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Feedback on writing skills

So just because I have a few threads lined up I wanted to know what I could do to improve my writing style? I know that my posts are typically quite short in comparison to a lot of posters here, so if anybody has tips on lengthening posts that would also be much appreciated.
 
[member="Aria Vale"]
Your writing is good. You don't have many spelling or grammar errors, and your descriptions are nice and precise.

A couple of things I would work on:
  • Breaking your posts more into paragraphs so it's not a single block. This helps readability.
  • Some of your actions in posts are a little confusing. I would work on getting the actions you take in a post clearer, especially with the 'she, he, him, her' descriptive.
  • There's a few minor tense issues I notice, but nothing major.
Overall you've got a good style, keep it up! :)
 
[member="Aria Vale"]

Your, concise and to the point from the pvp match we did. I also like your usage of GIFS to show the attack. It can save people -like myself- a lot of time from trying to figure out what one person means if they ain't clear enough(which I've done on multiple occasions)>
 

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