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Tech Review Dawnstar Reliquary : Crown of Command

Manufacturer: The Order of the Sunstar; Sunfire Legion sanctified artificers; approved Arcanists of Centerra
Type: N/A
Market Status: Closed Market
Production: Semi-Unique
Weight: Average
Size: Average




















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Dawnstar Reliquary
Command Diadem of the Sunfire Legion


Out of Character Information


Intent To create a sacred command relic and Force Artifact for Centerra's highest Sunfire Legion leaders.
Image Source PalaDad-of-Light
Canon Link See Primary Source below.
Permissions N/A
Primary Source
Core Lore / Affiliation
Artifact / Crystal Construction
Crystals / Materials
Spirit / Memory / Soul-Energy Sources
Energy Absorption / Transfer
Force Powers

Production Information


Manufacturer Matthew of Valendale; The Order of the Sunstar; Centerra's Sunfire Legion sanctified artificers
Affiliation Matthew of Valendale; Centerra; Centerra's Sunfire Legion high command; Sunfire Legionnaires; Sunfire Dragon-Knights; The Order of the Sunstar
Market Status Closed-Market
Model Crown of Command
Modularity Limited. Each diadem is shaped for a specific bearer, command helm, and station of authority.
Production Semi-Unique
Material Electrum, gold, silver, enamel, durasteel, songsteel, Krysteel / Kyber Iron, kyber crystal, Solari crystal, Kaiburr crystal, Ankarres Sapphire, Amplification Kyber Crystal, kasha crystal, meditation crystal, pontite crystal, Upari crystal, crystal matrix

Special Features


Relic of High Command A sacred command diadem crafted for Centerra's highest Sunfire Legion leaders. The diadem may be worn openly or locked into a Sunfire Legion command helm as a battlefield symbol of authority.
Dawnstar Crystal A crystal matrix built around various crystals that work together in the artifact.
Many Shades of the Force The Reliquary uses Many Shades of the Force as philosophical support for viewing spirit-gathering and life-force resonance beyond a strict Light / Dark binary.

Dark-side precedents such as the Force Harvester, Leviathan, and Thought Bomb show the predatory version of this concept: stolen Force-energy, devoured life-force, absorbed spirits, battlefield soul-harvesting, and trapped souls.

The Reliquary's spirit-gathering is separate from predatory Dark-side soul-harvesting and does not appear as Dark-side use.
Spirits of the Fallen The Reliquary preserves the final presence of Fallen Sunfire Legionnaires within its crystal matrix: courage, Duty, memory, pain, trust, and battlefield resolve. Their final resonance is gathered into the crown for preservation during battle. Afterward, any surviving member of the Order of the Sunstar may perform the Sunstar release ceremony, honor the Fallen by name, and release the gathered spirits onward into the Cosmic Force.
Dark Side Rejection Even brief contact may become agonizing, a warning heat beneath the skin that worsens with the claimant's corruption. The darker and more malicious the claimant, the harsher the rejection becomes; prolonged contact, or a direct attempt to profane the Reliquary, may erupt into searing Force Light with Wall of Light-style purifying intensity, wreathing the claimant in golden-white searing light and fire. Its visible expression may echo Pyrokinesis, Electric Judgment, and Alter Environment-shaped phenomena, while serving as a Light-side answer to Force Lightning's destructive force. At its worst, the rejection may burn flesh, spirit, and dark-side taint with potentially fatal intensity.
Energy Glutton
&
Force Fed
The Dawnstar crystal absorbs and stores many forms of energy directed at the Reliquary, including Force lightning, fire, heat, light, hostile sorcery residue, battlefield energy, and gathered Spirits of the Fallen.
  • Tutaminis / Absorb Energy / Dissipate Energy - direct energy absorption, dissipation, and negation.
  • Force Drain - dark-side draining of Force or life energy into oneself.
  • Force Harvester - Sith artifact that absorbed the Force from living beings and used it as a power source.
  • Sith Alchemy - dark-side alteration of items or living beings; useful precedent for Force-altered relics.
  • Force Healing - transfers life/Force energy from healer to target.
  • Dark Transfer - dark-side transfer of energy used to heal, revive, or harm through shatterpoints.
Oneness Imbuement The Force-imbued Reliquary helps a trained Force-sensitive bearer enter Oneness more easily while wearing it.
Meditation Crystal Clarity The Reliquary includes multiple meditation crystal facets, chosen for their ability to aid meditation, strengthen Force connection during combat, and help the bearer retain energy while fighting. While worn, they help the bearer keep a clear mind under stress, maintain steadier Force control, and make cleaner command decisions.
Force-Activated Relic The Reliquary is Force-activated, allowing a trained Force-sensitive bearer to awaken its higher functions through the Force rather than ordinary mechanical controls.

Strengths


Battlefield Aura A trained bearer may channel gathered Spirits into courage, focus, morale, unity, and battlefield coordination through existing Force abilities.
Light-Side Purification The Reliquary is able to resist dark-side corruption, hostile spiritual residue, and Sith sorcery influence.
Energy Storage The Dawnstar crystal absorbs and stores gathered energy within its matrix, including Force energy, hostile sorcery residue, battlefield energy, and gathered Spirits of the Fallen.
Battlefield Command Enhancement A trained bearer may release stored energy through linked Force abilities to strengthen courage, focus, morale, unity, and battlefield coordination.
Protective Warding The Reliquary may support brief defensive warding around the bearer during battlefield crisis.
Light-Side Purity The Reliquary is able to resist dark-side corruption, hostile spiritual residue, and Sith sorcery influence. Hostile or corrupted bearers may be burned by the band.
Battlefield Oneness Through its imbued construction, the Reliquary can help a trained bearer reach a state of Oneness during battle, sharpening focus, calm, courage, and command presence.
Force Empowerment The Reliquary empowers a trained Force-sensitive bearer through the Force, channeling stored energy, gathered Spirits, and Dawnstar crystal resonance into the wielder's existing abilities. This can heighten focus, endurance, command presence, Light-side resistance, and battlefield awareness.

Weaknesses



Writer Permission Required The Reliquary cannot draw from enemies, prisoners, civilians, unwilling beings, unclaimed NPC populations, faction-owned dead, or another writer's characters without permission. Any use involving another writer's characters, NPCs, Spirits, dead, culture, or lore requires that writer's consent.
Active Invocation Required The Reliquary does not act on its own. The bearer must actively focus through it and release its gathered Spirits through known Force abilities. It cannot automatically win battles, command armies, protect the bearer, or coordinate troops without effort.
Trained Bearer Required The Reliquary does not grant Force mastery to an untrained wearer. Its greater effects require a disciplined Force-sensitive commander trained to bear the grief, memory, and pressure preserved within the Dawnstar crystal matrix.
Force Connection Required Force-null fields, ysalamiri, voidstone, severing effects, and similar interference can silence the Dawnstar crystal, preventing it from gathering, holding, magnifying, or releasing stored resonance. In such conditions, the diadem becomes little more than a ceremonial crown.
Battlefield Range The Reliquary is a battlefield command relic, not a planetary or system-scale artifact. Its spirit-gathering, command support, morale support, and warding are limited to the immediate battlefield around the bearer.
Sacred Maintenance After use, the Reliquary must be cleansed, realigned, and brought through Sunstar funerary observance to restore clarity and stability. Neglect leaves the crown heavy with grief, unstable resonance, and spiritual noise, increasing the risk of backlash against the bearer.
Physical Vulnerability The Reliquary is a physical device and can be broken, crushed, cracked, stolen, or damaged by sufficient force or sabotage.
Bearer Strain Using the Reliquary places heavy strain on the bearer. Drawing on stored energy, gathered Spirits, Oneness, and command effects can cause exhaustion, pain, disorientation, emotional bleed-through, or loss of focus.

Description


The Dawnstar Reliquary is a sacred command diadem worn by Centerra's highest Sunfire Legion leaders. Only a small handful exist, each consecrated through the Order of the Sunstar and entrusted to sworn high command.

At its brow rests the Dawnstar crystal matrix: a Solari heartstone supported by kasha, pontite, kyber, and meditation crystal within a crystal matrix lattice. The crystals serve as the Reliquary's storage focus, alignment lens, and command conduit.

The Spirits of Fallen Sunfire Legionnaires and possibly those allied to their cause may be gathered into the Reliquary. These Spirits are the final presence of the Fallen: courage, Duty, memory, pain, trust, and battlefield resolve preserved within the crown's crystal matrix.

A trained Force-sensitive commander may release gathered Spirits and energy stored by the diadem through existing Force abilities. These include Force Valor, Battlemind, Battle Meditation, Force-meld, Force Harmony, Force Light / Wall of Light, Force Barrier, and Protection Bubble. In battle, this may strengthen courage, unity, morale, clarity, protection, and command focus among nearby allies.

The Reliquary is Light-aligned. It is built to resist dark-side corruption and burn hostile or corrupted bearers with golden-white heat.

After battle, Sunstar funerary rites honor the Fallen by name and release the gathered Spirits onward into the Cosmic Force. The Reliquary is then cleansed, realigned, and made quiet again until Centerra's banners call for it once more.


 


Out Of Character Info


Intent: To create a sacred command relic for Centerra's highest Sunfire Legion leaders.
Canon Link: Listed in Sub
Permissions: N/A
Primary Source(s):

Listed in Sub


Technical Information


Affiliation: Centerra; The Sunfire Legion; The Order of the Sunstar; approved military leadership of Centerra
Model: Crown of Command
Modular: Yes
Material: listed in sub
Last edited:

Admiral Burtch

Retired old admiral
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Required Changes:
  • This needs links for manufacturer and affiliation.
  • Needs links for materials used.
  • Dawnstar crystal, Dawnstar Rite, and oath echos appear to be critical components of how this submission functions. Please provide links to these features, or detailed feature descriptions to eliminate ambiguity. Note, please keep in mind that the factory is not permitted to invent new force powers, so if necessary, provide clear evidence of pre-existing force abilities to avoid the appearance of fabricating new capabilities.
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Good Timezone to you! Nice job with the formatting!

Required Changes:
  • This needs links for manufacturer and affiliation.
  • Needs links for materials used.
  • Dawnstar crystal, Dawnstar Rite, and oath echos appear to be critical components of how this submission functions. Please provide links to these features, or detailed feature descriptions to eliminate ambiguity. Note, please keep in mind that the factory is not permitted to invent new force powers, so if necessary, provide clear evidence of pre-existing force abilities to avoid the appearance of fabricating new capabilities.
When finished please tag me so we can proceed!

Thank you! I went through and addressed the required changes, and I overhauled the design to better accommodate the expanded reasoning, source links, and feature clarifications.

Changes Made:

  • Added / confirmed links for Manufacturer, including Matthew of Valendale, the Order of the Sunstar, Centerra, and the Sunfire Legion-associated sources.
  • Added / confirmed links for Affiliation, including Matthew of Valendale, Centerra, the Sunfire Legion, and the Order of the Sunstar.
  • Expanded the Materials field with linked sources for the physical and Force-reactive components used in the relic.
  • Added a dedicated Materials link list in Primary Source for easier review.
  • Clarified that the Dawnstar Crystal is not a new mineral, kyber type, or invented material. It is a Centerran ritual name for a linked crystal assembly using established linked materials and crystal precedents.
  • Clarified that the Dawnstar Rite is not a new Force power. It is a voluntary military-funerary oath / consent rite that frames how the artifact receives and stores the final essence of sworn Fallen.
  • Clarified that oath-echoes are not a new Force power. They are a descriptive submission term for stored Force-resonance, final vows, impressions, and life-essence, supported by linked sources such as Psychometry / Force Echo, Noetikon, Oneness, Transfer Force, Force-meld, and similar existing Force concepts.
  • Expanded the Primary Source Link Bank / Effect Descriptions to explain how each linked source supports the artifact's functions.
  • Expanded the Source-to-Effect Clarification section to show which pre-existing Force abilities support each submission term / effect, and added limits so the artifact does not appear to create new Force powers.
 

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Dawnstar Reliquary
Command Diadem of the Sunfire Legion


Out of Character Information


Intent To create a sacred command relic / Force Artifact for Centerra's highest Sunfire Legion leaders; a Light-aligned battlefield crown that receives the willing final strength, life-essence, and Force-born energy of sworn Fallen through a voluntary rite when they die within its battlefield range.

The Reliquary consumes the Fallen's body in full, converting the last living vitality and mortal remains into consecrated Force-energy so their corpse cannot be profaned, possessed, raised, or marionetted by hostile sorcery. It holds that fading essence in temporary sacred custody, empowers a trained commander through existing linked Force abilities, and releases the Fallen onward through Sunstar funerary rites once their final service is complete.
Image Source PalaDad-of-Light
Canon Link See Primary Source Link Bank below.
Permissions N/A
Primary Source
Local / Chaos Lore

Force Artifacts / Force-Imbued Objects

Crystals / Force Matrices
Materials

Spirit / Memory / Death-Passage Sources

Command / Morale / Endurance Powers

Light-Side Protection / Purification

Ritual Force Traditions / Witchcraft

Dark Mirror / Sith / Death-Magick Boundaries

Force Philosophy / Interpretive Support



Primary Source Link Bank / Effect Descriptions


Source Description How It Supports The Dawnstar Reliquary
Local / Chaos Lore
Centerra The planet and cultural home of the Sunfire Legion and the Order of the Sunstar. Centerra provides the religious, military, and cultural ground for the Reliquary's command function and sacred battlefield use. Anchors the relic to Centerran military and funerary practice. Supports the Dawnstar Rite, Sunfire Legion oath language, sacred command symbolism, and Light-aligned consecration as Centerra-native traditions.
The Order of the Sunstar A Centerra-native religious order tied to Light, balance, rites, and sacred duty. Supports the Sunstar funerary release rites, the Dawnstar Oath, the sacred custody of the Fallen, and the idea that the Reliquary is consecrated through Centerra's own Light-aligned spiritual tradition.
Holocron: The Study of the Hidden Arts A Chaos source for Force study, occult practice, ritualized Force knowledge, and mystical Force-artifice. Supports the Reliquary being created through studied Light-side Force-artifice, ritual preparation, and deliberate Force-imbued construction rather than a newly invented Force powers.
Force Artifact / Imbuement Sources
Force Artifact - Canon Force artifacts are objects imbued with or connected to the Force. Canon examples include artifacts that can contain memories or past personalities, enhance Force use, or hinder Force use. Primary support for the Dawnstar Reliquary as a Force-imbued crown that can hold presence, preserve oath-bound resonance, and empower an attuned bearer through existing Force effects.
Force Artifact - Legends Legends precedent for Force-imbued relics, talismans, and other objects shaped by Force traditions. Supports the crown as a crafted Force relic rather than ordinary jewelry, and as a ritual focus for command, sacred custody, and oath-energy release.
Imbue Item - Legends A Force technique used to permanently place Force power into specially prepared objects. Supports the Reliquary being ritually prepared as a lasting Force-imbued artifact through its constructed form, consecrated frame, and ritual inscriptions.
Force Weapon - Legends A Force tradition in which an object is strengthened or charged through the Force. Supports the principle that a physical item can carry Force reinforcement and ritual purpose, allowing the Reliquary to function as a Force-bearing command focus.
Many Shades of the Force - Legends Many Shades of the Force is a Legends Force power associated with the Aing-Tii. It is listed as a Gray Alter/Control ability, with its purpose described as converting a usually light-side or dark-side power into a neutral expression. The source presents the Force as broader than a strict division of good and evil, allowing certain abilities and effects to be approached through a different philosophical understanding. This supports the Dawnstar Reliquary's Light-Side Mirror Principle. The crown is a battlefield Force Artifact that gathers strength from the dead, a concept that could normally read as dark-side sorcery, Sith ritualism, or death-fed battlefield magick. Many Shades of the Force gives precedent for reframing that kind of effect through a different Force philosophy. For the Reliquary, that death-fed aspect is transformed into a Light-aligned command rite through consent, oath, sacred remembrance, bodily transmutation, and the willing final service of the Fallen.

Before battle, a sworn Sunfire Legionnaire may take the Dawnstar Oath before the Reliquary, its bearer, or a consecrated Sunfire banner:

My strength to Centerra, my blade to the living, my soul unto the Light;
Should I fall beneath the Sunfire banner, let Duty bear my courage through the fight.

Through that oath, the Legionnaire willingly binds their final vow to the Dawnstar crystal. The rite creates a deliberate Force-bond between the Legionnaire, the Reliquary, and the sworn defense of Centerra and service to the Sunfire Legion. If the Legionnaire dies within the crown's battlefield range, the ritual receives their final strength, life-essence, and Force-born energy into the crown's crystal matrix, empoering the person wearing it.

The Reliquary consumes the Fallen's body in full. Their last living vitality and mortal remains are transmuted into consecrated Force-energy, denying hostile hands the chance to profane, possess, raise, or marionette the corpse through Sith sorcery, hostile death-magick, or other disgraceful animation. The Fallen are not left behind as meat for evil rites; their final offering is carried into the crown before an enemy can twist it into mockery.

This binding is literal, but limited. It binds the Legionnaire's departing spirit, fading essence, and final oath-echo / ghost to the Reliquary for a short sacred purpose, rather than keeping them as a captive servant. The oath-echo carries courage, Duty, memory, pain, and battlefield resolve: the last strength the Fallen willingly gave for the living. While held in temporary sacred custody, that strength may be released through the bearer as command presence, sheer energy, endurance, morale, Light-side resistance, and protective warding.

Those stored energy / power may later be released through the Reliquary's bearer by way of existing Force effects such as Oneness, Force Valor, Battlemind, Battle Meditation, Force Harmony, Force Light, and protective warding. After battle, the crown must be brought before Sunstar priests, where the Fallen are named, honored, and released onward through Sunstar funerary rites into the Cosmic Force.

In practical terms, the Reliquary turns a death-fed relic concept into a Light-aligned command rite: the last strength of the Fallen becomes courage for the living, endurance for the commander, and Light against the darkness still pressing the line.
Crystal / Storage Matrix Sources
Solari Crystal - Canon A rare kyber crystal associated with individuals highly attuned to the Light. Its performance could suffer when the wielder's connection was clouded by inner conflict. Supports the Dawnstar crystal's Light-side alignment and sensitivity to the bearer's spiritual state. This helps justify the Reliquary favoring worthy commanders and resisting corrupted, malicious, or conflicted use.
Solari Crystal - Legends A powerful Light-side crystal that could only be used by one pure in spirit and devoted to the Light. Legends also describes it as unable to be corrupted by the dark side. Strengthens the crown's worthy-bearer safeguard, searing rejection mechanic, and Light-aligned command identity. The Solari heartstone is the clearest crystal basis for the Reliquary refusing dark-side corruption.
Kasha Crystal - Legends A meditation crystal used by Cereans to clear the mind of distractions. As a lightsaber crystal, it helped the wielder maintain clarity even in tense combat. Supports the crown's command clarity, focus under battlefield stress, and resistance to panic. Kasha facets help explain how the Reliquary's bearer can bear the Fallen's grief and strength without immediately being overwhelmed.
Pontite Crystal - Canon A Force-attuned kyber crystal used in lightsabers and referenced in the creation of comm devices. Supports the Reliquary's battlefield resonance and command-radius themes. Pontite splinters give the Dawnstar crystal a basis for transmitting command strength, warning impressions, and shared resolve through a limited radius.
Pontite Crystal - Legends A rare Adegan focusing crystal used in lightsaber construction and associated with strong Force-attuned performance. Adds additional precedent for pontite as part of the Dawnstar crystal assembly. It supports the idea that the crown's resonance is focused, rare, and ritualized rather than casual or mass-produced.
Crystal Matrix / Noetikon - Legends A Jedi crystal-matrix relic infused with the wisdom, knowledge, and personality-imprints of Jedi Masters. Supports the Reliquary's crystal matrix as a vessel for preserved presence, record, and identity-linked resonance. This is one of the strongest supports for the crown holding oath-echoes, names, final vows, and temporary sacred custody of the Fallen before release rites.
Oath-Echo / Memory / Death-Passage Sources
Psychometry / Force Echo - Canon A Force ability also called Force Echo or Sense Echo, allowing information to be perceived from objects or places. Such echoes may include impressions of people, events, sights, sounds, and emotions. Supports oath-echoes as Force-preserved impressions tied to a person, place, object, and moment of death. This helps explain how the crown catches courage, pain, Duty, memory, and final resolve as readable and usable Force-resonance.
Cosmic Force - Canon The aspect of the Force into which all life feeds upon death. Star Wars sources treat becoming one with the Force after death as a real metaphysical passage. Supports the Reliquary's release cycle. The Fallen may be held in temporary sacred custody through the Dawnstar Oath, but their final destination remains the Cosmic Force. After battle, Sunstar funerary rites honor and release them onward.
Transfer Force - Legends A Light-side technique involving the transfer of part of one's life force to another being, even to save a life. Supports the idea that life-force can be deliberately given and received through the Force. For the Reliquary, the Dawnstar Oath turns the Fallen's final life-resonance into a voluntary death-gift that strengthens the living commander rather than being stolen by hostile sorcery.
Oneness - Canon A state of profound union with the Force. The source connects death with becoming one with the Cosmic Force, and includes examples of living Jedi being empowered, encouraged, or spiritually supported by the will, energy, or spirits of others, including departed Jedi. Supports the Reliquary's temporary custody, empowerment, and release cycle. The Fallen may be held through the Dawnstar Oath, lend their final strength and spiritual radiance to the bearer, and then be released onward into the Cosmic Force through Sunstar funerary rites.
Command / Morale / Endurance Sources
Force Valor - Legends A Light-side Force power that increased resolve, speed, accuracy, and the capabilities of the user and nearby allies. Supports the Reliquary releasing oath-energy as courage, morale, steadiness, and battlefield resolve. This is one of the clearest sources for the crown empowering both the bearer and nearby sworn troops.
Battlemind - Legends A combat-focused Force state that strengthened morale, fighting spirit, focus, and the ability to push physical limits in battle. Supports the bearer using stored oath-echoes to push through fear, pain, shock, exhaustion, and battlefield stress. This helps explain the commander's increased endurance when the Fallen lend their final strength.
Enhance Attribute - Legends A Control-based Force power used to temporarily heighten physical traits such as speed, strength, reaction, perception, or resilience. Supports limited physical steadiness and short bursts of command endurance. Through the Reliquary, this is expressed as the commander being briefly strengthened by stored oath-energy rather than made permanently superior.
Force Body - Legends A Control-based Force power that allowed a Force-sensitive to keep drawing on the Force beyond normal exhaustion, at real physical cost. Supports the strain and cost of using the Reliquary. The bearer may endure beyond normal limits when empowered by the Fallen, but overuse still harms the body, drains the crown, and increases the burden of command.
Battle Meditation - Canon A rare Force ability involving connections with others nearby and the uniting of minds or coordination in battle. Supports the crown as a command focus that helps nearby troops act with shared purpose. The Reliquary does not replace training; it helps a trained commander channel oath-energy into battlefield cohesion.
Battle Meditation - Legends A broader Legends version of battlefield coordination that could raise allied morale, stamina, and combat performance while weakening enemy resolve. Supports the command-mantle effects of the Reliquary: rallying a line, restoring formation discipline, and turning the Fallen's last strength into coordinated resistance.
Force-meld - Legends A rare technique joining minds through the Force so participants could coordinate, draw strength from one another, and act with greater unity. It also carried mental and emotional risk under strain. Supports limited command-link clarity among consenting allies and explains the backlash risk. The Reliquary can help bind the commander, sworn troops, and oath-echoes into a temporary battlefield unity, but grief, pain, or mass death can overwhelm the bearer.
Light-Side Purification / Anti-Corruption Sources
Force Harmony - Legends A Light-side ability where willing Force-users joined their energies to manifest Light-side strength and protect against dark-side powers. Supports the Reliquary's harmony resonance, protection against fear, and resistance to corruption. This also helps frame the temporary custody of the Fallen as a protective Light-side joining rather than a hostile binding.
Force Light - Legends A Light-side power used to weaken darksiders, purge or contain dark-side manifestations, oppose Sith magic, and affect hostile spirits or dark-side energies. Supports the Purifying Flare, anti-corruption function, and protection of the Fallen from hostile death-magick. This source also justifies the Reliquary's consecrated rejection: corrupted bearers, malicious claimants, and dark-side-aligned beings who touch or attempt to wield it are met with burning Light rather than power.

Even brief contact may become painful or deeply uncomfortable, a warning heat beneath the skin that worsens with the wielder's corruption. The darker and more malicious the claimant, the harsher the rejection becomes; prolonged contact, or a direct attempt to profane the Reliquary, may sear flesh, spirit, and dark-side taint with enough force to prove fatal.
Wall of Light - Legends A powerful united Light-side manifestation used to contain or purge dark-side power from places or sever dangerous darksiders from the Force. Supports the Reliquary's larger Light-side anti-corruption theme. In this submission, the effect remains brief, localized, and artifact-focused: a small command relic echo of the principle, not a planet-scale Wall of Light.
Defensive Warding Sources
Force Barrier - Legends A defensive Force power that creates a barrier, wall, or ward of Force energy around a target. Such barriers can absorb physical or energy attacks depending on the user's strength and focus. Supports the Reliquary creating brief defensive pressure, local warding, and protective shields around the bearer. The Fallen's stored strength can be expressed as temporary protection rather than an offensive attack.
Protection Bubble - Legends A related defensive Force power that creates a protective sphere or globe, but requires intense concentration and may limit the user's movement. Supports short-lived protective bubbles or command wards around the bearer. It also adds clear limits: concentration, local area, movement restriction, and strain.
Witchcraft / Ritual Force Tradition Support
Nightsisters - Canon A Dathomiri witch coven known for wielding dark magicks through a Force tradition distinct from Jedi and Sith teachings. Supports the existence of ritual Force traditions, witchcraft-style rites, and non-Jedi/non-Sith mystical practice. The Reliquary uses this as precedent for ritual Force expression; its own tradition remains Centerran and Light-aligned.
Magick - Canon/Legends A term for Nightsister-style Force witchcraft and ritualized supernatural effects. Magick could be channeled through practitioners, objects, artifacts, and Dathomirian traditions. Supports "rite," "ritual magic," and artifact-focused Force practice as Star Wars-flavored mysticism. It helps explain the Dawnstar Oath as ritualized Force work rather than a mundane ceremony.
Nightsister Crystal Ball - Canon A crystal object crafted by Mother Talzin through her unique Force connection, used for visions and locating individuals. Supports ritual crystal focuses in Force traditions outside ordinary Jedi and Sith practice. This helps justify the Dawnstar crystal as a sacred ritual receiver, focus, and conduit.
Magical Ichor - Canon A luminous Dathomiri mist summoned through Nightsister magick and used in supernatural acts, including the creation or alteration of objects and crystals. Useful as ritual comparison only. It shows that Force-witch traditions can use visible magical mediums and empowered objects. The Reliquary's equivalent is not ichor, but Sunstar consecration, Light-side crystal resonance, and oath-bound Force energy.
Dark Mirror / Boundary Sources
Chant of Resurrection - Canon A powerful Nightsister spell used to temporarily reanimate the dead while the caster maintained the effect. Dark mirror source. It shows the kind of hostile death-magick the Dawnstar Rite is designed to deny. The Reliquary counters corpse-puppetry by drawing the Fallen's last vitality into sacred custody before enemies can profane the body.
Talisman of Resurrection - Canon A Nightsister talisman associated with raising deceased Nightsisters. Dark mirror source. It establishes that death-related talismans exist in Star Wars, while the Dawnstar Reliquary functions as the Light-side inversion: temporary protection, empowerment of the living, and later funerary release instead of resurrection.
Sith Alchemy - Canon A dark-side array of magical Force techniques used by Sith, including unnatural alteration, artifact manipulation, and death-defying experiments. Dark mirror source. It supports the Reliquary as a Light-side answer to Sith artifice. The Dawnstar Rite changes the source and method: willing oath, sacred custody, and protective release rather than domination or corruption.
Sith Talisman - Legends A Sith artifact type used to channel, focus, or amplify dark-side power, often through jewelry or worn relics. Dark mirror source. It supports the general artifact shape: a worn relic that channels ritual power. The Dawnstar Reliquary mirrors that form while replacing dark-side amplification with Light-side command, oath-energy, and protection of the Fallen.



Powerful Force Artifact / Spiritual Precedents


Artifact / Source What It Does How It Supports The Dawnstar Reliquary
Force Artifact - Canon A broad category for objects imbued with or connected to the Force. Canon examples include artifacts that contain memories or past personalities, enhance a Force-user's ability to use the Force, or hinder Force use. This is the main umbrella precedent for the Dawnstar Reliquary. It supports the crown as a Force-imbued object that can hold presence, preserve oath-bound resonance, and empower an attuned bearer through existing Force effects.
Dark Side Artifact - Canon A category for objects saturated with dark-side power, including masks, amulets, holocrons, scrolls, crystals, and other relics that may corrupt, influence, or empower those who interact with them. Useful as a contrast source. It shows that Star Wars artifacts can carry alignment, presence, corruption, and active supernatural influence. The Dawnstar Reliquary mirrors the artifact structure while replacing corruption with Light-side oath, protection, and release.
Mask of Lord Momin - Canon A Sith mask that preserved Lord Momin's lingering dark presence. It could corrupt, communicate through, and attempt to control or possess those who wore or interacted with it. Shows that a worn artifact can contain a spiritual presence and exert influence through a bearer. The Dawnstar Reliquary uses this as a dark mirror: it holds the Fallen through oath and sacred custody, then releases them through funerary rites rather than preserving a corrupting spirit.
Muur Talisman - Legends A Sith talisman tied to Karness Muur's spirit, dark-side corruption, transformation, and control. Useful as a boundary source. It proves spirit-bearing talismans exist in Star Wars, while helping define the Reliquary as the Light-side inversion: consent-based temporary custody, command empowerment, protection from profanation, and eventual release.
Holocron - Canon A Force-activated crystalline information-storage device used by Jedi and Sith to preserve teachings, knowledge, and guidance across generations. Supports the crystal-storage logic of the Reliquary. The Dawnstar crystal matrix can preserve oath-records, names, final vows, and spiritual resonance in the same broad family of Force-accessed crystalline repositories.
Holocron Gatekeeper - Legends A holocron's interactive guide or personality construct, often based on the creator or contributor. Some Sith gatekeepers were closer to preserved consciousness or dark-side presence. Supports the idea that Force artifacts can preserve personality-like impressions, guidance, and responsive presence. This helps justify oath-echoes having more weight than simple data while remaining bound to artifact function.
Noetikon - Legends A Jedi crystal-matrix relic infused with the wisdom, knowledge, and personality-imprints of Jedi Masters. One of the strongest Light-side-adjacent supports for the Reliquary. It shows a crystal matrix can hold personality-linked imprints and preserved guidance without needing to frame the object as Sith soul imprisonment.
Oneness - Canon A state of profound union with the Force. The source connects death with becoming one with the Cosmic Force, and includes examples of living Jedi being empowered, encouraged, or spiritually supported by the will, energy, or spirits of others, including departed Jedi. Supports the Reliquary's temporary custody, empowerment, and release cycle. The Fallen may be held through the Dawnstar Oath, lend their final strength and spiritual radiance to the bearer, and then be released onward into the Cosmic Force through Sunstar funerary rites.
Nightsister Crystal Ball - Canon A crystal object crafted by Mother Talzin through her unique Force connection, used for visions and locating individuals. Supports ritual crystal focuses in Force traditions outside ordinary Jedi and Sith practice. This helps justify the Dawnstar crystal as a sacred ritual receiver, focus, and conduit.
Kaiburr Crystal - Legends A powerful Force crystal that could augment a Force-sensitive near its original temple, heal injuries, empower users, and restore energy. Useful as a high-end crystal precedent for Force amplification, healing, empowerment, and renewed strength. The Reliquary remains much more limited, using this only to support the general idea of a crystal enhancing a bearer through the Force.
Valley of the Jedi - Legends A powerful Force nexus where many Jedi and Sith spirits were trapped, creating an immense concentration of Force energy. Useful as distant precedent that bound spirits can create or contribute to a Force reservoir. The Reliquary is the smaller, consent-based, temporary, Light-aligned version: it holds sworn Fallen briefly, uses their final strength, then releases them onward.



Source-to-Effect Clarification


Submission Term / Effect Linked Source Basis How It Applies To The Reliquary Limits / Clarification
Force-Imbued Relic Force Artifact, Force Artifact - Legends, Imbue Item, Force Weapon These sources support the Reliquary being a Force-imbued object that can hold presence, preserve oath-bound resonance, and serve as a focus for existing Force abilities. The crown requires a worthy and trained bearer for its fuller effects. It is not an independent Force-user and does not grant mastery to an untrained wearer.
Dawnstar Crystal Solari Crystal, Kasha Crystal, Pontite Crystal, Crystal Matrix / Noetikon, Nightsister Crystal Ball "Dawnstar crystal" is the Centerran ritual name for the Reliquary's linked crystal assembly. The Solari core supports Light-side alignment, kasha supports clarity and command focus, pontite supports resonance and transmission themes, and the crystal matrix supports storing presence, impressions, oath-records, and final vows. Dawnstar crystal is not a new mineral or new kyber type. It is a ritual name for a linked assembly of established crystal concepts.
Dawnstar Rite Many Shades of the Force, Cosmic Force, Transfer Force, Oneness, Force-meld The Dawnstar Rite is a voluntary military-funerary oath. A sworn Sunfire Legionnaire may bind their final vow to the Reliquary before battle, allowing the crown to gather their final life-resonance, parting radiance, and oath-energy if they fall within its command radius. The rite requires consent and oath-bound participation. Player-character involvement requires writer consent. It does not claim enemies, prisoners, civilians, or unwilling beings.
Temporary Sacred Custody Force Artifact, Mask of Lord Momin, Muur Talisman, Oneness, Cosmic Force, Force Harmony The Reliquary holds the Fallen briefly through oath and Light-side custody. Their final strength may empower the bearer before Sunstar funerary rites name, honor, and release them onward into the Cosmic Force. The binding is temporary, consent-based, and tied to release rites. It is not a permanent captive-spirit relic and cannot create undead servants or command the dead as conscious soldiers.
Oath-Echoes Psychometry / Force Echo, Crystal Matrix / Noetikon, Holocron Gatekeeper, Force-meld Oath-echoes are the bound final presence of sworn Fallen: courage, Duty, memory, pain, command trust, and battlefield resolve preserved in the crown's crystal matrix. Oath-echoes are limited by consent, command radius, available stored resonance, and the bearer's ability to endure them.
Morale / Courage / Resolve Force Valor, Battlemind, Battle Meditation Stored oath-echo resonance may be released through Force Valor-style courage, Battlemind-style focus, and Battle Meditation-style command cohesion, helping the bearer and nearby allies resist fear, panic, pain, and collapse. This supports morale and focus only within the relic's limited command radius. It is not automatic victory and not mind control.
Endurance / Pain Tolerance Enhance Attribute, Force Body, Battlemind, Transfer Force The crown may help a trained bearer push through exhaustion, shock, and pain by focusing the Fallen's offered life-resonance through existing endurance-related Force concepts. This causes strain. It does not make the bearer invulnerable, tireless, or immune to injury.
Battlefield Command Focus Battle Meditation, Battle Meditation - Legends, Force-meld, Kasha Crystal A trained Force-sensitive commander may use the Reliquary as a focus to help nearby troops maintain formation, share purpose, and resist battlefield panic. The crown does not grant Battle Meditation to an untrained wearer, does not control minds, and does not coordinate armies across planetary distances.
Protection From Fear / Corruption Force Harmony, Force Light, Many Shades of the Force, Solari Crystal The Reliquary may help the bearer and nearby allies resist fear, despair, corruption, and dark-side influence through Light-aligned harmony and the Solari core's Light-side nature. This is resistance, not immunity. Strong dark-side effects, Sith sorcery, trauma, or Force-nullification can still overcome or silence it.
Purifying Flare Force Light, Wall of Light, Solari Crystal When heavily charged, the crown may release a brief Force Light-style flare against dark-side residue, hostile spirits, Sith sorcery residue, and fear-based darkness. This consumes stored oath-echo resonance. It is brief, Light-aligned, and defensive or purifying in nature; it is not a reusable attack beam.
Sunward Ward Force Barrier, Protection Bubble The Reliquary may help create brief protective pressure, limited barriers, or warding around the bearer. The ward is short-lived, local, and defensive. It does not replace armor, shields, or battlefield cover.
Consecrated Rejection Solari Crystal, Force Light, Many Shades of the Force The Light-aligned Solari core and Force Light-style consecration justify the crown rejecting darksiders, corrupted bearers, oathbreakers, and malicious users with searing Light. This is a safeguard and weakness as much as a strength. A compromised rightful bearer may also be harmed by the crown.



Production Information


Manufacturer Matthew of Valendale; The Order of the Sunstar; Centerra's Sunfire Legion sanctified artificers
Affiliation Matthew of Valendale; Centerra, including its Sunfire Legion high command and sworn Sunfire Legionnaires; The Order of the Sunstar
Market Status Closed-Market
Model Crown of Command
Modularity Limited. Each diadem is shaped for a specific bearer, command helm, and station of authority.
Production Semi-Unique
Material Electrum, gold, silver, ceremonial enamel, durasteel microframe, songsteel accents, Krysteel / Kyber Iron ritual reinforcement, kyber crystal components, Solari crystal heartstone, Kaiburr crystal empowerment focus, Ankarres Sapphire Light-side rejection sliver, Amplification Kyber Crystal calibration lens for teh matrix, kasha crystal focusing facets, meditation crystal clarity focus, pontite crystal resonance splinters, Upari crystal decorative resonance accents, crystal matrix resonance lattice, Force-imbued ritual inscriptions



Special Features


Relic of High Command A small handful exist, each crafted for Centerra's highest sworn military leaders and consecrated through the rites of the Order of the Sunstar.
Dawnstar Crystal The "Dawnstar crystal" is not a new mineral or new kyber type. It is the Centerran ritual name for the Reliquary's consecrated crystal assembly: a Solari crystal heartstone supported by kasha crystal focusing facets, pontite crystal resonance splinters, and a crystal matrix lattice. The Solari core supports Light-side alignment and rejection of corrupted bearers; the kasha facets support clarity and command focus; the pontite splinters support battlefield resonance; and the crystal matrix preserves oath-bound presence, final vows, and stored Force-resonance until funerary release rites are completed.
Dawnstar Oath Before battle, a sworn Sunfire Legionnaire may speak the Dawnstar Oath before the Reliquary, its bearer, or a consecrated Sunfire banner: "My strength to Centerra, my blade to the living, my soul unto the Light; Should I fall beneath the Sunfire banner, let Duty bear my courage through the fight." This oath is voluntary and creates the ritual consent required for the Reliquary to receive the Legionnaire's final strength if they fall within its command radius.
Temporary Sacred Custody If an oath-sworn Legionnaire falls within the crown's command radius, the Reliquary may gather the body's last living Force-resonance, the soul's parting radiance, and the warrior's final vow into the Dawnstar crystal. The Fallen are held in temporary sacred custody, shielded within the crystal matrix until proper Sunstar funerary rites name, honor, and release them onward into the Cosmic Force.
Oath-Echo Gathering Oath-echoes are the bound final presence of consenting Fallen: courage, Duty, memory, pain, trust, and battlefield resolve preserved in the crown's crystal matrix. They are gathered through the Dawnstar Oath and later released through existing linked abilities such as Force Valor, Battlemind, Battle Meditation, Force-meld, Force Harmony, Force Light, Force Barrier, and Protection Bubble.
Light-Side Mirror Principle The Reliquary answers darker battlefield arts through Many Shades of the Force, consent, oath, sacred remembrance, and disciplined command. Rather than feeding on unwilling death, the crown receives a willing final service from sworn Legionnaires and turns that death-fed relic shape into a Light-aligned command rite.
Funerary Safeguard The rite denies hostile sorcerers a final cruelty. Because the body's remaining vitality and spiritual charge have already been offered into the Dawnstar crystal, the corpse is left spiritually spent, making it far harder for darksiders, Sith sorcerers, or hostile death-magick practitioners to profane the remains through corpse-puppetry, possession, or disgraceful animation.
Sunfire Command Mantle Stored oath-echoes may be released by a worthy commander to reinforce morale, endurance, pain tolerance, battlefield awareness, and Force Valor-style resolve. This release is a use of existing linked Force concepts, not a separate power.
Battlemind Conduit The diadem helps a trained bearer push through exhaustion, fear, shock, and pain by focusing gathered oath-echoes into Battlemind-style discipline. This causes strain and does not make the bearer immune to harm.
Battle Meditation Conduit A trained Force-sensitive commander may use the Reliquary as a focus for Battle Meditation, helping nearby troops maintain formation, resist panic, and act with shared purpose. The crown assists the command focus; it does not grant mastery to an untrained bearer and does not control minds.
Force-Meld Command Link Within a limited battlefield command radius, the Reliquary may help reinforce an existing Force-meld or command bond among consenting allies, allowing orders, courage, and warning impressions to pass with greater clarity.
Force Harmony Resonance Multiple oath-echoes may harmonize within the dawnstar crystal, helping protect the bearer and nearby allies from fear, corruption, despair, and dark-side influence through Force Harmony-style resonance. This is resistance, not immunity.
Consecrated Rejection The inner band burns corrupted, dark-side-influenced, malicious, or unworthy bearers with golden-white heat. This safeguard is tied to the Light-aligned Solari crystal core and Force Light-style consecration. The crown cannot be safely used as a trophy by the enemies it was created to resist.
Purifying Flare When heavily charged, the dawnstar crystal may release a brief Force Light-style flare against dark-side corruption, hostile spirits, Sith sorcery residue, and fear-based darkness. This consumes gathered oath-echo resonance and may leave the relic dim afterward. It is not a reusable attack beam.
Sunward Ward The relic may assist short-lived protective pressure, limited barriers, and warding around the bearer through Force Barrier and Protection Bubble-style effects. These wards are brief, local, and defensive.
Command Helm Integration The diadem may be worn openly or locked into a Sunfire Legion command helm, allowing the relic to serve as both sacred crown and battlefield command focus.
Funerary Record The inner band may illuminate with symbolic oath-runes representing the Fallen whose final resonance empowered it. After release rites, the runes fade into ceremonial memory, leaving the names to be recited by Sunstar priests and surviving commanders.



Strengths


Gathered Souls, Gathered Power The Dawnstar Reliquary imbues its wearer with stored Force-resonance, magnifying the bearer's command presence, endurance, protective warding, and Force-channeled power according to the amount of willing oath-energy and souls held within the Dawnstar crystal. The more sworn Fallen it carries, the brighter and heavier its power becomes, until that gathered resonance is spent, released, or silenced.



Weaknesses


Force-Null Silence The Reliquary does not function in Force-null places or under Force-suppression effects. Ysalamiri fields, voidstone, severing effects, Force-nullification, and similar interference can silence the Dawnstar crystal entirely, preventing it from gathering, holding, magnifying, or releasing oath-energy. In such conditions, the diadem becomes little more than a ceremonial crown until its connection to the Force is restored.



Description


The Dawnstar Reliquary is one of Centerra's highest military relics, a sacred command diadem worn by Sunfire Legion leaders in battle. Only a small handful exist, each overseen by Matthew of Valendale and consecrated through the rites of the Order of the Sunstar for use by Centerra's sworn high command.

At its brow rests the Dawnstar crystal, a consecrated assembly of Solari crystal, kasha crystal, pontite crystal, and crystal matrix lattice prepared as a Force-imbued artifact. To Centerran eyes it is a small captured sunrise: gold held beneath glass, a bright wound of vow-light set above the brow. In practical terms, it is the crown's storage focus, alignment lens, command conduit, and temporary funerary vessel.

Before battle, a sworn Sunfire Legionnaire may accept the Dawnstar Rite and speak the Dawnstar Oath before the Reliquary, its bearer, or a consecrated Sunfire banner:

My strength to Centerra, my blade to the living, my soul unto the Light;
Should I fall beneath the Sunfire banner, let Duty bear my courage through the fight.

Through that oath, the Legionnaire willingly binds their final vow to the Dawnstar crystal. The rite creates a deliberate Force-bond between the Legionnaire, the Reliquary, and the sworn defense of Centerra. If the Legionnaire falls within the crown's command radius, the ritual gathers the body's last living Force-resonance, the soul's parting radiance, and the warrior's final vow into the crown's crystal matrix. The Fallen are held in temporary sacred custody, shielded within the Reliquary until proper Sunstar funerary rites release them onward into the Cosmic Force.

This binding is literal, but limited. It binds the Legionnaire's departing spirit and final oath-echo to the Reliquary for a short sacred purpose, rather than preserving them as a permanent resident or captive servant. The oath-echo carries courage, Duty, memory, pain, and battlefield resolve: the last strength the Fallen willingly gave for the living. While held, that strength may be released through the bearer as command presence, endurance, morale, Light-side resistance, and protective warding.

The rite also serves as a funerary safeguard. Because the body's remaining vitality and spiritual charge have already been ritually offered into the Dawnstar crystal, the corpse is left spiritually spent, making it far harder for darksiders, Sith sorcerers, or hostile death-magick practitioners to profane the remains through corpse-puppetry, possession, or disgraceful animation. The Fallen give their last strength to Centerra before any enemy can twist it into mockery.

When the bearer calls upon the crown, those oath-echoes may be released through existing Light-aligned Force abilities. They can strengthen Force Valor-style courage, Battlemind-style endurance, Battle Meditation command focus, Force-meld cohesion, Force Harmony protection, Force Light purification, or brief defensive warding through Force Barrier and Protection Bubble principles. The crown does not invent these abilities, grant mastery of them, or act on its own. It receives consent, protects the Fallen, preserves their final strength, and gives a trained commander a sacred focus through which to release that gathered vow.

The Dawnstar is loyal to the Light. A corrupted bearer, darksider, oathbreaker, or malicious wielder is met with searing golden-white heat from the inner band. To the worthy, it is a halo of command. To the unworthy, it is a brand.

The Reliquary is most often worn at moments when a line is close to breaking: when banners sag beneath ash, when medics kneel in blood-dark mud, when command channels fill with static and prayer. Then the bearer may bow their head, speak the names of the Fallen, and let the Dawnstar answer. For a breath, the troops around them feel they are not alone. The lost do not return as soldiers, and the dead do not obey as servants. Yet their last courage rises like heat from sun-warmed stone, enough to steady a hand, lift a shield, and hold the line one moment longer.

After battle, the crown is brought before Sunstar priests. The names of the Fallen are recited. Their oath-runes fade from the inner band. Their final strength, already spent in service to the living, is honored and released. The Reliquary is cleansed, realigned, and made quiet again, until Centerra's banners call for it once more.

Every Sunfire Legionnaire knows the oath: should they fall beneath the banner, their soul belongs to the Light, but their last courage belongs to Centerra.



First, this needs to be made clear: the Factory and the Codex are not allowed to be used to create new Force Powers. The way this submission is written, it reads as an attempt to skirt the rules with elaborate justifications. Subs like this are very difficult to approve of, and are highly susceptible to intense scrutiny, and are often denied if violations of the rules cannot be fixed easily.

Moving on to fixes:

#1) The "lightside mirror principle" is poorly explained. Within the submission, this phrase is attributed to the Many Shades Of The Force. However the Wookiepedia entry describes its function as "Converting a usually dark or light power to being neutral" which implies a more centralizing gimmick. This directly disagrees with the text as written in the submission. There is no mention of inversion or reversal in the Wookiepedia, which the word "mirror" seems to imply. The submission will either have to A) adhere to the Wookiepedia text as written, or B) explore an alternative method for "mirroring" a dark side power into a lightside power.

#2) Please provide a solid existing example of a non-force sensitive soldier's oath being used to grant an imbued object the ability to charge itself with the souls of the unconscious dead. Sometimes things can be extrapolated, but this is quite a stretch, as none of the links that have been provided explicitly exhibit vows being used to achieve this feat. If this explanation would require multiple Wookiepedia links being pieced together with a lengthy explanation of how the different components would fit together, then it is a theoretical extrapolation, and not an existing Force Ability. If a solid example cannot be found, this feature needs to be removed or changed.

Friendly Alternative Suggestion: However, this could work is if the legionaries are Force Trained to retain enough consciousness after death to fulfill their oaths when the crown commands them. This is seen in the Rise of Skywalker when Rey fights Palpatine. Even a semi-conscious, post mortem fullfilment of vows would be sufficient to this end. However, if they are not Force Sensitive, and Force Trained, they cannot consciously feed the crown with their dead souls, oath magic or otherwise. I see that you currently have an unreviewed submission for the legionnaires in the codex, so, you could work this feature in, but that is only a suggested fix.

Also, on that note, the legionnaires themselves do appear to be a critical component to the functionality of this submission. Please provide a link to the codex entry that pertains to these characters in all of the appropriate fields.

On to #3:
The Reliquary consumes the Fallen's body in full. Their last living vitality and mortal remains are transmuted into consecrated Force-energy,
Please provide positive evidence of a physical body being converted into usable Force Energy in established Star Wars media. Otherwise, remove that feature. The Vitality Transfer part is fine, but this needs evidence of the conversion of physical matter to force energy.

#4 The strengths section needs to be broken down into multiple points, and then balanced with appropriate weaknesses. This submission has powerful offensive capabilities, defensive capabilities, support capabilities, denies access to dark side users, and saves corpses from the fate of being reanimated. That's 5 strengths, minimum.

Braze Braze
 
First, this needs to be made clear: the Factory and the Codex are not allowed to be used to create new Force Powers. The way this submission is written, it reads as an attempt to skirt the rules with elaborate justifications. Subs like this are very difficult to approve of, and are highly susceptible to intense scrutiny, and are often denied if violations of the rules cannot be fixed easily.

Thank you for clarifying the concern.

I do want to push back gently on one point: I am not attempting to skirt the rules or create a new Force Power through elaborate wording. My intent was to submit a Force Artifact with a specific, limited function, supported by existing artifact, spirit-binding, life-force, and Force-energy precedents in canon / Legends.

If the submission currently reads otherwise, then that is a clarity issue I am willing to fix.

I believe part of the issue may be that I am understanding these existing Force-artifact and spirit-binding precedents differently than they are coming across in the submission. My intent was not to invent a new teachable Force Power, but to apply existing concepts through a limited Force Artifact framework.

The oath is intended as consent, ritual framing, and limitation. It is not meant to create an unsupported power by itself.

I will revise the language to make the distinction clearer: this is an artifact-based effect, grounded in existing Star Wars examples of Force artifacts, spirit-bearing relics, life-force harvesting, and soul-binding effects, with strict limits on consent, range, bearer action, and counterplay.

I am happy to add more direct precedent links and clarify the mechanics, but I do want the core function of the relic understood correctly before I revise it further.


#1) The "lightside mirror principle" is poorly explained. Within the submission, this phrase is attributed to the Many Shades Of The Force. However the Wookiepedia entry describes its function as "Converting a usually dark or light power to being neutral" which implies a more centralizing gimmick. This directly disagrees with the text as written in the submission. There is no mention of inversion or reversal in the Wookiepedia, which the word "mirror" seems to imply. The submission will either have to A) adhere to the Wookiepedia text as written, or B) explore an alternative method for "mirroring" a dark side power into a lightside power.

I understand the concern with the word "mirror," and I can change that terminology if it is causing confusion.

However, I do want to be direct: the Many Shades of the Force source is relevant to why I cited it. The entry states that Many Shades of the Force allowed a Force-user to utilize an ability unique to the light or dark side, such as Force Light, by viewing the Force as many shades of a rainbow rather than a strict division of good and evil.

That is the relevant part of the source.

I am not claiming the Wookieepedia page uses the exact phrase "Light-Side Mirror Principle." That is my submission's terminology, and I can rename it. But the source does support the broader idea that side-associated Force abilities can be approached outside their usual light/dark framing.

To make this clearer, I can revise the section so it says "Many Shades Interpretive Principle" or "Many Shades Neutralization Principle" instead of "Light-Side Mirror Principle." I can also clarify that Many Shades is being used for the neutral / nonbinary Force approach, while the Light-aligned consecration, rejection, and purification aspects are supported separately through Force Light, Solari crystal themes, and Sunstar rites in roleplay and story.


#2) Please provide a solid existing example of a non-force sensitive soldier's oath being used to grant an imbued object the ability to charge itself with the souls of the unconscious dead. Sometimes things can be extrapolated, but this is quite a stretch, as none of the links that have been provided explicitly exhibit vows being used to achieve this feat. If this explanation would require multiple Wookiepedia links being pieced together with a lengthy explanation of how the different components would fit together, then it is a theoretical extrapolation, and not an existing Force Ability. If a solid example cannot be found, this feature needs to be removed or changed.

For #2, I think the phrasing may be narrowing the mechanic in a way I did not intend.

I am not claiming that a non-Force-sensitive soldier's oath, by itself, grants an object a new Force ability. The Dawnstar Oath is not meant to be the source of the artifact's power. It is meant to establish consent, scope, and limitation: who can be affected, under what circumstances, and why the Reliquary does not apply to enemies, prisoners, civilians, unwilling NPCs, or player characters without writer consent.

The Force-artifact function itself is meant to be grounded in existing examples of Force artifacts, devices, creatures, and rituals that draw in, store, bind, or use life-force, souls, spirits, life-energy, knowledge, or Force-energy.

The clearest examples I can add are:

  • Force Harvester — an ancient Sith artifact used as a power source for the Dark Reaper. The page states that it absorbed the Force from living things and was used as a power source. It also describes the device draining the Living Force from anyone it contacted within a small area, producing concentrated dark-side energy used to power the Dark Reaper.
  • Leviathan — a Legends Sithspawn / dark-side-created creature listed with the ability to absorb life-energy and spirits, with its diet given as the life-energy of other beings. The page describes Leviathans as battlefield weapons that drew the life energies of enemy soldiers into blister traps, stored the life energies of prey, absorbed a victim's life force and knowledge, and allowed absorbed knowledge and intelligence to be accessed by whoever controlled them.
  • Thought Bomb — an ancient ritual that annihilated Force-sensitive beings caught within its blast radius and absorbed their fragmented souls into a contained vortex / orb.

Those are not presented as Light-side examples, and I am not claiming the Reliquary is identical to any of them. They are cited as direct precedent that Star Wars already contains Force-based artifacts, rituals, creatures, and vessels capable of absorbing, storing, binding, or using life-force, souls, spirits, life-energy, knowledge, or Force-energy in a contained form.

The Reliquary is intended as a limited, consent-based, Force Artifact expression of that existing category, not a new teachable Force Power.

The Dawnstar Oath does not create the power. It frames and limits the use of a Force Artifact effect that already exists within the Reliquary.

In other words: the Reliquary is the thing with the Force-artifact function. The oath is the cultural, spiritual, and consent-based limitation that determines who may be gathered by it in roleplay.

The sworn Legionnaires believe the oath is required, and the Order of the Sunstar treats it as sacred law, but mechanically the oath is not what creates the power. It is the rite that marks consent, allegiance, and scope for an artifact effect grounded separately in Force Artifact, spirit-binding, life-force harvesting, Leviathan-style life-energy storage, and soul-storage precedents.

I can rework this explanation in the submission so that distinction is clearer.


Also, on that note, the legionnaires themselves do appear to be a critical component to the functionality of this submission. Please provide a link to the codex entry that pertains to these characters in all of the appropriate fields.

I understand the request, and I can add the relevant individual unit links in the appropriate places.

The relevant existing entries are:

Sunfire Dragon-KnightsSunfire Legion dragon-rider / elite mounted forces.
Sunfire LegionnairesStandard Sunfire Legion soldiers / line infantry.

That said, I want to clarify that these units are not intended to be a mechanical source of the Reliquary's function. They do not grant the crown its power, and they are not being used to create a new Force ability.

The Reliquary's function comes from the Force Artifact itself and from the trained Force-sensitive bearer actively invoking it in play. The Legionnaires only define the consenting, oath-sworn military group the artifact may be used upon.

I can add these links to the Primary Source, Affiliation, and any sections that reference sworn Sunfire Legionnaires / Dragon-Knights, but I am not currently submitting the entire Sunfire Legion as one overarching military organization. The Legion is being built in pieces, and these are the relevant linked unit entries that exist right now.


On to #3:
Please provide positive evidence of a physical body being converted into usable Force Energy in established Star Wars media. Otherwise, remove that feature. The Vitality Transfer part is fine, but this needs evidence of the conversion of physical matter to force energy.

#4 The strengths section needs to be broken down into multiple points, and then balanced with appropriate weaknesses. This submission has powerful offensive capabilities, defensive capabilities, support capabilities, denies access to dark side users, and saves corpses from the fate of being reanimated. That's 5 strengths, minimum.

For #3, understood.

I can clarify the wording here. The intended soul-battery function is not meant to rely on ordinary physical matter becoming Force-energy. The stronger precedent is for life-force, Force-energy, souls, spirits, and essence being harvested, bound, contained, or used as a power source.

I will revise the line so it no longer claims that the Fallen's physical body / mortal remains are directly transmuted into usable Force-energy.

The Reliquary's stored charge will instead come from the Fallen's final life-force, Force-resonance, soul, spirit, or oath-bound essence. The physical corpse-denial detail will be removed from the submission and handled separately through narrative roleplay, or character action. It will not be presented as the fuel source for the crown.

For #4, understood.

I likely over-simplified the Strengths and Weaknesses section after expanding the rest of the submission.

I originally had a fuller list of strengths and weaknesses, but I cut it down because the Source-to-Effect table and Description already explain much of the function. I understand now that the balance needs to be visible at a glance inside the Strengths and Weaknesses section itself.

I can restore the most important points without simply retreading every piece of old ground.

The revised strengths will separate the Reliquary's major functions:

  • Soul-battery storage
  • Battlefield command enhancement
  • Protective warding
  • Light-side purification / rejection

The revised weaknesses will directly balance those functions with:

  • Consent limits
  • Active invocation by a trained bearer
  • Force-null vulnerability
  • Required training
  • Limited radius
  • Sacred maintenance

I will update the Strengths and Weaknesses section accordingly so the balance is clearer.

Admiral Burtch Admiral Burtch Please tag me once you have had a chance to review this, and I can begin making the needed adjustments.
 
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Admiral Burtch

Retired old admiral
The oath is intended as consent, ritual framing, and limitation. It is not meant to create an unsupported power by itself.
this is an artifact-based effect, grounded in existing Star Wars examples of Force artifacts, spirit-bearing relics, life-force harvesting, and soul-binding effects, with strict limits on consent, range, bearer action, and counterplay.

I'm still not clear on this point, can you provide a canon example of an artifact which is able to selectively distinguish between consenting and non-consenting dead non-force users who haven't managed to retain their identity?

I like the concept, and I want this to pass. But the whole thing hinges on that particular mechanism. Without a single, clear example of that ability in established lore, then I can't say that this submission follows the rules.

For now, moving on.

To make this clearer, I can revise the section so it says "Many Shades Interpretive Principle" or "Many Shades Neutralization Principle" instead of "Light-Side Mirror Principle." I can also clarify that Many Shades is being used for the neutral / nonbinary Force approach, while the Light-aligned consecration, rejection, and purification aspects are supported separately through Force Light, Solari crystal themes, and Sunstar rites in roleplay and story.
This is good. As long as the Many Shades is not being portrayed as a mechanism to repolarize dark side powers into lightside abilities, then it's not too much of a stretch. Of course, please be careful not to give the crystals any non-pre-existing force properties in the process, but I think you got this.

I understand the request, and I can add the relevant individual unit links in the appropriate places.

The relevant existing entries are:

Sunfire Dragon-KnightsSunfire Legion dragon-rider / elite mounted forces.
Sunfire LegionnairesStandard Sunfire Legion soldiers / line infantry.

That said, I want to clarify that these units are not intended to be a mechanical source of the Reliquary's function. They do not grant the crown its power, and they are not being used to create a new Force ability.

The Reliquary's function comes from the Force Artifact itself and from the trained Force-sensitive bearer actively invoking it in play. The Legionnaires only define the consenting, oath-sworn military group the artifact may be used upon.

I can add these links to the Primary Source, Affiliation, and any sections that reference sworn Sunfire Legionnaires / Dragon-Knights, but I am not currently submitting the entire Sunfire Legion as one overarching military organization. The Legion is being built in pieces, and these are the relevant linked unit entries that exist right now.
As long as you have them linked somewhere that's perfect, thanks. As the submission is written, their souls appear to supply the artifact with energy, courage, knowledge, etc. This is perfectly acceptable, but I read it as a component that justifies a high degree of functionality for the device, which requires a link is all. Thank you.

For #3, understood.

I can clarify the wording here. The intended soul-battery function is not meant to rely on ordinary physical matter becoming Force-energy. The stronger precedent is for life-force, Force-energy, souls, spirits, and essence being harvested, bound, contained, or used as a power source.

I will revise the line so it no longer claims that the Fallen's physical body / mortal remains are directly transmuted into usable Force-energy.

The Reliquary's stored charge will instead come from the Fallen's final life-force, Force-resonance, soul, spirit, or oath-bound essence. The physical corpse-denial detail will be removed from the submission and handled separately through narrative roleplay, or character action. It will not be presented as the fuel source for the crown.

For #4, understood.

I likely over-simplified the Strengths and Weaknesses section after expanding the rest of the submission.

I originally had a fuller list of strengths and weaknesses, but I cut it down because the Source-to-Effect table and Description already explain much of the function. I understand now that the balance needs to be visible at a glance inside the Strengths and Weaknesses section itself.

I can restore the most important points without simply retreading every piece of old ground.

The revised strengths will separate the Reliquary's major functions:

  • Soul-battery storage
  • Battlefield command enhancement
  • Protective warding
  • Light-side purification / rejection

The revised weaknesses will directly balance those functions with:

  • Consent limits
  • Active invocation by a trained bearer
  • Force-null vulnerability
  • Required training
  • Limited radius
  • Sacred maintenance

I will update the Strengths and Weaknesses section accordingly so the balance is clearer.
That's perfect, thank you.

Alrighty, tag me when you're ready Braze Braze
 
I'm still not clear on this point, can you provide a canon example of an artifact which is able to selectively distinguish between consenting and non-consenting dead non-force users who haven't managed to retain their identity?

I like the concept, and I want this to pass. But the whole thing hinges on that particular mechanism. Without a single, clear example of that ability in established lore, then I can't say that this submission follows the rules.

For now, moving on.
I think I may have explained the intent poorly.

This is included to be a limitation with an in character narrative 'reason' to support site rules.

The limitation is not meant to imply the artifact has a special canon power to scan the dead and sort them by consent. The point is that the artifact does not get to make broad claims over the dead at all.

It cannot automatically take, bind, summon, claim, or use random souls, NPC souls, PC souls, or the dead belonging to another writer/faction. That clause was included specifically to avoid auto-hitting or making sweeping assumptions about characters and NPCs I do not control.

In practice, the artifact would only function where writer permission, prior IC consent, or my own controlled lore/NPCs are involved. If there is no permission or clear ownership, the artifact simply does nothing. It does not force an outcome, does not confirm spiritual possession, and does not decide the fate of anyone else's dead.

So the limitation can be rewritten less as "the artifact distinguishes consenting souls" and more as: the artifact has no authority over unwilling, unowned, opposing, or permissionless souls. Any interaction requires writer consent or controlled NPC material, otherwise the effect fails.

I could perhaps just make this a weakness and move it to there to be better clarified if that helps?

No Auto-Hit Clause:The artifact cannot automatically claim, bind, summon, consume, possess, command, or draw power from PCs, opposing NPCs, unclaimed NPC populations, faction-owned dead, or any soul/spiritual remnant outside the submitter's control. Any use involving another writer's character, NPCs, culture, dead, spirits, or lore requires that writer's permission. Without permission, the artifact produces no effect.

This item does not determine the fate of the dead, override another writer's agency, or make sweeping assumptions about souls beyond the submitter's own controlled material. At most, it may interact with pre-approved spirits, willingly offered echoes, self-contained lore elements, or NPCs directly controlled by the submitter.


Admiral Burtch Admiral Burtch Does this clear things up any? If not I can just remove mention of it if that helps?
 
Alternatively...

I think I can revise the mechanism so it no longer depends on the artifact distinguishing consenting and non-consenting dead.

Rather than the artifact scanning souls, judging consent, or making broad claims over the dead, the artifact would only function through a prepared anchor: an Alkahest mark, oath-token, rune-plate, reliquary shard, crystal seal, or similar paired object intentionally connected to the artifact before use.

The oath itself is not the trigger. The oath is simply the ceremony where the anchor is granted, marked, or consecrated. The actual mechanism is the prepared mark or paired object.

There is precedent for this kind of object-based and symbol-based Force working. Totem magic supports the use of physical objects as ritual focuses for the Force. Imbue item supports objects, armor, weapons, and clothing being permanently imbued with Force effects. Force weapon supports Force energy being channeled into physical objects. Sith runes support inscribed symbols producing Force effects through ritual structure.

For the Light-aligned framing, this would be treated as Arcanistry: a structured working shaped through wards, consecration, sigils, arrays, boundaries, and protective intent. The Alkahest side prepares or imbues the physical anchor; the Arcanistry side defines what the anchor permits, denies, carries, or refuses.

So the artifact would not be making broad claims over the dead. It would only respond to its own prepared anchor. If there is no Alkahest mark, no paired token, no rune-plate, no prior IC setup, or no explicit writer permission, then the artifact produces no effect. It cannot create consent after death, cannot scan the dead for consent, cannot claim unowned NPCs, cannot affect PCs without permission, and cannot make sweeping assumptions over souls or spiritual remnants outside my control.

Paired Anchor Limitation:
This artifact cannot search for, sort, claim, bind, consume, command, summon, or judge souls. It does not detect consent among the dead and cannot affect PCs, opposing NPCs, faction-owned dead, unclaimed NPC populations, or spiritual remnants outside the submitter's control.

The artifact only functions through a prepared paired anchor: an Alkahest mark, oath-token, rune-plate, reliquary shard, crystal seal, tattoo, or other ritual focus intentionally connected to the artifact through prior IC setup or explicit writer permission.

The oath ceremony may be when the anchor is granted, but the oath itself is not the trigger. The prepared anchor is the limitation and access point.

Without a valid anchor , the artifact cannot create a connection after death, and cannot pull from anyone or anything that was not already linked by controlled, permission-based setup.
 
Braze Braze

I'll be taking over this submission. It all looks good, I just have one query for you:

The Reliquary preserves the final presence of Fallen Sunfire Legionnaires within its crystal matrix: courage, Duty, memory, pain, trust, and battlefield resolve. Their final resonance is gathered into the crown for preservation during battle. Afterward, any surviving member of the Order of the Sunstar may perform the Sunstar release ceremony, honor the Fallen by name, and release the gathered spirits onward into the Cosmic Force.

How does the reliquary distinguish between Fallen Sunfire Legionnaires and other deceased on a battlefield?
 
Braze Braze

I'll be taking over this submission. It all looks good, I just have one query for you:



How does the reliquary distinguish between Fallen Sunfire Legionnaires and other deceased on a battlefield?
John Locke John Locke
That is fair. Would the following clarification address the concern?

Would it be acceptable for the trained bearer to actively choose who the Reliquary attempts to gather from, so long as OOC writer permission still applies?

If that is not acceptable, would this version work instead?

OOC, the writer controlling the character, NPCs, or allied dead determines whether the Reliquary can interact with them.

IC, the Reliquary recognizes Fallen Sunfire Legionnaires through a Dawnstar service-token: a marked charm, rune-plate, crystal shard, armor seal, or similar focus carried by the Legionnaire and ritually linked to the crown before battle. The crown responds to that prior connection rather than identifying random dead on the battlefield.

For allied dead, the same standard applies: writer permission and/or prior IC setup with a linked marker.

I also found a possible precedent for paired objects working through the Force: Jori Daragon's amulet and Gav Daragon's Sith amulet. They were a pair of coupled amulets connected to one another, allowing one amulet to respond to the other and giving Gav a way to seek Jori through that link.

Would this be acceptable as precedent for the Reliquary and Dawnstar service-tokens functioning as paired objects: the crown as the central relic, and each token as a smaller linked focus carried by a Legionnaire?

Relevant links:

If this works, should I add the clarification as a Special Feature, a Weakness, or both?
 

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