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Approved Starship Kohlo Ryks' Alpha-class Xg-1 Star Wing

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Kohlo Ryks

The Only Pilot You Need
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: To outline the capabilities of Kohlo Ryks' personally restored, refurbished, and upgraded Assault Gunboat.
  • Image Source: Source
  • Canon Link: Alpha-class Xg-1 Star Wing
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Fighter/Bomber
  • Length: 10 meters
  • Width: 15.1 meters
  • Height: 7.2 meters
  • Armament: Very High
    • Medium Taim & Bak KX11 laser cannons twin mounted under the chin.
    • Borstel NK-8 ion cannons twin mounted above and behind the canopy.
    • SFS M-s8 concussion missile launchers with variable armament twin mounted along the fuselage.
      • 10 standard or advanced concussion missiles each.
      • 8 standard or advanced proton torpedoes each.
      • 8 MagPulse torpedoes each.
      • 6 heavy concussion missiles each.
      • 6 shieldbuster torpedoes each.
      • 6 heavy rockets each.
      • 4 space mines each.
      • 4 heavy space bombs each.
    • Tractor Beam Projector
  • Defenses: High
    • Novaldex forward and rear projecting shield generator rated at 151 SBD.
    • Quadanium-steel armored titanium alloy hull rated at 42 RU.
  • Squadron Count: Low
  • Maneuverability Rating: Average
  • Speed Rating: Low
  • Hyperdrive: Class 1 hyperdrive with a class 10 backup drive.
STANDARD FEATURES
  • All standard features have been upgraded to utilize modern weapons and armor to bring the archaic design up to standards in the current age.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Advanced ECM system and extended mid-range sensor suites.
STRENGTHS
  • The equipped hyperdrive system means the Star Wing can undertake long-range operations without the direct support of a capital ship.
  • Very sturdy shields and armor makes the Star Wing a difficult ship to take down, and these vessels have been known to return to their base of operations in a heavily damaged state that other fighter/bombers could not survive.
  • Weapons versatility means that the ship can participate in convoy and platform raids, live capture operations, and assassinations with relative ease.
WEAKNESSES
  • The ship's versatility means that the Star Wing is competent in many roles but does not excel in them like a truly dedicated craft would.
  • Once the payload of warheads has been spent, the ship is a subpar in dogfights which places more of a burden on the pilot's skill to match interceptors.
DESCRIPTION
The Star Wing started its life hundreds of years ago in service to the old Galactic Empire. Since then the vessel has been used by numerous groups beyond just standard government deployment. One such group is the Red Guard terrorist organization on Druckenwell that uses these vessels heavy arms and armor to execute live-capture operations on traveling passenger vessels.

Kohlo Ryks used to fly on those missions, and during a crisis of conscience when she really discovered what had happened with the passengers of the ships they disabled, she eradicated her wing mates and left Druckenwell behind for good with her newly acquired ship. She spent months grounded while she refitted the whole ship to make it look completely different, even going so far as to having the registration of the ship altered to minimize any chance that the group could find her. Every piece on the vessel was installed and tested by her, updated by her, and made whole, by her, in the wake of her desertion. Not an inch of the ship, which she has since then named Rathtar's Bite, has not been fixed or maintained in some way by the Togruta pilot.

Now the vessel serves as her source of employment, income, and often times, cramped shelter. She takes work as a gunboat-for-hire, often working as little more than a glorified assassin to make ends meet. Stories have been told in the Outer Rim of the old Star Wing that hits fast and hard, and leaves the debris in the wake of a hyperspace jump. Kohlo makes good use of the fighter/bomber in these hit-and-run attacks, and has built up a bit of a reputation as a hot shot pilot in an old piece of machinery.
 
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There is multiple issues. Also sorry for the long wait.

This is meant as a website link, not an image link. The image link is...currently broken.


  • Manufacturer: Cygnus Spaceworks in affiliation with Sinear Fleet Systems
  • Affiliation: Galactic Empire [Formerly], Kohlo Ryks
These will not work. If you want the Manufacturer to link to the canon companies, fine. However the Galactic Empire does not exist here, more so, a single person cannot produce all of this unless you wish to make a company and link to this.

  • Production: Manufactured for use by the Galactic Empire during the Age of the Rebellion
Wrong use of Production, please reread the rules. It is Mass Production, Minor, Limited, Semi-Unique and Unique. Till then, I cannot rate it properly.

Armament: Depending on warhead armaments, Average to Extreme
You cannot use a scale to Average to Extreme, you must use only one and not a range.

  • Squadron Count: Standard 12 fighter squadron.
Standard is not a rating. It should be Average if it is a 12 fighter squadron.

  • With average speed and maneuverability, faster vessels create complications for even the most competent Star Wing pilots.
Not a valid weakness, please remove.


Everything below weakness is not how a description works. It should be a small history of the starfighter, maybe your own personal flair, not a datapad read of what it can and cannot do. Put some history on it.


Let me know when you edit and fix this submission. Regardless...it still looks nice for a first time person.
Kohlo Ryks Kohlo Ryks
 
You don't have to post it all over again. Just saying okay be good enough and a mention.

Still have issues.

Image Source means NOT the Image Picture! You can put that on top of the whole text before it begins. Image Source means where you got the image, what website it is. Link the website to it.

  • Affiliation: Unaffiliated
Unaffiliated does not work, you must affiliate it with someone or something. Perhaps a company of your own? It must exist here in Chaos.

You are also three ratings to high, you have to balance the ratings before you can say it is ready. Check the rules again on what ratings are under starfighter, it will explain.


Let me know when these are edited.
Kohlo Ryks Kohlo Ryks
 
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