Feedback on Cryax Bane

[Cryax Bane]

My geeky Chiss slicer is my most developed character on the site, and also the one I've had to defend quite a bit OOC.

Love him or hate him? I would love to know what other writers think of him.

 

[Dōkeshi]

[member="Cryax Bane"]

IC, I have a couple of characters with sufficient reason to interrupt your breathing.

OOC, Love you. Keep writing how you are. It's hilarious.

 

[Puppet Kyrios]

[member="Cryax Bane"]

OOC: very descriptive writing, love ya for that

IC: Asteria finds you as someone you don't want to be an enemy of, and a good ally through and through. Keep on trucking

 

[Seraphina Shel'tah]

[member="Cryax Bane"]

I love Cryax & your writing, it's very unique and the character is really entertaining!

 

[Darth Carnifex]

At first, I was skeptical about the whole Red Raven faction and it's members, but then I got to know you better and write with you.

I immensely enjoy your writing, and it's not just because you let me do horrible things to their flesh with a knife.

You got a good, earthly humor to your character that I don't see a lot in other characters, and I like it.

Keep doin' what yer doin'.

[member="Cryax Bane"]

 

[Cryax Bane]

At first, I was skeptical about the whole Red Raven faction and it's members, but then I got to know you better and write with you.

I immensely enjoy your writing, and it's not just because you let me do horrible things to their flesh with a knife.

You got a good, earthly humor to your character that I don't see a lot in other characters, and I like it.

Keep doin' what yer doin'.

[member="Cryax Bane"]

This is a trap isn't it?

 

[Darth Carnifex]

This is a trap isn't it?

Mehbe.

 

[Cryax Bane]

Thanks for all the feedback everyone.

No one else? No angry Mandos or Black Sun want to weigh in?

 

[Dredge]

[member="Cryax Bane"]

I lost my favorite thrall to lord beard! D:

Now I all have to torture is Corruck! And he doesn't scream as good as Cryax!

But as for Cryax I love writing with that character and I love writing with you. To be honest probably one of the biggest reasons why I haven't just up and packed my bags is because I'd miss writing with you so much I'd find myself coming back because I immensely enjoy writing with you.

And as [member="Darth Vornskr"] aka Lord Beard said it's not because I got to physically and psychologically torture you

 

[Keira Priest]

You're one of the very first people I wrote with when I joined the site, and Cryax is the first character of yours that I met. At first I wasn't sure how to feel about his overall design, but he definitely grew on me, and now he's one of my favorites to thread with. His personality is great, and it's amazing to look back and see how far he's come from being a freelance slicer to the President of the Red Ravens. I love the way you write him (but I love your writing in general), and everything is always so easy and enjoyable to read. Keep doing what you're doing, because he's a great character.

ICly, well...that's debatable.

[member="Cryax Bane"]