Feedback Help the Kit Bit Improve

[Kitter Bitters]

I would like to get some advice and feedback on me as a writer. Instead of just focusing on one character this thread will blend me as a writer, and some of my characters as well.


1. How am I doing? I’ve been trying pretty hard to be a more consistent writer on the board. Several of my characters have been around for a few years now. Does it feel like I am improving in my staying power? What could I do to be better?

2. I feel as though I am pretty isolated from a lot of the other writers. What could I do to interact with more people? I know everyone is overwhelmed with threads so I hate asking for more, but I’m having trouble really finding a good core group of partners. I would appreciate advice on how I could fit in better.

3. Which of my characters do you enjoy the most? Why?

• Pari Sylune
• Kuhbee
• Katarine Ryiah
• Guinevere Cavello
• Kinley Pryse

4. Do you enjoy the OOC writers musing blogs I do? Why or why not? Do you think I should post more blogs with my actual character accounts or is the OOC one okay?

5. How am I as a person? Am I approachable? Do you feel like I am nice and easy to write with? Do I need to improve my attitude at all?

6. What is something you would like to see more of from me? Is there anything you want to see specifically from a certain character?

7. What other advice or comments would you like to share with me ?


Thank you all. I appreciate constructive and honest feedback.

 

[Kahlil Noble]

I enjoy writing with you quite a bit, but I do have some actual feedback to give.

Focus.

You routinely and consistently move on to the next thing that crops up in your mind. This isn't generally a bad thing if you can keep up with it, but you don't. The Hidden Path is a good example of this, where you took in several characters of your own to write in, did so consistently for a bit, then created a conflict with another group that you decided to run yourself on another of your alts, and then both groups fell silent.

You do not need to do everything and be in every aspect of a group to make it run. When you start making more and new characters, it feels like you're abandoning your others and leaving folks without your responses because you're busy with the big new thing.

Take it slower. Focus on a few rather than a whole bunch.

-Signed, An Altoholic who regularly loas

 

[Kitter Bitters]

I enjoy writing with you quite a bit, but I do have some actual feedback to give.

Focus.

You routinely and consistently move on to the next thing that crops up in your mind. This isn't generally a bad thing if you can keep up with it, but you don't. The Hidden Path is a good example of this, where you took in several characters of your own to write in, did so consistently for a bit, then created a conflict with another group that you decided to run yourself on another of your alts, and then both groups fell silent.

You do not need to do everything and be in every aspect of a group to make it run. When you start making more and new characters, it feels like you're abandoning your others and leaving folks without your responses because you're busy with the big new thing.

Take it slower. Focus on a few rather than a whole bunch.

-Signed, An Altoholic who regularly loas

I really appreciate the feedback. I thought I had been doing a lot better lately with less characters. Maybe I still have too many :/

 

[Vilka Keldra]

Basically what Kahlil said.

Your writing is GREAT - truly. And yes, you are improving. But there's still a bit of squirreling.

Where I have seen consistency is the characters you vibe with the most. So I'd suggest focusing on developing them - Kinley, Kat and Kubhee - main them - I genuinely want to see where they go in their stories.

Also stop trying to please everyone. We had this convo quite a few times. Find the folk that WANT to write with you and build story with them instead of darting between everyone like Roxanne and just feeling that your characters stay unfulfilled. You have great character concepts with interesting paths - explore them properly.

Take it from another Altoholic - it helps having a small group of writing buddies that you can trust to help you build great stories for your charries. It's great to write with new people now and again, but have your person/s to go back to for deeper development. I take my charrie Zhea for example: I originally made her to just be this Sage-like Jedi that is not overly keen on fighting and more concerned about peacekeeping and training the younger generation of Jedi - and that is still her core being. Then a friend and I decided to scrap in the Ilum invasion few years back and from there it just devolved into a full blown story that just snowballed into a totally unplanned direction. Yes, she had other connections along the way that helped shape her story, but she still has that deeper connection that is both her blessing and her curse and that shapes her true character.

Doesn't matter what relationships you build - it helps to have key people that help shape that character.

TL;DR: You're awesome - just focus on developing the charries that you have the most consistent muse for and have a select few trustworthy writing buddies to help you develop them. We love you still. <3

 

[Aselia Verd]

Hey Kitter, I don't think we have ever really written before. But outside looking in, I would agree with Kahlil. You seem to try to do too much at once, and I really do understand the compulsion. I'm very much the same way; I think the issue is less the number of characters and more about consistency and, as he said, focus. I love reading Kinley, though, so don't get discouraged.

 

[Cadre]

 

[Novac Lyrikal]

i haven't had the chance to rp with you much(if at alli cant remember) but from waht i've seen i agree with what the others sah.

I'm also the type to not get overwhelmed and post in any and all threads that interest me lol, so if you ever want i'd be for some threads

 

[Kitter Bitters]

I really appreciate all the feedback <3

I’ve been trying to do better but still have a ways to go.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Consistency is key. There’s always going to be slow periods and fast and crazy ones. Just gotta stick to something you like.