Approved Starship Hanzai class - Heavy Cruiser

[The Red of Sinner]

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Affiliation: Open Market
Manufacturer: Darkthrone Arialyard
Model: HHC - 00da
Modularity: No
Production: Minor
Material: Reinforced Durasteel, Duraglass
Classification: Cruiser, Assault

Length: 800 meters
Width: 400 meters
Height: 260 meters

Armament:
Capital Cannons (120 count)

50 - Deck Cannon Emplacements
40 - Turbolaser Cannons
20 - Heavy Turbolaser Cannons

Warhead Launchers (Heavy; 14 count)

7 - Assault Concussion Missile Launchers
7 - Intruder Missile Launchers

Defensive Cannons (10 count)

5 - Point Defense Cannons
5 - Quad Laser Cannons


Hangar:
Hangar (28 count)

14 - Starfighters
12 - Interceptors
2 - Shuttles

Special Features:
Communications Array
Encryption Network
Detention Cells
Tractor Beams
Escape Pods
Standard Shield Generator Systems
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Targeting Systems
Standard Sensory Array

Maneuverability Rating: 12
Speed Rating: 12
Hyperdrive Class: 1.5

Strengths: This ship is all about ground, and pound.
Weaknesses: The ship has no real defences



Description:

The ships main design was for attack, attack, and attack. With the ship loaded down with weapons all over, there wasnt much more space for anything else. Now the Hanzai is ready to taste war. With a large circle set in near the back, that is wear the hangars are. The cockpit sits directly on top of the circle. It has enough rations to hold for three years, and requires a crew of one hundred and twenty. The hulls are strong, but standard, and the ship is surprisingly average at speed, and manoeuvrability.



Development Thread: N/A
Intent: To create a assault cruiser built by Darkthrone Arialyards, and make it available to buyers.
Who Can Use This: Anyone
Primary Source: N/A

 

[Ellie Mors]

Under Review.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="The Shadow King"]
I'm just going to point out that you have the maximum amount of hangar space for this size of a ship and probably the most I would allow for this class of ship. I seriously advise you to lower the armaments significantly and either tone the hangar space down or expect for less guns. Other than those two issues, however, you seem to have a perfectly fine submission. Keep in mind that the maximum allowed is generally reliant on the other things involves (i.e; armaments, special features, speed, maneuverability, hangar space) being much lower than what is raised up. The higher your armaments, for example, generally the lower most of the other things are.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Darth Vitium"]

Hows that look? I dropped the bombers, and I lowered Defence and Heavy

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="The Shadow King"]

Capital Cannons (240 count)

This needs to come down still.

RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon

• N/A
  

Starwars Chaos

• http://starwarsrp.net/topic/38244-crinan-carrier/
• http://starwarsrp.net/topic/43944-tenebris-class-heavy-cruiser/

WITHOUT DEV THREADS

• Lower Capital Guns by at least half
• Lower Defensive guns to reflect the proposed weakness

WITH DEV THREADS

• N/A

SUGGESTIONS

• I often look through other submissions that are of the same type as mine, whether it be for vehicles, lightsabers, or anything else, (making sure they are using the same factory 3.0 rulings for consistency) and try to make sure my submissions reflect the average of those that I read over. Doing this can eventually lead to having submissions that literally only require a stamp of approval, even if it may take some reading and trial-and-error on the part of the submitter.
• Making use of a Pre-Factory section of a faction to have it peer reviewed may also help with the above mentioned suggestion.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Darth Vitium"]

Its all been dropped, and you know what...I like this better then what was on here...looking back at it was too OP for such a ship, but with this, I still get a very high offense count, and I am still happy. Hope this is to your liking.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="The Shadow King"]
I feel like I must sound like a broken record, but if you lower your defensive guns by 10 this should be good to go.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Darth Vitium"]

Can we make a compromise here? I feel like ten isnt a nice round number at all for this ship. Im willing to throw out the interceptors, for the count of 20 defence guns.

http://starwarsrp.ne...crinan-carrier/

This is a horrible example for its a CARRIER not an assault, this ship you've shown as an example was designed with the idea that it would carry a large amount of fighters.

http://starwarsrp.ne...-heavy-cruiser/

This ship is 200 meters smaller this ship I am trying to make, so again,

Length: 600 meters
Width: 76meters
Height: 85 meters


Compared to

Length: 800 meters
Width: 400 meters
Height: 260 meters


The comparison isnt even remotely close.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Weaknesses: The ship has no real defences

If you want to use this as a weakness, then I suggest you find a way to make it seem like an actual weakness, or you find another one. As it stands, this is not a weakness unless you're comparing it to the massive amount of capital guns.

 

[The Red of Sinner]

[member="Darth Vitium"]

Its been lowered to a count of ten

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved, pending secondary.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.