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Feedback: Keira Verd

So, it's been a year (or more?) since I've done one of these critiques, which means another is more than overdue. Except this time, I want to focus on Keira as a character as opposed to me as a writer, since I haven't done that yet despite having written her for nearly four years at this point.

Without further ado, I'd like to hear your feedback about this crazy ride, whether good, bad, or somewhere in between.
 

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