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Work In Progress HK-01E "Banshee" Jumpsuit


OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent:To create an armor for the Banshees.
  • Image Source: me.
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: TodHusars Corps [x].

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: House Haskler of Anaxes [x]
  • Affiliation: House Haskler of Anaxes [x].
  • Market Status: Closed-Market
  • Model: HK-01E “Banshee” Jumpsuit
  • Modularity: Yes.
  • Production: The scale is Limited
    • Material:
      [*]Durasteel
      [*]Plastoid
      [*]Armorweave
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Anti-Blaster and Anti-Ballistic.
  • Weight: Average
  • Resistances: Average
    • Energy: High
    • Kinetic: Average
    • Lightsabers: High
    • Other: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • This armor includes a helmet, a faceplate and two forearm plates. The helmet contains a HUD with tactical information: allies’ and enemies’ positions, maps, armament status, unit status etc. There is also an earphone decoupled from the helmet. The forearm plates basically protect the wearer against bolts and bullets but can also carry medical or additional stuff. The faceplate is more interesting because of its functioning. In fact, it can carry additional stuff but it can also be combined to a front bag in which the commando can put his stuff. Most of the time, there is also a safety parachute in it to counteract the lack of the main parachute. The screen in the center of the front bag shows the rank of the soldier: 1 chevron for 1st Class (OR-2), 2 chevrons for Corporal (OR-3), 3 chevrons for Sergeant (OR-5), 4 chevrons for Sergeant-Major (OR-9), 1 stripe for Second-Lieutenant (OF-1), 2 stripes for Lieutenant (OF-1), 3 stripes for Captain (OF-2) and 4 stripes for Commander (OF-3). The bag is fixed to the faceplate with a magnetical system.
STRENGTHS
  • High-orbit insertion: The jumpsuit is specifically designed to allow its wearer to be parachuted from high-orbit. As such, the armor has been enhanced with gravity compensators and antitrauma cushions. Moreover, it can bear great heats and colds for about half an hour, and is sealed to prevent any oxygen issue.
  • Sith Killers: The Armor has been designed to be more efficient than TodHusars’ armor against the Force users. The thickness of the panoply is needed to counter light saber. This fact gave to Banshees’ armor the title of ‘Sith Killer Armor’ -- and the wearers are proud of that.
WEAKNESSES
  • A big armor: The commandos of the Anaxes' army have extremely heavy armor. If the implants they get allow them to support this weight more easily than a classic human, their speed may suffer from that, especially in the accidented grounds. Moreover, flightsuit is very heavy too and can impede the movements of the commandos.
  • No an infantryman: The armor is not designed to fight in pitched battles, because of its similarities Todhusars'. It can't handle a large number of bullets in a limited time interval because of its lack of armor plates. Despite this, the armor is very heavy for its height. This fact means that the wearers can not be deployed on any battlefield but specifically in commando ops.
DESCRIPTION
This armor had been created with the combined forces of Captain Kelga’an and Dalness Manufacturing’s engineers. Indeed, when Nukth came to the Captain rank after the coup d’etat on Anaxes, TodHusars’ headquarters gave him the job to design a commando armor for his company, based on TodHusars’. From this point, they created the ultimate armor and tried it a lot of time before let it fight on the battlefields.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Nukth Kelga'an Nukth Kelga'an

Hello, I'll be your judge today!
  • You forget to add the TodHusars Corps' link to the Primary source, please edit this.
  • Please link the Dalness Manufacturings to the Manufacturer.
  • Please link the House Hasklers of Anaxes and the New Imperial Order to the Affiliation. And this is a limited, you mention a Major and a Minor faction, you can only keep one of these.
    • Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.)
  • Please delete the French army reference from the submission, the French army not exist on Chaos, and you can't mention RL things in you subs.
  • And your weakness is not really a weakness, especially you're mention a strength in it. So please try to write a proper PvE or PvP weakness.
 
Submission Name: "Banshee" Company
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/banshee-company.153026/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: to embellish the submission, to add references to DM&S's armament and to add details about organization, specializations and all that stuff.

Submission Name: HK-01E "Banshee" Jumpsuit
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/hk-01e-banshee-jumpsuit.157330/
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: to embellish the submission, to add references to DM&S's armament, to fix some links and to add details about modularity, special features, etc.
Please be sure to include a list of changes. Give Factory Staff a tag when you're ready, or, use the "Ready for Judgment" Prefix.

Just an FYI - This request was actually made to the Codex, but, you want to use the Submission Modification forum in the Factory for Factory Subs. Not a big deal but it will streamline your requests and prevent confusion. Cheers!
 

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