Feedback on Zef's story

[Zef Halo]

Let it roll, folks!

I've always been interested in feedback from people I know and I do not know regarding Zef's biography/story. Spare nothing. Bio's on the left for those that are not well versed with Chaos' mechanics.

 

[Sor-Jan Xantha]

You, sir, are a scoundrel.

(though, for what it's worth, I really did enjoy the opportunity to write with you during the Kashyyyk invasion, and hope to get another opportunity to do so again).

Also, you're the second person now to get me with that trick. [member="Tanomas Graf"] is the other.

 

[PromiseProgressPayoff]

Y'know, I've always loved the part about Constantinople and how it's Istanbul now.

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[Leo Vandermolen]

[member="3X744"] ahaha same here. Gotta love those rick-rolls...

 

[Tanomas Graf]

[member="3X744"] | [member="Leo Vandermolen"]

 

[Gael bar Ammon]

Can't critique someone that doesn't write

 

[Joza Perl]

[member="Zef Halo"]

I haven't been a part of your story for very long, but I really, sincerely like writing with you. You put a lot of work into your replies and it shows, moreover Zef is just fun to interact with in general.

You're alright, old man

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Joza Perl"]

You are this old man's rebirth booboo. <3