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[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

Greetings chaos!

I was hoping to see what the other writers of Chaos think of Tyluko Dubykee. I have only been a member for a few short months and Tyluko is my only character so far, but he is something that I have taken great pride in and is someone I would like to improve, since he is my first and will probably remain my most used character. He is of a unique race and he utilizes the Force in ways that would be foreign to most. I am still learning the art of writing, but I was wondering if any of you had any advice for me, and please tell me what you think thus far. Is he someone you'd like to roleplay with?

 

[Vitha Na'iv]

He is the worst. She sucks. I'm not even sure what species he is. Let's build a space wall around Mon Calamari. He also smells horribly like fish. I'm not sure what he bathes in but I'm sure it isn't sanitary. Sad.

In all seriousness though he's a pretty great character. Plenty of weakness but balanced out by good strengths. Really like how he uses the force to control water as well which is fairly unique.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

Haha thanks [member="Vitha Sat-thuron"]

Anyone else?

 

[Judah Dashiell]

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I've found you interesting and have been wanting to RP for awhile. I know we were supposed to on my break but it didnt pan out sadly.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

Thank you [member="Judah Dashiell"] and no worries, there will always be another time. And I too would like to rp at some point.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

Anyone else?? Any advice or suggestions on either me as a writer or my character.