Feedback~

[Darth Ferus]

This was something from my past server that a lot of people took part in. Feedback on their characters, how they rp. How they are in general. It helped a lot of people become better rpers (I'm definitely included), so I figured I'd make something about it here.

There are two rules for this.

1. You do not post feedback meant to tear into someone because you don't like them. The purpose is to make people into better rpers through constructive criticism. If you're only posting on a persons feedback to complain about them and not offer a solution, well. Don't post.
2. Do not start a Feedback thread for someone else. If you think someone could use some help to become a better RPer, send them a PM. If they don't have a feedback thread, it's probably cause they don't want one.

With those rules down. I'm gonna ask for some feedback to myself. I rp both Krest and @[member="Kage CC-743"], so if you got anything to say about the characters, how they're rped, or even me the rper, post it down below!

 

[Lief]

{Ignore my post in terms of the game itself} I'll be watching this carefully; stick to the rules provided, guys.

 

[Alexandra Feanor]

In the few RPs ive been in with Krest i find the character to be enticing, its a rare experience for me to RP with the same character in the type of thing that i do where i have no faction. With that said, i find him to be interesting, an excellent fighter and one that also can take hits unlike some RPers that have their chars like gods and avoid hits or not even point them out. Havent been able to really talk to him extensively, so i cant say much for his personality, but i found your character to be a controlled one mentally.

So yup, thats it, this whole feedback thing is interesting and i might do my own in light of typing about your character.

 

[Adenn Gra'tua]

So I've RPed at least once with Alexandra (it was Vendir) and it was a good RP, she didn't do anything to overpowered and each thing that she did I could actually see another force user doing (with some training), and the character is actually well written and balanced which made the RP even better. She also provided me with the chance to advance Vendir's story, which was great.

 

[Alexandra Feanor]

@[member="Adenn Gra'tua"]
Thanks... but i think this thread is feedback for Krest...

 

[Adenn Gra'tua]

Oh dang, didn't read the rules correctly, sorry Krest I am currently in a thread with you so I'll be able to leave some feedback after it's fineshed.

 

[Lief]

{No it isn't, it's feedback about the last person who commented. As before, ignore my comment. Feedback Adenn.}

 

[Darth Ferus]

No no. You make you're own thread x3

 

[Nikolas Faselli]

I haven't played with you nor have I seen your threads, but you seem rather interesting. Maybe we can have a thread in the future to see how good your character is?

 

[Antoir Setrrin]

KREST
MAN
YOU'RE CHILL, OKAY?
WE ALL GET MAD SOMETIMES, THAT'S OKAY~
No but seriously, you're one of the chillest peeps I've seen on the board. You're a damn good writer and I wish we could have written together.
I salute you. I SALUTE YOU.
IC AND OUT.
Okay? If you ever come back, I expect to get a hug, a fist bump, and a thread.
In any order you choose.

Peace man. I ain't seen someone who's so interesting in bettering themselves before. You're a good kid (who's probably like ten years older than 'lil 'ol me). Keep it up.
[member="Darth Ferus"]

 

[Darth Imperatus]

[member="Darth Ferus"]

If you haven't already left, I implore you not to. You're one of the best writer's I've come across and you've helped me a ton. We all get angry--that makes us human. You're Zabraak, so I think you should be given even more slack. But anyway, the New Order won't be the same without you. You're like our Sid.

 

[Evad]

About a year ago, Ordo and I did some training for those that wished to get improve their writing. It seemed to get a moderate amount of attention. Maybe we should start doing that again. It as personalized, and I think it could be useful if people were interested. As far as feedback for your writing, I don't think I've seen you write, so I have no comment. Good day though!

 

[Listeri Dalane]

About a year ago, Ordo and I did some training for those that wished to get improve their writing. It seemed to get a moderate amount of attention. Maybe we should start doing that again. It as personalized, and I think it could be useful if people were interested. As far as feedback for your writing, I don't think I've seen you write, so I have no comment. Good day though!

I'm interested in this!

 

[Evad]

[member="Listeri Dalane"] I'll tag you.

 

[Hannibal Oryen]

*Art of the Small Intensifies*

 

[Neskar A'toll]

c-can't we all have feedback?!