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Approved Planet Ferellia

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
* Intent: creating a planet for a new character that has a significant effect on his/her backstory/current story.
* Canon: No
* Links: None
GENERAL INFORMATION
• Planet Name: Ferellia
* Demonym: Ferellian
* Region: Outer
* System Name: Skaale system
* System Features: Skaale features two asteroid belts, the Kaner and Lucid. The Kaner separates the second and third planets, while the lucid is behind the last planet. Skaale has a total of 7 planets and one sun. A day on Ferellia lasts about 25 GS hours, while a year is about 372 GS days.
* Coordinates: (M, 62)
* Major Imports: weapons, vehicles
* Major Exports: Exotic fruits
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
* Gravity: Standard
* Climate: smoggy, humid
* Primary Terrain: City, Swamps, Jungle
* Major Locations:

* Rendak and Reelo cities:
These cities make excellent tourist destinations, with the exquisite views of the White Sunsets and the Tellabaar Jungle. These cities are home to over 400 apartment houses each, with no lack of places to stay. Plenty of bars and spaceports line the streets, and if you're rich enough, you can even have a spaceport In the streets! Many companies offer Repulsorlift landing pads for rent. We also have tour guides and speeder bikes available for rent.

Tellabaar Jungle: this jungle is home to numerous species of plants and animals. Many ancient ruins have been discovered. From Hutt castles to Jedi Temples, this jungle has it all! WARNING: jungle features deadly animals, possibly witches, ancient temples, large pits, and dangerous mountains. Note: the Government of Ferellia takes no responsibility for lost limbs, lost items, or lost travellers.

Feraa spaceport: this small spaceport town is home to almost as many villains as Mos Eisley! Featuring everything from bounty hunters to dark Jedi, this wretched hive of muck and criminality is the place to go if you need someone "taken care of."



POPULATION
* Native Species: none, purely immigrants
* Immigrated Species: human, Bith, Twi'lek, aqualish
* Population: Heavily populated
* Demographics: Most cities on Ferellia are very friendly, unless you tap the wrong speeder or spill the wrong drink. These cities are open to all. We have very mixed cultures here on Ferellia. The cities are made up of about a quarter of humans, a quarter Twi'lek, about a quarter Bith, and the rest aqualish, plus whichever species are visiting.
* Primary Languages: Basic, Aqualish, Twi'lek.
* Culture: Ferellia isn't very religious, except what religions people bring with them. Daily life would include: Shopping, working, gambling, visiting clubs and bars, and watching Droidball on Holoscreens. Main Street is lined with screens permanently tuned into the Imperial Holonet, to keep all citizens updated on galactic news. Sports are not that big here, except what you can find at the bars. Mostly we just have Cage fights And Skerball.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
* Government: Monarchy
* Affiliation: Galactic empire
* Wealth: High. The High Cities are very prosperous
* Stability: High. Unrest? Ha! We've never been so peaceful! Ever since the Empire showed up, we've been doing great! Aside from the occasional hit-and-fly speeder accident, that is.
* Freedom & Oppression: Fear of the Empire definitely keeps the citizens In check. I don't believe they would intentionally cross the empire. Or the government, now that they work together.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
* Military: Each city has a heavy militia of about 200,000 each, except for Feraa. The spaceport has no defenses except what it's citizens can provide.
* Technology: technology has blessed this planet. With the Empire came so many wonderful things. Now, we have privacy shields on bacta tanks! We couldn't be happier with our technological state.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Ferellia was discovered by the Hutts in 3700-ish BBY. It was populated By slaves, until the Jedi Order came in and removed the Hutts. It served a very small role in the Great Galactic War. Aside from that, Ferellia's history is a mystery up until the Clone Wars. Many cities were destroyed during a Seperatist bombing raid. The Empire assisted them until the battle of Yavin. During the Galactic civil war, Ferellia sided with the Empire. This gave them massive benefits.... Until they had served their purpose. Then the empire left, and Ferellia was forgotten. When the Empire finally returned in 420 ABY, Searching for an Alliance Admiral, Ferellia's presence was returned to the star maps. Ferellia had barely advanced since the battle of yavin The empire brought with it fantastic technologies. Now, thanks to the might of the empire, Ferellia is Caught up with the rest of the Galaxy and ready to face whatever fate throws it's way.
 
[member="Jai Katan"]

So I'm still reading this, and I'm generally alright with this, but Tibanna gas is found in the atmospheres of planets, usually gas giants. It doesn't come from underground so please change this and other mentions of the gas fields if you want to keep Tibanna as an export
 
[member="Jai Katan"]

Alright so just a few things that need addressed/clarified:
  • The Native Species is blank, if there were no native species before the immigrated species arrive, please denote that there
  • In your gravity section, just put standard and remove Earth-like please
  • Can you expand a bit on this Tellabaar Jungle location as you mention Hutt ruins and Sith temples and I'm curious how those got there
  • Can you expand in your history section on the part about where and how the Empire returned to the world? Can you also add in your history section how the planet was discovered by the Hutts and Sith considering the world is quite faraway from their traditional areas of space? As while it might be a mystery to the IC inhabitants, OOC we should know about this
 
Jai Katan said:
The problem is, there's evidence for both. Archeologists have found sith artifacts. Explorers have found hutt statues. In reality, this planet was discovered by the Hutt Empire, and populated By slaves, until the Sith empire came in and removed the Hutts. The only reason The Hutts were this far from their normal space was because of a sith rumor.
This statement contradicts itself as the Hutts were also essentially allied with the Sith Empire of the day and age, which also coincidentally did not re-emerge and trigger the Great Galactic War for another few years after your stated date of discovery in 3700 BBY. Please clarify more. Also, how long is the time period between when the Empire left and then returned?

Also please expand on your jungle location as previously asked as that doesn't look like it was modified.
 
[member="Taeli Raaf"] I removed mentions of the Sith because it was too big of a hassle to worry about. I changed the history a bit and modified the jungle. Should comply with your requests. Sorry about all this!
 
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