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Approved NPC Ducky

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 3 Years
  • Force Sensitivity Force Dead
  • Species: Fleft-wauf.
  • Appearance: While Fleft-waufs are generally brown, but occasionally a rare white and grey is born; these are known as an albino genetic defect. Which is what this one is. White with grey patterning with golden eyes.
    Another notable feature is Ducky’s wingspan, which is 20 meters in length.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Ducky
  • Loyalties: It is a fiercely loyal beast to Aadya Volke
  • Notable Possessions: Basic tack such as a saddle for the rider to sit perched upon its back.
  • Personality: Ducky is a mean bird and will lunge at anyone she does not know, so caution is warranted when first meeting the fleft-wauf; which means that it is best that one should be accompanied by Aadya when meeting her. She is also a very protective bird and will seek to defend her master if it feels any kind of threatening element within the vicinity.
    While in Aadya’s presence, the bird will often exude a calm aura after the woman has calmed it down, as it can experience separation anxiety; especially considering that its first master was KIA.
  • Training:
    Verbal and Physical Commands.
    Attack and Defensive Aerial Maneuvers.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Combat Function: Ducky isn’t meant to be used as a combat functioning bird. However, the bird has a large beak and talons that it can use to defend itself and its rider with.
Strengths:
  • BEAK AND TALONS: Ducky’s beak and talons are sharp enough, that it can easily slice through any and all unprotected organic bodies. The fleft-wauf can use both beak and talons to tear apart and dismember armoured prey.
  • EAGLE EYE: The bird has exceptional vision and can see anything upon the ground even when high up in the sky. It’s what makes this type of bird a great mount to have when wanting eyes in the sky.
  • CAMOUFLAGE: The only time that the bird can almost completely camouflage itself in the sky, is the fact that it’s white and grey feathers makes it look like a cloud in the sky at a glance. As such, if someone was scrutinising the sky, they’d notice the fleft-wauf. So it’s colouring only works in its favour whenever someone only briefly glances at the sky.
Weaknesses:
  • LARGE FRAME: Due to the bird’s large size, it makes for a very large target in the sky and makes it hard for it to manoeuvre when grounded. As such, it’s better to keep the bird in the sky, as it is much slower upon the ground, due to its talons are not suited for land movement.
  • NO ARMOUR: So then it’s quick and fast movements are not hindered, no extra armour has been placed upon the bird. This leaves it somewhat defenceless from sneak attacks especially.
  • BATTLE MEDITATION: Ducky cannot experience the positive side effects of battle meditation.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Aadya met Ducky when she and her colleagues had set out to disarm bombs that had been developed by radicals to blow up gas pipelines. After Aadya had landed upon the bird’s back, she disposed of its current rider and Ducky took a sharp nosedive which would have killed them both. Except, Aadya reached out to the bird through the force to bond with the animal and force her will upon it.

However, after the bombs had been disarmed, a thin bond out of companionship had been formed, so Aadya claimed Ducky as her own and ever since then the two have been inseparable. They have since formed a bond that is very much alone the lines of master and pet.
 
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Aadya Volke Aadya Volke

Hi,

First, your image credit should link to the site that it is found on, rather than directly to the image itself. In this case, it is XXX.

PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: [ Please keep it sensible. ]
  • Force Sensitivity: [ Choose from: Force Dead, Non-Force User, Untrained Force Sensitive, Force User. ]
  • Species: [Remember to consult the Banned Species List. Don't use anything on it. If the species is uncommon or custom it should be linked to the correct Wookie Article or the Codex Species Sub. ]
  • Appearance: [ Describe the appearance of the creature. How big or small are they? Fur or scale colour. Any distinguishing marks such as scars, tattoos, or other markings. ]

As it's apart of the template, make sure to re-add the 'Force Sensitivity' prompt and fill that in.
 
Onansi of Thyrsus Onansi of Thyrsus | Aadya Volke Aadya Volke

This looks really good o far, there is just one thing that jumps out at me.

As per the codex rules:

  • Force Dead species are not immune to the Force- they simply cannot be affected by most abilities directly. Force Dead species should include appropriate weaknesses related to that trait, such as an inability to benefit from positive Force powers like healing or battle meditation.

Could you please update the submission to include a weakness in this vein.
 
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