Approved NPC Edee

[Rianna Organa]

[SIZE=12pt]Name: Edee[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Loyalties: Companion to Rianna[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Role: Edee is there to protect Rianna, and those of her family. She provides early warning to anyone approaching if Rianna were too occupied to realize.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Development threads [/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Edee is found http://starwarsrp.net/topic/27153-what-hides-beneath-waiting-in-the-dark-ordika complete/page-2[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Edee is mentioned here - http://starwarsrp.net/topic/42374-i-see-a-blood-moon-rising-mandalorian-dominion-of-gromas/[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Here - http://starwarsrp.net/topic/54950-the-first-step/[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Age: 5 years (full grown)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Species: Manka Cat[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Force-Sensitive – No she is not. [/SIZE]


[SIZE=12pt]Appearance –[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Image of her at a kit - [/SIZE]http://members.upcpoczta.pl/a.mikita42/aukcja/cat.jpg
[SIZE=12pt]Image of her full grown - http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/swtor/images/f/fa/Swtor_2014-11-05_21-30-59-07.png/revision/latest?cb=20141217114906[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Personality – As with any cat species Edee is aloof seeking attention only when she feels the need. However she is fiercely protective of Rianna. Edee is also very inquisitive of new things, when it hits her she can be playful, loving but is always independent.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Weapon of choice – Claws[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Wealth – Though she is valuable, being one of the last of the remaining Alderaan Manka Cats.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Combat Function: Protector[/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Skills – Can stalk anything without being heard, her great claws allow her to shred anything that is soft, pliable such as skin, or leather with a swipe of her paw. Edee has excellent hearing, and keen eyesight. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Possessions - none[/SIZE]

[SIZE=12pt]Other Notes: [/SIZE]
[SIZE=12pt]Rianna and Ordo having had to kill the mother adopted the kit and was immediately named Edee which means teeth.[/SIZE]

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

Under review!

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Rianna Ar'klim"]

My apologies for the wait! Who knew getting an apartment was so distracting? Anyway...

I'm aware the Manka Cat is not force-sensitive on its own, and I'm not quite clear what it is you mean by:

Force-Sensitive – only with Rianna, and in time with Ordo and Rianna's children.

Could you please clarify/explain?

 

[Rianna Organa]

[member="Ilias Nytrau"] not a problem I've been busy trying to make a hospital.

Rianna possesses the skill of animal speak which she would teach her family so that they could interact on a high level with Edee. Other than just the commands taught to animals. Lol. Given she's a cat I don't know how much she will listen in either case.

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Rianna Ar'klim"]

Ah, I see. Well, that doesn't make the cat herself force sensitive, so putting anything other than 'no' is confusing. Could you fix that, please?

My only other issue is the claim that her claws can shred 'anything'. I would put that down to anything reasonably pliable, such as flesh and leathers, but certainly not metals, such as durasteel. Most breeds of feline around the galaxy would hurt themselves trying to shred durasteel - Felacatians being a noted, canonical exception. Could you, in your words, make the distinction that Edee cannot, in fact, shred 'anything' with her claws?

Otherwise, I see no other issues with the submission, so get those done for me, and we can be on our merry way with this one!

 

[Rianna Organa]

done. [member="Ilias Nytrau"]

 

[Ilias Nytrau]

[member="Rianna Ar'klim"]

Excellent! Consider this marked pending secondary approval!

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Kitty!

<_< I mean...approved.

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Approved.