Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos

Register a free account today to become a member! Once signed in, you'll be able to participate on this site by adding your own topics and posts, as well as connect with other members through your own private inbox!

Codex Denied Jakku Shipyards

Status
Not open for further replies.
336924.jpg

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: To serve as the main Ship-Manufacturing Facility of the Directorate [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]​[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Image Credit[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Here[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Canon[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: N/A[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Links[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Directorate , Yorkell Industries [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]SETTING INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Shipyards Name[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Jakku Shipyards[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Planetary Shipyards[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Location[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Jakku [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Yorkell Industries , Maracel Yorkell , Directorate [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Population[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Moderately Staffed [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Accessibility[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Due to it’s Position the Jakku Shipyards are isolated from the known Galaxy as it is also guarded by a Secret Fleet[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: The Jakku Shipyard is a collection of smaller facilities in which can produce many ships at once. These small facilities are known as Pocket Shipyards can build 5 Ships at a time each. The Entire Shipyards is composed of Five of these pocket Shipyards along with one central facility where the Shipyards receive the material launched from the Ore Cannon on Jakku. These Materials are then transported to the Pocket Shipyards through terminals in which deposit the metals to the Pocket Shipyards. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]OPERATIONS INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Star Destroyers and Battlecruisers [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Specialty[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: The Jakku Shipyards specializes in building ships for the Directorate. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Output[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: The Jakku Shipyards are able to build 5 Star Destroyers at a time while only being able to build 2 Dreadnoughts at a time. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Market[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: The Jakku Shipyards is a Private Shipyard and does not sell any of it’s manufactured ships [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]POINTS OF INTEREST[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=9pt]Ship Manufacturing Ring : The Ship Manufacturing Ring is the area in which Ships are built and repaired. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Central Command Terminal : This is where the numerous behind the scenes tasks are completed such as Shipyard Command , Resource Storage , Cargo Processing and Maintenance crew housing [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Alloy Retrieval Area : This is where the resources needed to build the Ships within the Shipyards are received. Using an Ore Canon , the material salvaged from the Graveyard of Giants are shot towards the Shipyards and into the Alloy Retrieval Area where they are then distributed to every ship as a means to continue the construction process. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]SECURITY[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Maximum[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]The Jakku Shipyards is defended by Shadow Squadron along with having 2 Hypervelocity Cannons located on the surface of Jakku to aid in it’s defense. Despite the small number of defenses the Hypervelocity Cannons present in Jakku use kyber crystals being able to penetrate the shields of any ship , disabling them and inflicting heavy damage or even destroying capital ships.[/SIZE]

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[SIZE=9pt]The Jakku Shipyards is an Orbital Facility built by Yorkell Industries as a means to support Operation Resurgence and the Plans of Maracel Yorkell. Positioned over Jakku , an isolated barren world the Shipyards have been very isolated and few outside of the Directorate know about it’s presence. With this the Shipyards has been able to produce new Ships for the Directorate as a means of enforcing Maracel’s secret plans.[/SIZE]
 
[member="Maracel Yorkell II"] Hey there, interesting submission :) I have one comment and one suggestion:

The image in this link is not the same as the image you're using as the header of this submission. I need you to either change the link to the page at which the image here can be found, or change the image in this submission to the one you're linking to please.

The Shipyard itself is similar to the Raxus Prime Orbital Facility as this Facility bears an exact resemblance to it.
I would strongly suggest that you change this part of the submission. Remember, note very reader knows everything that is canon or in the wookie, and reading "it's the same as that thing" doesn't give them any information. Use your own words to describe the Shipyard.

The first one is a mandatory edit, the second is a suggestion.

Please tag me once the submission is ready for the next read over :)
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom