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How's my first character?

Isamu Baelor

Protector of The Iron Realm
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/63627-isamu-baelor-conflicted-duty/

I think it went a tiny bit too far into melodrama, but hey, it's Star Wars. There's always a bit of melodrama.

Would any of the veterans here have any feedback on my character? As a newbie, I'm not sure if I've missed something, or taken him too far in some ways, or whatever other mistake a new person might make.

I'm hoping I made a character that seems interesting, with some depth, and is someone who's story you'd be interested to see unfold.

Thanks for the feedback, anyone who's willing to respond : D
 
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[I think you have a contender, [member='Thyrian Ashborn']]​
In all seriousness, I smile a little whenever I see new members who opt to make their first character a Non-Force User. I wish you luck with your storyline, and if you ever wish to Roleplay you can feel free to hit me up. I have a fair few characters knocking about at the moment.​
I like how his strengths and weakness are pretty much all codependant, it makes him feel more realistic rather than throwing them in there for no good reason.​
 
Not much to go on at the moment, but from what [member="Snowflake"] says, he seems to be a very balanced character. :p I also see you're part of the OS, so perhaps I'll see you around. ;D

[member="Isamu Baelor"]
 
Saw your biography earlier today. I was surprised no one had commented or liked yet. Seems like an interesting guy and I'm sure we will see some interesting things coming from him being around. Happy roleplaying! :)

[member="Isamu Baelor"]
 

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