Who Am I?
Feedback is one of those things I've always loved to get. A) Because I'm shameless and getting the back on the pat is always nice. And B) because I often never know what I could be doing better. It's really the later part that I care about. Guess I've been going crazy with posts, too. 200 in a bit over a month, and that's just on Alina. Who happens to be my favorite character, and the one I'm looking for feedback on.
I've gotten through what I feel is the first arc of Alina's story. She comes from a family of powerful Sith Sorcerers, but unlike her younger brother or her older sister, she's not able to use Sorcery. Or the Force. Growing up she couldn't even lift a book. When her older sister died, she became the heir. Much to her mother's dismay. So she was sent to join the Sith publicly and, hopefully, die. She didn't. She spent most of the time I've written her with no sense of confidence and no grasp of power. Expecting to die, but refusing to go down without a fight.
Now things have progressed for her. She's learned how she can use the force (Matukai to channel inward, disruption to channel out.) She's got a goal to get the power needed to take the Pillar of War from Other Space Kaiden and remove the graug. Big thanks to Krag for giving her the goal in the Dantooine thread, and continuing to give her reason to want the graug dead. Arc 2 is her learning more. Started getting her into other threads to find her place in the Galaxy as a Sith n such.
So what do people think? Like her? Hate her? Worship her abs? Lemmi know.