Jsc
~Still Surfin
I've been a member of the SW circuit since 2009 now across a dozen websites. But I've recently RP'ed with quite a few new writers to the game too. So it's time for another edition of: Give Jay Feedback. Part 2. New writers edition.
And for those of you who have nothing to critique, might I present: The SSC Dominion of Tash-Taral, Page 2 - Character: Anna Song. It's just a few posts but the whole Dominion is actually really good too. So it's a really fun read all the way through.
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To note. Some of the ways I'm looking to improve as a writer this year are:
Meh. We'll see how it goes.
And for those of you who have nothing to critique, might I present: The SSC Dominion of Tash-Taral, Page 2 - Character: Anna Song. It's just a few posts but the whole Dominion is actually really good too. So it's a really fun read all the way through.
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To note. Some of the ways I'm looking to improve as a writer this year are:
- No more Blogs.
- No more Signature Art.
- Taking only one Apprentice at a time.
- Writing another three part epic.
- Reducing my active thread count from 10 to 8.
- Finally RPing Meridian again.
- Making a Valien's Twi'lek Theme for the site.
- Lighting Jak Sandow on fire to see if we all get high from the smoke.
- Less Salt?
Meh. We'll see how it goes.
