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Approved Starship Emerald Squadron Zero Fighter

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Create a specific fighter for an NPC squadron
  • Image Source: X
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Original
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Superiority Fighter
  • Length:
    • Landed: 20m
    • Flight: 17.5m
  • Width:
    • Landed: 6.5m
    • Flight: 17.1
  • Height:
    • Landed: 2.78m
    • Flight: 2.1m
  • Armament: High
    • x2 heavy laser canons
    • x2 rapid fire medium laser canons
    • x2 rapid fire ion canons
    • x2 warhead launchers (9 rounds each)
  • Defenses: Average
    • Standard ray and particle shield systems
    • Ordnance countermeasures
    • ESM defense suite
    [*]Squadron Count: Average: 12
    [*]Maneuverability Rating: High
    [*]Speed Rating:
    • Wings back: High
    • Wings open: High
    [*]Hyperdrive: Yes
    [*]Hyperdrive Class: 1.0


STANDARD FEATURES


  • All standard features
ADVANCED SYSTEMS


  • Enhanced communications suite
  • Enhanced sensor and targeting suite
  • Enhanced g-force suite
  • Propulsion systems
STRENGTHS


  • The enhanced propulsion systems in these craft allow them to outclass most opponents in and out of atmosphere
  • The addition of an astromech droid allows even untrained pilots to fly the craft successfully
  • The folding wings allow more of these craft to be able to be stored on larger ships
WEAKNESSES


  • Dedicated as fighter craft means the heavy lifting is required to go against larger ships
  • Even with shields, these craft are lightly armored and will not survive against prolonged fire
  • Small in size these craft were not meant for long mission on their own and require constant support from a land base or ship
DESCRIPTION

Originally the squadron under the Crown Princess herself, with their defection from the Imperial Navy, these craft are now in service with the Underground. Very few modifications have been done to improve their capabilities on behalf of Kira herself.
 
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Kimiko Taiyou Kimiko Taiyou , I'll be your judge for this submission.

Technically, this should be the faction or company that controls the Sakuran Shipyards. If you'd like, you can potentially write it like this "Sakuran Shipyards - Outer Planets Alliance" if you feel that this fits.

Depending on if the wings or open or closed, this is about 5-6 ratings too high right now. I'm not sure where you'd like cut back, but if there any "must-have" features or characteristics for this fighter, I can help you out with that if you let me know what they are.
 
Gir Quee Gir Quee

Hello and awesome to be working with you!

For the manufacturer, since I have established O'Hara Holdings as my primary manufacturer, would I also have to change it on the original sub (and all previous subs as well)?

Let me get to my computer and I can bump some areas down. I did go a little crazy here and I apologize!
 
Kimiko Taiyou Kimiko Taiyou , this looks like it's two ratings over strength right now. Semi-unique production gives you three rating points to spend (+3). Each High is worth one point, and each very high is worth two points.

(so +1 for armament, +2 for maneuverability, and +2 for speed and -3 for semi-unique production => +2 ratings over balance.
 
Kimiko Taiyou Kimiko Taiyou , this ship is now one rating understrength (I'm not differentiating the "High" rating for both types of speed as being different - that's only one rating to me). So you can increase one rating.

The original sub that you worked with Alkor is unbalanced, at least by current standards. Standards may have been a little bit different then, or there was more leeway allowed in judging back then.

There is a little spreadsheet tool here that you can also use to check your balance. You simply download the spreadsheet, plug in ratings, and it will tell you if it's balanced or if it is under or overstrength.
 
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