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Approved Tech Laphistos LO-56A MKII

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High Commander of the Lilaste Order
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To sub a standard Armor set for the Lilaste Order soldiers
  • Image Source: Commissioned by me from andrios1#6386
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Standard Lilaste Armor
  • Weight: Average
  • Resistances:
    • Energy Weapons: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
    • Kinetic Weapons: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
    • Lightsabers: Extreme [Plating = Very low]
    • EMP/Ion: Very High [Plating = Extreme]
    • Electricity: Extreme
    • Environmental: Average [Plating = Very High]
    • Radiation: Average [Plating = Average]
    • Disruptor: Low [Plating = Very low]
    • Electricity: Low [Plating = none]
    • Corrosive/Acid: Very Low [Plating = none]
    • Sonic: Very Low [Plating = none]
    • Force: Very low [Plating = none]
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Comm-Pack
  • Build In Life Support
  • A.A.S.H attachment port at the left or right shoulder blade section
  • Attachment ports on both shoulders
STRENGTHS
  • all strengths from Fyrirdögun
  • All strengths from A.A.S.H
  • All strengths from Seigurium
  • Modification - with three attachment ports on the armor, the soldier can carry with them upwards of three weapons, one side arm/ melee weapon, and two Primary weapons along with an A.A.S.H system attached to either Shoulder
  • protective layer- with a thin seigurium covering the armor, it significantly boosts its overall effectiveness.
  • Force bound - spending extensive time using the armor Laphisto has found a way to channel the force along the length of the armor strengthing its durability and resistance
  • Custom-fit - due to Laphisto's unique biology the armor has been custom-made. making it near impossible for others to wear the armor
WEAKNESSES
  • all weaknesses from Fyrirdögun
  • all weaknesses from A.A.S.H
  • All weaknesses from Seigurium
  • in the distance - while the average weight to carry the armor itself is far from quiet on metal surfaces. producing an audible sound when walking on any surface other than dirt or grass
  • metal - it is made of a metal material, meaning magnetics and other corrosive liquids and environments will deteriorate and interfere with the armor's systems
  • nice shiny coat - the Seigurium layer is just that, a thin layer of the metal added over the armor underneath to boost its effectiveness. one that doesn't last long under concentrated fire. and once the coating is broken, the section that's damaged loses the bonus of the Seigurium
DESCRIPTION
after the Destruction of the Edaar and his near-death experience. Laphistos armor was severely damaged. Beyond repair. After his retrieval and healing process, he set about getting a new armor using what was left over. With the recent release of the LO-56A MKII, he opted to get himself a set, and working closely with the R&D team, he managed to get his new set built to accommodate his Unique Biology. the armor holds Laphistos Family crest in the center, with the Lilaste logo on the left shoulder and the mark of Clan Ordo on the right
 
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Ravenfire

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Laphisto Laphisto

Hi there, I will be the judge for this submission.

So starting out your image has broken, you might want to fix that so people can see the image you've commissioned.

Secondly your balance is out of wack
Normal Plating
Unique -4 -4 Unique -4 -4
Average 0 -4 Average 0 -4
Very High +2 -2 Extreme +3 -1
Very High +2 0 Extreme +3 +2
Extreme +3 +3 Very Low -2 0
Very High +2 +5 Extreme +3 +3
Extreme +3 +8 Extreme +3 +6
High +1 +9 High +1 +7
Average 0 +9 Very High +2 +9
Average 0 +9 Average 0 +9
Low -1 +8 Very Low -2 +7
Low -1 +7 None -3 +4
Very Low -2 +5 None -3 +1
Very Low -2 +3 None -3 -2
Very Low -2 +1 None -3 -5

Thus your Normal is over by one rating and your plating is under by 5 ratings, I would suggest you rebalance both separately like I've shown here.
 
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