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Approved Starship Expedition Class Cruiser

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Image Credit: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/File:QuasarFireCarrier-SWR.png


Intent: To create an Anti Starfighter escort for the fleets.
Manufacturer: Baktoid Industrial Systems
Model: XR-04-2
Affiliation: None
Modularity: None
Production:Mass Produced
Material: Durasteel / Duraplast
Description: Growing concerns about the threat that Capitol ships were in danger from Smaller ships and Starfighters. This concern was taken to heart by the new design built in conjunction with Baktoid Industries, It is the second largest ship to come out from Baktoid Industries. It has answered the call for with 30 flak cannons after research has shown how effective they can be for that extra punch against fighters along with 10 turbolasers for bigger craft so they are not completely helpless. They also can fit a small starfighter complement.

Classification: Balanced Cruiser
Role: Anti-Starfighter
Height: 100 Meters
Width: 150 Meters
Length: 500 Metres
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Ionization Reactor
Minimum Crew: 242 (not including the squadrons)
Optimal Crew: 1100
Armaments: 60 flak cannon batteries 12 Turbo laser batteries 2 tractor beams
Hanger: 4 squadrons of Naga Starfighter 1 drop ship
Non-Combative Attachments: standard stuff, sensers, etc...
Passenger Capacity: 200
Cargo Capacity: 4,420 Metric Tons
Consumables: 18 Months
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 5.5
 
@[member="Alli Wren"]

Good work. A couple things to touch on.

  • I know it's not mandatory, but an image would help tremendously. In lieu of that, I'll need a paragraph describing its general shape.
  • Your classification is off, though right in the title.
  • For hangers, we really prefer that squadrons be directly referenced as not all starfighters and bombers are created equal. Some are in the 10-14 meter range, but there are some bombers that are in the 20+ meter range.
 
@[member="Alli Wren"]

Clarify in your classification; is this a standard cruiser or a carrier? It seems like the latter, but your fighter numbers seem to indicate that it's the former.

Regardless, for the record; a carrier cannot hold more starfighters than the listed amount just because they're droid starfighters.
 
@[member="Alli Wren"]

In Classification, go ahead and list what type of ship it is (Balanced, Heavy Guns, Carrier). I'm pretty sure its the latter, in which case it can hold 48 fighters.

You need to credit the image. Otherwise, this looks good.
 
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