Isamu Baelor
Protector of The Iron Realm
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/63627-isamu-baelor-conflicted-duty/
I think it went a tiny bit too far into melodrama, but hey, it's Star Wars. There's always a bit of melodrama.
Would any of the veterans here have any feedback on my character? As a newbie, I'm not sure if I've missed something, or taken him too far in some ways, or whatever other mistake a new person might make.
I'm hoping I made a character that seems interesting, with some depth, and is someone who's story you'd be interested to see unfold.
Thanks for the feedback, anyone who's willing to respond : D
I think it went a tiny bit too far into melodrama, but hey, it's Star Wars. There's always a bit of melodrama.
Would any of the veterans here have any feedback on my character? As a newbie, I'm not sure if I've missed something, or taken him too far in some ways, or whatever other mistake a new person might make.
I'm hoping I made a character that seems interesting, with some depth, and is someone who's story you'd be interested to see unfold.
Thanks for the feedback, anyone who's willing to respond : D