwork or you commissioned it from another artist either on or off Chaos? If done by an artist other than yourself, I'll need a proper image source.

Primary Source: N/A

This armor is very close in appearance to that of the Mjolnir Power-armor from the Halo series. Did you take any inspiration from that?
 
High Commander of the Lilaste Order
All your links appear complete, and your strengths & weaknesses are balanced. I do have one issue, however, that I'll need some clarification on:

Are you differentiating between the plating & the body-glove the armor is mounted to? Your balances check out, but if this is the case, I'd like an explanation of that in both the Special Features section & Resistances, to avoid confusion.
yes the left is for teh main armor and the cortosis weave. the right is stats for just the plating
Does this mean you, yourself, designed the artwork or you commissioned it from another artist either on or off Chaos? If done by an artist other than yourself, I'll need a proper image source.
i designed it but paid an artist outside of Chaos to draw it up for me

This armor is very close in appearance to that of the Mjolnir Power-armor from the Halo series. Did you take any inspiration from that?
i did not, it was taken from inspiration from Starship Troopers. also used Here

Ivory Stroud Ivory Stroud
 
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Laphisto Laphisto

i designed it but paid an artist outside of Chaos to draw it up for me

Please include some form of credit for the artist under the Image Credit section. A link to their personal website, or whatever site you used to hire their services. This not only assures they receive credit for their work, but may even drive more interest their way!

Everything else is acceptable. Once proper credit for the artist has been given, we'll get this approved for you. Thank you!
 
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