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Approved Starship Gatan-class Support Carrier

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Nyrasa Emrick

The Emrick Witch
Nyrasa Emrick

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  • Intent: To sub a patrol vessel for The Exilium Authority
  • Image Source: (x)
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
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  • Life Support
    • Military Grade Medbays
    • Military Grade Oxygen Supply System
    • Bulkhead System
    • Artificial Gravity
    • Additional Escape Pods - Command Center
  • Defensive Systems
    • EWAR Countermeasure Suite
    • Military Grade Shield Generators
    • Emergency Backup Shield Generators
    • Impervium Armor
    • Titanium Bulkhead Reinforcement
    • Surge Protection (Protects Electronics against EMP attacks)
    • Point Defense Batteries
    • Firespray Warhead Launchers (Flak Configuration)
  • Mobility
    • Standard Military Grade Maneuvering Thruster Suite
    • Inertial Stabilizers
    • Military Grade Hyperdrive Unit
    • Backup Hyperdrive unit
    • Standard Subspace Thruster Array
    • Capital Ion Engines (5)
  • Computers & Electronics
    • Tactical Bridge Computer Suite
    • Advanced Starfighter Squadron Tactical Status & Display Suite
    • Fleet Command & Assessment Blister
    • Standard Damage Assessment and Control Mainframe
    • System Diagnostic Computer
    • Unified Computer System
    • Electronic Countermeasure Suite
    • Tractor Beam Projectors (2)
  • Power Management
    • Military Grade Reactor
    • Reactor Overload Stabilizers
    • Ancillary Backup Reactor
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  • Defence + This ship is heavily defended and can take quite the beating
  • Speed + This ship, being a support vessel, needs speed on their side, thats why this ship comes equipped with top of the line thrusters to get it anywhere in the best time possible
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  • Energy - This ship devours energy, from the shield systems to weapons systems
  • Armaments - This ship doesnt contain a lot of weapons system's, but makes up for it with its defences
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This ship is a patrol vessel for the Exilium Authority produced by HRC Incorporated. It is a patrol ship, though with support capabilities, with medical equipment on board along with sufficient hanger space. It is heavily defended and is rarely on the front lines of a battle.
 
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MANIAC

HPI AI; Terraris Command
MANIAC
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Nyrasa Emrick Nyrasa Emrick

Nively made! I see you used my ships' advanced system list, and mostly because of this I found some problems:
  • The Image Source's link and the image is different, please fix this.
  • In the intent you mentioned this is a support carrier but the classification says this is a Patrol/Destroyer, which is the valid?
  • Your ratings are overpowered (+2), please fix it.
  • You cannot use the "KC-O682 'Crucible' Isotope-5 Compact Reactor" these are EE only things, your ship is not. You need Carpy's permission to this.
  • Dral Kayatr Plating; if you use the "betterskar" please add it to the materials as well.
  • Under the cooms: Eternal Empire database; these ships not connect to the EE, do you really want to add this? I think you forget to delete this line.
  • And same in the misc: "Eternal Empire command center" I think you forget to delete this one too.
 
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MANIAC

HPI AI; Terraris Command
MANIAC
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Nyrasa Emrick Nyrasa Emrick

Thank you! And I just noticed now, sorry for these:
  • The hangar allocation is 8, but you listed 10 squadrons, please edit this.
  • You missed this one:
    • In the intent you mentioned this is a support carrier but the classification says this is a Patrol/Destroyer, which is the valid?
  • And please link the Exilium Authority or your company to the Affiliation.
 
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