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Approved Planet Jivanada Dharaka

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First off, sorry about the terrible formatting. I'm doing this from my phone xD

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Name: Jivanada Dharaka

Region: Outer Rim

System: Prakasamanavada

Suns: One; Hagurada

Orbital Position: Only planet. Within habitable distance.

Moons: Pratiphalaka - small moon held in reverence in some Old Teachings stories.

Coordinates:
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Rotational Period: 71 hours

Orbital Period: 428 days

Class: Terrestrial

Atmosphere: 1

Climate: The entire planet is mostly rainforest-like though some areas do receive less rain and humidity than others.

Gravity: 1.5 times Earth

Primary Terrain: Jungles with many lakes. Other areas on the planet include salt water lakes of great size, resembling an ocean but not quite the same size. There are grasslands that some Kokku call home.

Native species: Vidhvansaka and Kokku

Immigrated species: Humans and many other minorities.

Primary languages: Bhase and GSB

Government: Democracy available only to Vidhvansaka.

Population:
-Natives - 3 billion
-Immigrated species - 650 million

Demonym: Dharakaian

Major cities:
-Udattate: Capital city, more developed ways of thinking that diverge from Old Teachings more than others. But still remains a cultural mix.
-Ugi: A radical city that doesn't follow many Teachings at all. Huge industry and production happens in this city, the Vidhvansaka that have taken to the city fuel the arms and armor engineering.
-Dari: The largest Old Teachings village on Jivanada Dharaka.

Major imports: Metals and cloths

Major exports: Fruits, native meats, weapons, and armor.

Affiliation: Leans toward Dark-Side factions.

Culture:
-Old Teachings: The old teachings or Haleya are the ancient ways of the Vidhvansaka. They celebrate three gods, a god of diplomacy and peace, a god of war and death, and a goddess of love and caring. The Old Teachings say that all life must be kept simple and nothing is to be wasted, this gave rise to the houses made of native woods and leaves. Though the buildings were made with primitive materials, the buildings they crafted were immensely intricate and were beautifully designed. The Old Teachings held nature in high regard and it was considered terrible luck to your family to defile or misuse nature. To clear your bad name from this, an Old Teachings Shaman has to put you through a ritual of cleansing and then would reach into your soul to extract the taintedness of your actions. If one lived a good life with the old teachings, when one died, one would go to the Endless Habbada - or feast. And there, one sat with all their loved ones, happily conversing with loved ones and new friends.
-New Teachings: New Teachings emphasize the honor and glorification of the gods, which are the same from the old teachings but still lack names. The New Teachings focus less on the simplicity of living and allow for more technology but many who practice this sect of religion still live in the intricate houses of nature.
-Radicals: The Radical section of the planet's populous can actually be divided into further subsects but in general these people are the ones who have broke off from most teachings and have embraced technology and finer living. Many people who are classified as radical are the immigrants to the planet, though it's not unheard of to have Vidhvansaka in this group.
-Other cultural norms: Shamans are the Vidhvansakan's name for Force users, which are rare among the peoples. If a shaman child is born, it is forced into breeding with other shaman or family lines of shaman. High shaman have extremely high levels of midi-clorian counts detectable by shaman. Four shaman must agree that someone is a high shaman for it to be valid. For government processes, a representative from a set of sectors, larger towns like Dari can have upwards of 60 sectors. Women Vidhvansakan are treated fairly and allowed presence in government for all decisions. A lot of art comes from those who follow the Old Teachings and depicts many abstract seems often telling stories of old. Children are always welcomed in many things as it's believed they bring life and a new, untainted minds. Food is often made extravagantly and almost always made from fresh ingredients. Military personnel are always volunteers that fight for pride and honor, they almost never have wives or other dependencies but despite that, the reproduction rates do not suffer. In traditional villages, all work is done without actual pay, but the denizens of the village are taken care of through a complex system of give and take.

Technology: Technology varies greatly by area on this planet. Tribes of Vidhvansaka that practice solely Old Teachings career little for technology. New Teachings villages and towns do live with better armor and weapons but still reject things that are meant to exemplify life in a radicalist manner. Radicals live with full technology of the galaxy in cities and towns.

History:
10,000 BBY: Presumed birth of the planet.
4,300 BBY: First primitive forms of sentient life appear.
3,890 BBY: First primitive tools appear, very crudely fashioned.
3,220 BBY: The Vidhvansakans are fully formed and functioning and Old Teachings begin to take hold.
2,960 BBY: Ten Year Darkness begins; After the destruction of much of the forest, shamans believe that ten years of bad luck and little prosperity is ahead.
2,950 BBY: The end of the TYD, celebratory day celebrated once every ten years becomes a tradition.
2,340 BBY: Rise of the New: New Teachings radicals begin to rise, defying ways of the Old Teachings.
2,280 BBY: War of Divergence: The tension between New and Old Teachings boils over and a civil war takes place ending with an agreement of separate living areas.
1,340 BBY: Major metal deposits discovered, debates about who gets to use them and what for arise. No conclusion is reached.
1,040 BBY: Advanced farming techniques are developed.
600 BBY: First immigrants arrive and have difficulties with speaking to the natives.
595 BBY: Radical mindset starts becoming a larger issue.
230 BBY: Skirmishes start appearing between natives and immigrants. Supposedly they were started by the immigrants.
175 BBY: A war breaks out between immigrants and the natives with full fury. The Kokku are split between both sides. Whoever payed the most to one Kokku village gained them.
170 ABY: Tensions between natives and immigrants lower. Major fighting stops.
45 ABY: Ugi rises seemingly overnight and becomes super industrialized.
50 ABY: Vidhvansakans start joining the radicals in greater numbers.
55 ABY: Major shipments start leaving from the planet, inflow of money skyrockets.
360 ABY: A large wave of immigrants hits the planet, causing other minor industrial cities to rise and further increasing the industrial production in Ugi.
400 ABY: An ancient shaman bloodline is rediscovered.
475 ABY: Kokku fight for rights to govern. They lose and are denied.
560 ABY: High Priest Visvada Ondu is born.
600 ABY: New Teachings become more tight and disallow many radicals to live amongst them, causing some tensions to flair. Radicals that lived within New Teachings villages are forced to relocate.
645 ABY: A terrorist act kills hundreds in Ugi, damaging factories and raising other major concerns.
650 ABY: The terrorist group is discovered after five years, which included a string of other terror events.
735 ABY: Petitions to change the capital from Dari to Udatte rise and the amount of people in favor of it pushes the council within Dari to change the capital.
780 ABY: Immigrants, fueled by their win of changing the capital start a rebellion to try and take over the government and allow themselves power.
782 ABY: The rebellion is crushed utterly.
800 ABY: pollution starts becoming an issue and many factories are shut down, others must switch to other methods of production.
810 ABY: Pollution levels drop back into the safe zone.


Notable PC's: (Will be High Priest Visvada Ondu)

Intent: Will be used for the home planet for the playable species Vidhvansakaand later cause a fun dominion with a plot of a civil war between subcultures.
 
[member="Darth Narakada"]

So, let's start.

First of all, judging by the information given, the planet shouldn't be covered with only rainforests. Please change it to state some other terrain, too.

Affiliation. Please remove the 'New Order' and change the 'Sith-like factions' to 'Dark-side factions'.

Culture is a bit too short. Try to add something more about society, daily life, arts. Remember, you can include basically all information in the culture section.

History is too short. Please add more to it.
 
Edited all requested items. The date for the birth of Visvada Ondu is tentative though, depending on species creation. I did as much as I could from my phone, if you need more, I can certainly try.

[member="Maria Zambrano"]
 
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