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Approved Planet Hellgotha

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Name: Hellgotha

Region: Unknown
System: Hellgothum
Suns: One; The Sun
Orbital Position: 6th planet
Moons: One Artificial; The Eye
Coordinates: A,10
Rotational Period: 24 hours
Orbital Period: 365 Days

Class: Terrestrial
Atmosphere: Type IV
Climate: Arctic
Gravity: Standard
Primary Terrain: Rocky Plane

Native species: None
Immigrated species: Firrirreo, Arkanian, Echanti, Sith Pureblood, Human, Chiss, Zeltron, Anzat, Morganian
Primary languages: Galactic Basic Standard
Government: Anarchy
Population: 7.1 billion
Demonym: Spawn (Prisoners) Angels (Guards)
Major cities: Gateway
Major imports: Criminals, Slaves
Major exports: Slaves
Affiliation: Independent

Culture: As it is a prison, there is little in the way of culture. Criminals of all shape, size and race run amok in the underworld large-scale testing facility that is Hellgotha. Gangs, factions, you name it are formed between prisoners who get along and they war with each other constantly, fighting to be the very best. These prisoners are all kept from reaching the surface of the planet and escaping via a humongous corps of guards that occupy the crust layer and a team of scientists that survey everything from The Eye.
Sometimes, prisoners were experimented on by the mad scientists that inhabited the place, making deathtroopers and general mischief.
Technology: Average
History: Millions of years ago, a crew of scientists observing the barren planet that would become Hellgotha from a nearby planet saw that it would be perfect for the experiment they wanted to take place. Years later, they completed a moon-sized space station and flew there. Once there, the race set about hallowing out the dead planet as much as they could without completely destroying it. In the resulting caverns were built the many levels of the massive underground prison.


As soon as it was finished, Hellgotha's population grew and expanded as criminals and bad guys were transported there in great amounts and they continued to reproduce over the millennia. Present day, there are now 7.1 billion spawn including deathtroopers and angels occupying the planet.



The plan was to create an environment where all criminals could be sent to live. The scientists meant to observe if criminals could create a society similar to "normal" people now that evil is the norm. Knowing that they would not live to see the prime of the civilization made, they passed down their philosophies and beliefs through their generations so that there were always scientists watching and observing with the same ideals as the originals.

Notable PC's: Andreas Wintergreen was born and raised here

Intent: To create a unique planet of origin for Andreas to give the character more depth for revision. It may also act as a great setting for an RP.
 
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Please add more information to the "Orbital Position". 'Far' could mean basically anything from habitable to really-really far.

The orbital period is quite low. If it would be exactly in the same place where Earth is, with exactly the same conditions, it'd be 365 days. Please raise the period depending on how far the planet is and how strong is the gravitational pull.

Please specify: what do you mean with 'giant'? Is it ice giant?

A giant, because of its mass, must have gravity. And gravity would be higher than standard. Please fix it.

How can humans be native species if the planet basically doesn't support life?

Immigrated species... I think you meant "Firrerreo, Hutt, Echani, Sith Pureblood"?

There's a tiny mistake with language. It should be "Galactic Basic Standard" instead of "Galactic Standard Basic".

Please change the affiliation from "None" to "Independent" or something similar.

Please add some dates to the history. For example, when did scientist find the planet, when did they start transporting criminals to the planet, etc?
 
@[member="Andreas Wintergreen"]

Now I get a better overview, though there are still some things which bother me. :)

Please lower the size to 'terrestrial'. Earth is already quite huge and that even without oceans. Combining the landmass of oceans and continents already gives us a huge area. Assuming that the crust of this planet is similar to Earth's, you already have seemingly infinite area.

Along with the size, please lower the orbital and rotational periods back to '365 days' and '24 hours' or something close to that to match the size.
 
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