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Approved Starship E-15 Heavy Bomber MK1

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Out of Character Information
  • Intent: To create a Heavy bomber for use by Intrepid Inc.
  • Image Source: Here Fam
  • Cannon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
Production Information
Technical Specifications
Strengths
  • Heavy shielding
  • Devastating loadout
  • Nice paint job
Weaknesses
  • Slow
  • Requires extensive preparation
Standard Features
  • All standard features
Advanced features
  • New features will be added to the MK2
Description
  • The MK1 E-15 Heavy bomber is a slow heavily armed bomber craft with the capability to destroy multiple frigates and severely damage destroyers in groups, they have heavy shielding and operate most efficiently when accompanied by escorts. They are slow but agile enough to evade enemy fire.
 
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Hi there! I will be reviewing this submission. So before we go too far into things, there are a couple of technical issues that need to be addressed first off.

https://www.nicepng.com/ourpic/u2q8o0o0a9o0a9a9_futuristic-spaceship-png-download-bomber-spaceship/

This link actually goes to the website for the picture rather than your company's faction page, please fix the link.

Also, though not a huge deal, generally it is preferred to link manufacturers and affiliation section to the company's Company Listing page rather than a faction page in the case of companies. While I don't think it's mandatory to do so since factions are now able to manufacture things in their own right, I just thought I'd mention that.

Next:
According to the Factory Template each of these sections must have a specific rating on the template scale. I've quoted the particular sections and highlighted the terms that need to used below so you can see what I mean. You're welcome to list specific armaments and defenses like you have, but the actual ratings need to be there as well. There are also examples of ships at the end of each Factory Template section as well if you want to look and see.

: (You may provide your armament in list format and must provide your vessel an Armament Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme.]

Defenses: (You may provide your shield and armor systems in list format and must provide your vessel a Defense Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme.]

Squadron Count: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission would have in a squadron. The average squadron for any starfighter is 12, at lengths averaging 12.5 meters. The bigger the fighter, the smaller your Squadron Count should be. The smaller the fighter, the bigger your Squadron count can be. [None: 1 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | High: 16 | Very High: 20 | Extreme: 24 ] Squadron Sizes may be listed as just the rating.)

Hyperdrive Class: (The lower the number, the faster the ship. You may use decimals. [Very Slow: 10 | Average: 2 | Very Fast: 0.5] Going below 1 typically requires balancing out with other weaknesses. Links: Hyperdrive, Hyperdrive Comparisons)

So if you could make these changes and tag me in this thread when you're done, we can continue on with the approval process. Also, if you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to let me know either here on via PM. Thanks!
 
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